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Please continue... Is Oda know about this side story? It would be great if luffy meet ephon in the current one piece story. One thing for sure, living a peace world with beloved family is a real deal here.
More chapters please. 🥵More chapters please. 🥵More chapters please. 🥵More chapters please. 🥵More chapters please. 🥵More chapters please. 🥵More chapters please. 🥵More chapters please. 🥵
A very good novel, I hope the story doesn't change the original plot of One Piece itself.
Nice story update more till the end ................................................................................................................................................................
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interesting................................................................................................................................................
It’s very good FF one piece I’m looking forward to the next chapters🔥🔥❤️……………………………………………………………………………..………………………………………………. …………………………………………..
It is a good read. Interesting to see someone start so early in one piece world.
very good story. The characters are good too. you need to focus on MC and also show the outside world's reaction towards them It seems lacking Don't do excessive time skip don't drop it it has very high potential
Author here(just a short review) I'm gonna give myself a 5 star review, I think the idea of my plot is very interesting and although there will be a lot of time skips before canon, when the story reaches canon, the characters background will be well developed. Thanks for your support
Good must read no cap at all just wish you have the will to write it all the way my guy
Very nice novel please more chapter update 🙏🙏🙏😘😘😘😍.......,.......................,,..........................................,......,,..,....,,...,..........,.....................
a pretty cool story and with a premise that I like, which is "a stable life" I like how that sounds. My only problem is that the writing is a little disorganized, but that might be a problem with the automatic translator.
Please continue... Is Oda know about this side story? It would be great if luffy meet ephon in the current one piece story. One thing for sure, living a peace world with beloved family is a real deal here.
More chapters please. 🥵More chapters please. 🥵More chapters please. 🥵More chapters please. 🥵More chapters please. 🥵More chapters please. 🥵More chapters please. 🥵More chapters please. 🥵
A very good novel, I hope the story doesn't change the original plot of One Piece itself.
Nice story update more till the end ................................................................................................................................................................
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interesting................................................................................................................................................
It’s very good FF one piece I’m looking forward to the next chapters🔥🔥❤️……………………………………………………………………………..………………………………………………. …………………………………………..
It is a good read. Interesting to see someone start so early in one piece world.
very good story. The characters are good too. you need to focus on MC and also show the outside world's reaction towards them It seems lacking Don't do excessive time skip don't drop it it has very high potential
Author here(just a short review) I'm gonna give myself a 5 star review, I think the idea of my plot is very interesting and although there will be a lot of time skips before canon, when the story reaches canon, the characters background will be well developed. Thanks for your support
Good must read no cap at all just wish you have the will to write it all the way my guy
Very nice novel please more chapter update 🙏🙏🙏😘😘😘😍.......,.......................,,..........................................,......,,..,....,,...,..........,.....................
a pretty cool story and with a premise that I like, which is "a stable life" I like how that sounds. My only problem is that the writing is a little disorganized, but that might be a problem with the automatic translator.
did you drop it ? ......................