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deserving of a 5 Star rating. but maybe it's just my taste, it has all that I have been looking for.
Author I was enjoying the story but then there are some problems 1. MC is an idiot. You say he is smart, can sense negative intent, or people who have bad feelings but all along the emperor, jim, rain ...these people were out to screw him over but what did he do? be cautious nope. Took a potion from someone and drank without any worries. He even sensed the emperor didnt like him so why didnt he trust his intuition 2. He has been poisoned once but he literally drank something and got roofied from a potion again. He doesnt trust Athena so why not be cautious. It just seems so stupid. You would think he would be cautious at this point but 3. I mean the way you are making his harem is so weird. I mean you give us such a wholesome happy marriage feel with Liliana and the kids ....makes you feel like he doesnt need harem then bam he gets roofed and r*ped by dragon empress. I mean thats a effed up way to introduce harem members. If he pursued them his self and took on members it would be better but like this its kind of effed up. 4. I wish you had introduced some lifespan increases with power etc. I mean since demons, dragons elves etc live so long and humans lifespan is probably a 100 at most or so. I was hoping it said he has chance to become God realm so maybe can be immortal and then help the harem members, kids etc be immortal too possibly 5. MC is annoying. I mean he said he would get revenge on emperor, the prime minister, rain etc but eventhough rain is the one who poisoned him he is probably her childhood crush. Let me guess he will forgive her when he finds out? I mean its so stupid since he really wouldve died if not for a coincidence due to her poison. He just seems like too much of a idealistic Like he didnt want to get angry at Dragon empress because he needs their support He is constantly being pushed around by people and lead around. He is stronger then her but he is scared since she tried to r*pe him. Well then if he is then why did he like an idiot send Liliana out of meeting and got roofied, kidnapped and r*ped. I mean you say all this about Mc being smart but isnt he an idiot. I mean nothing needs to be hidden from Liliana, but he sends her out. It makes no sense he makes such stupid decisions when you know the other person is crazy, tried to r*pe you in the past and what they have done in the past yet you get surprised when they do same thing again? just few words and you start getting tricked its absurd
I really like this book, MC's interaction with his daughters is so wholesome it feels so heartwarming can anyone recommend something similar? oh, and author I hope you don't drop this masterpiece
as i read the reviews its pretty good and I'm gonna give it 5star i will read it if got 500 chapters keep up the good work author 🥰
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Read all the free chapters. Story looks promising. I wonder why webnovel changed the way to unlock chapters again.. why no more Free pass like the previous times? :( This is why i dont like to read on webnovel..
I didn't expect this novel to be good. Is there a discord link? The one in the synopsis is not working
I must say, I wasn't expecting this when I first started reading it. but as I read deeper I was astonished at how amazing it is
Dear Author. This is something new from my perspective and I like it a lot. The 3 little girls are awesome Liliana is loveable. The only concern for me is that I started because of the plot and harem tag. But there is no harem yet. We have Lyra, the Saintess, Dragon Empress, Bow hero and no real progress I hope you are a man of your word or tag 😂 and we need all the good girl. So I would like to thank your work and effort. Keep it up.
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Really good novel I like especially the relationship with the heroine and his three daughters
I read through all of the free chapters after finding this in my recommendations and I can say that it is definitely a good read. The only real issue I have is the fact that I can't really keep up with the story since buying coins in bulk can be expensive. I really do appreciate being able to find such a wholesome story otherwise. 5 stars is my heartfelt belief in what this story deserves from what I've read up to.
Lol....didn't mind me. Just decided to mark this novel as one of the top new novels that i have to surpass...soon enough!!!
this is just extraordinary mannn daily updates nice story but want discord link bro ..
I really like that the children are the focus of the story and that they actually act like children and not 10,000 yr old sages. I like the progressing relationship between Leon and Lilliana. I am not a fan of nerfed MCs. It is one of my pet peeves up there with hiding identity and powers 😑. Leon has a total nerf, all powers gone thanks to some overpowered poison. Looking through chapter titles, it looks like he’s going to be powerless for a couple hundred chapters. I don’t know if I can stick around that long no matter how adorable the triplets are. If you don’t mind a nerfed mc where a fly could unalive him, then check it out. The kids really are adorbs and the best part of this novel.
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Story is really wholesome and well written with a very good plot. Brilliant character development and good world-building. It’s an absolute masterpiece!!
a very good story, the relationship with the demon queen is very fluid and does not feel forced, her relationship with her daughters is very sweet. The really bad thing is that there are only 39 free episodes :(
A really good slice of life with some plot twists sprinkled in, with some fights in it occasionally but main part is mostly his kids and his wife/adversary story where they fell in love. I really like his interaction with his kids and hope to see more in the future.
There are not many chapters, but this novel has a lot of potential, I liked it very much, author keep it up[img=update]
Live this story, plot is nice, romance is fairly done well and nice pace too, the daughters are little cotton balls of sweetness and that's like worth 3 stars on their own ngl 😭. try the book out because it's quite a nice change of pace from classic edgy novels these days.
Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice!, Will he return to the previous world or will the story focus on this world?.
overall a good wholesome story...just as i like ...but harem lovers harem is too small for the name of this NOVEL 😞😞😞...give it try if u like excessive small harem......i would had give 5 stars ..but I Cut 2 stats from *updating stability and numbers
well the novel is good but you have to got some patience because the novel plot is always delay that sometimes it gets annoying and the mc is not likeable i mean some of his problem even a child we know how to solve it but he couldn't each plot just show us how annoying and stupid the mc is if not for lila and the triplet i would have quit this novel with a useless mc.
deserving of a 5 Star rating. but maybe it's just my taste, it has all that I have been looking for.
Author I was enjoying the story but then there are some problems 1. MC is an idiot. You say he is smart, can sense negative intent, or people who have bad feelings but all along the emperor, jim, rain ...these people were out to screw him over but what did he do? be cautious nope. Took a potion from someone and drank without any worries. He even sensed the emperor didnt like him so why didnt he trust his intuition 2. He has been poisoned once but he literally drank something and got roofied from a potion again. He doesnt trust Athena so why not be cautious. It just seems so stupid. You would think he would be cautious at this point but 3. I mean the way you are making his harem is so weird. I mean you give us such a wholesome happy marriage feel with Liliana and the kids ....makes you feel like he doesnt need harem then bam he gets roofed and r*ped by dragon empress. I mean thats a effed up way to introduce harem members. If he pursued them his self and took on members it would be better but like this its kind of effed up. 4. I wish you had introduced some lifespan increases with power etc. I mean since demons, dragons elves etc live so long and humans lifespan is probably a 100 at most or so. I was hoping it said he has chance to become God realm so maybe can be immortal and then help the harem members, kids etc be immortal too possibly 5. MC is annoying. I mean he said he would get revenge on emperor, the prime minister, rain etc but eventhough rain is the one who poisoned him he is probably her childhood crush. Let me guess he will forgive her when he finds out? I mean its so stupid since he really wouldve died if not for a coincidence due to her poison. He just seems like too much of a idealistic Like he didnt want to get angry at Dragon empress because he needs their support He is constantly being pushed around by people and lead around. He is stronger then her but he is scared since she tried to r*pe him. Well then if he is then why did he like an idiot send Liliana out of meeting and got roofied, kidnapped and r*ped. I mean you say all this about Mc being smart but isnt he an idiot. I mean nothing needs to be hidden from Liliana, but he sends her out. It makes no sense he makes such stupid decisions when you know the other person is crazy, tried to r*pe you in the past and what they have done in the past yet you get surprised when they do same thing again? just few words and you start getting tricked its absurd
I really like this book, MC's interaction with his daughters is so wholesome it feels so heartwarming can anyone recommend something similar? oh, and author I hope you don't drop this masterpiece
as i read the reviews its pretty good and I'm gonna give it 5star i will read it if got 500 chapters keep up the good work author 🥰
Paid Chapters . . .. .. . .. . . . .. . . . .. . . . .. . . . .. . . . .. . . . .. . . . .. . . . .. . . . .. . . . .. . . . .. . . . .. . . . .. . . . .. . . . .. . . . .. . . . .. . . . .. . . . .. . . . .. .
Read all the free chapters. Story looks promising. I wonder why webnovel changed the way to unlock chapters again.. why no more Free pass like the previous times? :( This is why i dont like to read on webnovel..
I didn't expect this novel to be good. Is there a discord link? The one in the synopsis is not working
I must say, I wasn't expecting this when I first started reading it. but as I read deeper I was astonished at how amazing it is
Dear Author. This is something new from my perspective and I like it a lot. The 3 little girls are awesome Liliana is loveable. The only concern for me is that I started because of the plot and harem tag. But there is no harem yet. We have Lyra, the Saintess, Dragon Empress, Bow hero and no real progress I hope you are a man of your word or tag 😂 and we need all the good girl. So I would like to thank your work and effort. Keep it up.
ネタバレを明かす Really good novel I like especially the relationship with the heroine and his three daughters
I read through all of the free chapters after finding this in my recommendations and I can say that it is definitely a good read. The only real issue I have is the fact that I can't really keep up with the story since buying coins in bulk can be expensive. I really do appreciate being able to find such a wholesome story otherwise. 5 stars is my heartfelt belief in what this story deserves from what I've read up to.
Lol....didn't mind me. Just decided to mark this novel as one of the top new novels that i have to surpass...soon enough!!!
this is just extraordinary mannn daily updates nice story but want discord link bro ..
I really like that the children are the focus of the story and that they actually act like children and not 10,000 yr old sages. I like the progressing relationship between Leon and Lilliana. I am not a fan of nerfed MCs. It is one of my pet peeves up there with hiding identity and powers 😑. Leon has a total nerf, all powers gone thanks to some overpowered poison. Looking through chapter titles, it looks like he’s going to be powerless for a couple hundred chapters. I don’t know if I can stick around that long no matter how adorable the triplets are. If you don’t mind a nerfed mc where a fly could unalive him, then check it out. The kids really are adorbs and the best part of this novel.
ネタバレを明かす Story is really wholesome and well written with a very good plot. Brilliant character development and good world-building. It’s an absolute masterpiece!!
a very good story, the relationship with the demon queen is very fluid and does not feel forced, her relationship with her daughters is very sweet. The really bad thing is that there are only 39 free episodes :(
A really good slice of life with some plot twists sprinkled in, with some fights in it occasionally but main part is mostly his kids and his wife/adversary story where they fell in love. I really like his interaction with his kids and hope to see more in the future.
There are not many chapters, but this novel has a lot of potential, I liked it very much, author keep it up[img=update]
Live this story, plot is nice, romance is fairly done well and nice pace too, the daughters are little cotton balls of sweetness and that's like worth 3 stars on their own ngl 😭. try the book out because it's quite a nice change of pace from classic edgy novels these days.
Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice!, Will he return to the previous world or will the story focus on this world?.
overall a good wholesome story...just as i like ...but harem lovers harem is too small for the name of this NOVEL 😞😞😞...give it try if u like excessive small harem......i would had give 5 stars ..but I Cut 2 stats from *updating stability and numbers
well the novel is good but you have to got some patience because the novel plot is always delay that sometimes it gets annoying and the mc is not likeable i mean some of his problem even a child we know how to solve it but he couldn't each plot just show us how annoying and stupid the mc is if not for lila and the triplet i would have quit this novel with a useless mc.