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Very interisting read the first chapter and you will know what I mean. also quit the dark element in it and it is very well done. keep the good work👍👍.
I got two observations when i first started reading. First of all, incredible writing. No major errors stood out to me and the writing was clean all across the board. The second thing was the dialogue. Boy oh boy, did I like it. The worldbuilding is great and the book is amazing if you're willing to sit, kickback and enjoy it. Cheers!
This is very good, worth reading, and you would definitely like to put it in your library. The grammar is very good, the premise is something that attracts you due to the way it is presented to us, and the MC has a personality that I really like. Looking forward to seeing where this goes!
very good stuff this one. it's just the author don't release chapters often and from the looks of it he might even drop it. Author please keep the story going and dint drop it, this some good work.
Very interisting read the first chapter and you will know what I mean. also quit the dark element in it and it is very well done. keep the good work👍👍.
I got two observations when i first started reading. First of all, incredible writing. No major errors stood out to me and the writing was clean all across the board. The second thing was the dialogue. Boy oh boy, did I like it. The worldbuilding is great and the book is amazing if you're willing to sit, kickback and enjoy it. Cheers!
This is very good, worth reading, and you would definitely like to put it in your library. The grammar is very good, the premise is something that attracts you due to the way it is presented to us, and the MC has a personality that I really like. Looking forward to seeing where this goes!
very good stuff this one. it's just the author don't release chapters often and from the looks of it he might even drop it. Author please keep the story going and dint drop it, this some good work.