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The idea is great! But the execution is terrible ! Where should the author rush the plot so much ? where are the things that can be bought in the system? why not explain the numbers in the statistics? How does she feel about family in general? Why doesn't she buy a cloning skill? Why would a little girl leave her family? Why doesn't she help John? And Arya? Why won't she help change the north? ! In short, the idea is great, but the author of the ppts is in such a hurry, the ppts is in such a hurry and nothing is really explained
The idea is great! But the execution is terrible ! Where should the author rush the plot so much ? where are the things that can be bought in the system? why not explain the numbers in the statistics? How does she feel about family in general? Why doesn't she buy a cloning skill? Why would a little girl leave her family? Why doesn't she help John? And Arya? Why won't she help change the north? ! In short, the idea is great, but the author of the ppts is in such a hurry, the ppts is in such a hurry and nothing is really explained