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Guess I have to help my book rating out a bit. Well, if anyone reads this, then I can only say that you should probably read this book and see it yourself if this book would be to your liking. I was tempted to delete the bad reviews but decided to leave it there since I respect freedom of speech. You all can love or hate my fanfic as much as you want; I don't mind lol.
I agree with most of the other people here. Sure you can argue the fact it's the alternate universe stuff or more. it's still a clone. see if it was in another world just summon them. but it's the main world why copy? sure you give them new names and empower them more, but what's the need for cloning just take the original. like someone said here it's gonna be really weird just walking around and see issei with rias and The Mc with his rias clone. its pointless and basically ntr. while not all the way ntr it's Still pointless. I'm giving three stars for effort
Simplemente se coge a clones que patetico 🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄
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r textos com a câmera It started more or less, then it gets better, just give it a chance. And the clones have their own personality, they are more than just dolls, and can even become stronger.
Won't even say much other than Pathetic. He is saying the MC ain't simp but I say is that MC is just too pathetic and has to make do with clones of the orginal girls. what is the point of having the bunch clones , an imitation will always be an imitation. I don't know what this dude is smoking but he is trying to justify MC having a harem of inferior clones to Multiversal theory. He says it's wish fulfillment but I don't understand what is so fulfilling about surrounding yourself with cheap imitation of real life woman who you can't get thus make do with clones like pathetic dude who clones his crush knowing he has zero chance with her.
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>He will collect copy of girls. ... That's sounds so beta, so weak.... P. s. So, original girls would just go around to issei and other dudes, right? How. is this feel seeing you girlfriends. used by other guys, knowing that what you have is just immitation?
Ok I'll be real here, the concept of cloning is cool and all, but obviously the people will hate that due to the facts that well, it's clones of original people of the story, don't know why you are going with that. You could've gone with the summoning other anime girls from other fiction than cloning. But I will say, i like your take on this, but it just feels not right to other people (I'll stop yapping now)
Guess I have to help my book rating out a bit. Well, if anyone reads this, then I can only say that you should probably read this book and see it yourself if this book would be to your liking. I was tempted to delete the bad reviews but decided to leave it there since I respect freedom of speech. You all can love or hate my fanfic as much as you want; I don't mind lol.
I agree with most of the other people here. Sure you can argue the fact it's the alternate universe stuff or more. it's still a clone. see if it was in another world just summon them. but it's the main world why copy? sure you give them new names and empower them more, but what's the need for cloning just take the original. like someone said here it's gonna be really weird just walking around and see issei with rias and The Mc with his rias clone. its pointless and basically ntr. while not all the way ntr it's Still pointless. I'm giving three stars for effort
Simplemente se coge a clones que patetico 🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄
ネタバレを明かす r textos com a câmera It started more or less, then it gets better, just give it a chance. And the clones have their own personality, they are more than just dolls, and can even become stronger.
Won't even say much other than Pathetic. He is saying the MC ain't simp but I say is that MC is just too pathetic and has to make do with clones of the orginal girls. what is the point of having the bunch clones , an imitation will always be an imitation. I don't know what this dude is smoking but he is trying to justify MC having a harem of inferior clones to Multiversal theory. He says it's wish fulfillment but I don't understand what is so fulfilling about surrounding yourself with cheap imitation of real life woman who you can't get thus make do with clones like pathetic dude who clones his crush knowing he has zero chance with her.
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>He will collect copy of girls. ... That's sounds so beta, so weak.... P. s. So, original girls would just go around to issei and other dudes, right? How. is this feel seeing you girlfriends. used by other guys, knowing that what you have is just immitation?
Ok I'll be real here, the concept of cloning is cool and all, but obviously the people will hate that due to the facts that well, it's clones of original people of the story, don't know why you are going with that. You could've gone with the summoning other anime girls from other fiction than cloning. But I will say, i like your take on this, but it just feels not right to other people (I'll stop yapping now)