あなたの考えを他の人と共有してください
レビューを書くIs just the main story with a few sentences mentioning the brother. No real original ideas added.
I honestly don't know what's the point of introducing the Cory character if you're not gonna talk about him and instead just show a rehearsal of the basic dxd plot. Also his name is Cory Hyoudou? Was Bob Uchiha taken?
three chapters in and you've mentioned the brother like twice and seen him twice seems more like a copy paste with a few mentions of a brother added in than anything else
There's hardly any mention of a brother and it's basically a copy and paste. Wish I could give 0 stars.
Is just the main story with a few sentences mentioning the brother. No real original ideas added.
I honestly don't know what's the point of introducing the Cory character if you're not gonna talk about him and instead just show a rehearsal of the basic dxd plot. Also his name is Cory Hyoudou? Was Bob Uchiha taken?
three chapters in and you've mentioned the brother like twice and seen him twice seems more like a copy paste with a few mentions of a brother added in than anything else
There's hardly any mention of a brother and it's basically a copy and paste. Wish I could give 0 stars.