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very good story and I just realized this is basically one of my oc I made when I was bored 2 years ago just with background changed and how that the immortality works
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Started out really good but I am slowly becoming concerned it is getting boring. I’m not sure if it is the short chapters with nothing happening or if it’s just the pacing
it's not bad it's just.. fast? and kinda feels unorganised, i don't exactly know how to explain it but I don't think the story is for me, good luck on the story tho author
To the person who posted the review about my MC being a sociopath you are wrong, he is bipolar and has is a bit loony because of how long he was in the void. I deleted your review because I believed it to be inaccurate, Sorry, but please understand that you have got it wrong, it’s coming from me the author, he is not a psychopath, sociopath or whatever, he wants to help people, but he also wants to have something to gain. I hope me deleting your review hasn’t left you too bitter, I hope you find a novel that can give you everything you want, have a nice day or night or afternoon.
To the person who posted the review about my MC being a sociopath you are wrong, he is bipolar and has is a bit loony because of how long he was in the void. I deleted your review because I believed it to be inaccurate, Sorry, but please understand that you have got it wrong, it’s coming from me the author, he is not a psychopath, sociopath or whatever, he wants to help people, but he also wants to have something to gain. I hope me deleting your review hasn’t left you too bitter, I hope you find a novel that can give you everything you want, have a nice day or night or afternoon.
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the synopsis seems very interesting, other than that i didn't read anything yet. I'm gonna read it cuz synopsis looks fire
Your novels are usually a fun read. Tho I’m wondering if your dropping your other mha fic? Was really enjoying it!
For now has been a great story and i really like his laughing tick. I want to know if somehow he will go to UA. Djfjbfdjdncbfjwnjsjfnfjejskfjghrikdkdjfjrjskksfnhfjrksakdnhrj
The proposal is quite interesting, I like how you are doing it and I hope you don't let it fall through,Well, let's follow this work and see where it goes.
Ohhh~ Do you hear that? Thats the sound of me giving myself a 5 star review!!!!
the sypnosis could use a bit more work , other than that, i didn't read anything.
very good story and I just realized this is basically one of my oc I made when I was bored 2 years ago just with background changed and how that the immortality works
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Started out really good but I am slowly becoming concerned it is getting boring. I’m not sure if it is the short chapters with nothing happening or if it’s just the pacing
it's not bad it's just.. fast? and kinda feels unorganised, i don't exactly know how to explain it but I don't think the story is for me, good luck on the story tho author
To the person who posted the review about my MC being a sociopath you are wrong, he is bipolar and has is a bit loony because of how long he was in the void. I deleted your review because I believed it to be inaccurate, Sorry, but please understand that you have got it wrong, it’s coming from me the author, he is not a psychopath, sociopath or whatever, he wants to help people, but he also wants to have something to gain. I hope me deleting your review hasn’t left you too bitter, I hope you find a novel that can give you everything you want, have a nice day or night or afternoon.
To the person who posted the review about my MC being a sociopath you are wrong, he is bipolar and has is a bit loony because of how long he was in the void. I deleted your review because I believed it to be inaccurate, Sorry, but please understand that you have got it wrong, it’s coming from me the author, he is not a psychopath, sociopath or whatever, he wants to help people, but he also wants to have something to gain. I hope me deleting your review hasn’t left you too bitter, I hope you find a novel that can give you everything you want, have a nice day or night or afternoon.
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the synopsis seems very interesting, other than that i didn't read anything yet. I'm gonna read it cuz synopsis looks fire
Your novels are usually a fun read. Tho I’m wondering if your dropping your other mha fic? Was really enjoying it!
For now has been a great story and i really like his laughing tick. I want to know if somehow he will go to UA. Djfjbfdjdncbfjwnjsjfnfjejskfjghrikdkdjfjrjskksfnhfjrksakdnhrj
The proposal is quite interesting, I like how you are doing it and I hope you don't let it fall through,Well, let's follow this work and see where it goes.
Ohhh~ Do you hear that? Thats the sound of me giving myself a 5 star review!!!!
the sypnosis could use a bit more work , other than that, i didn't read anything.
When are u going to start writing again.