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Hello, I am creating a platform for authors and would love for you to join. There is a 70% compensation for authors from all revenue and a contest at my webpage -> (Zen ithnovels), along with a discord at the bottom of the webpage. I hope to see you there!
I like the silliness, it makes me giggle. Combined with the system messages that aren't complicated to read and the writing style, this is a pretty fun read. I really like the main character.
Ooh, I like the clean looking writing style. Very good, since the system stats don't slap my face when I read haha! Development seemed to be good so far, and I hope that it doesn't end up generic. FF Also, I fear author might edge us later with chapter releases TT
Shameless pug! In the past months I've been working on another story that is taking forever to review/rewrite. And even before that, I always wanted a system/monster evo novel. I hope you guys enjoy it. I do have a lot of fun while writing this story. Thank you all for reading. <3
I liked what I read. A mix of fun and serious, with some pang in the feels. (Why did it have to be Bunbun?) Really anticipating new chapters.
Really liking the story, it's not a power fantasy where MC is a Mary Sue, there's struggles and stakes. The MC is super loveable, I can't help but rooting for her. The writing quality is good, I don't think I saw any error while reading. Honestly, give it a try.
Hello, I am creating a platform for authors and would love for you to join. There is a 70% compensation for authors from all revenue and a contest at my webpage -> (Zen ithnovels), along with a discord at the bottom of the webpage. I hope to see you there!
I like the silliness, it makes me giggle. Combined with the system messages that aren't complicated to read and the writing style, this is a pretty fun read. I really like the main character.
Ooh, I like the clean looking writing style. Very good, since the system stats don't slap my face when I read haha! Development seemed to be good so far, and I hope that it doesn't end up generic. FF Also, I fear author might edge us later with chapter releases TT
Shameless pug! In the past months I've been working on another story that is taking forever to review/rewrite. And even before that, I always wanted a system/monster evo novel. I hope you guys enjoy it. I do have a lot of fun while writing this story. Thank you all for reading. <3
I liked what I read. A mix of fun and serious, with some pang in the feels. (Why did it have to be Bunbun?) Really anticipating new chapters.
Really liking the story, it's not a power fantasy where MC is a Mary Sue, there's struggles and stakes. The MC is super loveable, I can't help but rooting for her. The writing quality is good, I don't think I saw any error while reading. Honestly, give it a try.