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I bow down to you for your writing speed and consistency.Like how do you write so much bro and still keep the pace of other novels.just your effort to write this much is enough to give 5 stars.
A great novel without a doubt, for me personally it is refreshing to finally see something good about Cobra Kai
going to be honest started of strong but then started to fall apart quickly. Reading parts of this story was simply too hard or impossible to understand. I love the idea but the story itself needs work.
The author captures the essence of the characters, allowing readers to empathize with their internal struggles and growth. The final moment, full of emotion and delicately written, encapsulates the central themes of the story, such as personal growth and forgiveness. This ending leaves a sense of satisfaction, along with a nostalgia that only the best stories can evoke. Without a doubt, it’s a read worth experiencing
This cobra Kai fanfic has excellent grammar wording writing quality a good story line development and character design I 100% recommend reading this if you’re interested in a martial art cobra Kai world with a reincarnator as a protagonist
Hola hermano, apenas me voy a leer esta novela pero aún así le hice una portada jaja, espero te guste, como no la he leído intenté hacerla parecida a la actual, ojalá te guste, sigue con el buen trabajo [img=strong]
I already finished reading it, this is the best and only Cobra Kai fanfic I have ever read, there are almost no grammatical errors, english is my second language so i don't know about some words. Favorite word: your victory is my victory.⊂(◉‿◉)つ The character Dash had his moment of weakness and by having a second chance he was able to have the willpower to continue evolving as a human, changing the people around him for the better, this makes him a well-built character in my opinion. ᕙ(＠°▽°＠)ᕗ Thank you very much author for writing this work of art. This is the first fanfic I've read of yours and I'll definitely check out your other stories. ( ╹▽╹ )
I really enjoyed the story development and the way Dale's character grew. The one complaint I have is about how drawn out the dojo drama was, although I liked how it ended
This is easily among the best fan fictions on web novel. If you have watched or enjoyed cobra Kai or karate kid you will enjoy this. The story development is quite good, I’ll admit I got bored during a portion of the story, however that section of the story doesn’t last long. I will say that the ending is also very good it felt short I’ll admit I wanted an extra couple chapters to extend the ending however that doesn’t remove much from what it achieves. Now what ending you choose to believe in is up to you. But for me, I think it’s a great story. I with the author luck on any future writing they take on in the future.
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Really do not believe it deserves 4* translation quality more like 3*, some phrase are a pain to read and it need polishing. i really hope it gets better
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es bueno, yo no soy fan de cobra kai ni de karate kid, lo lei y me agrado, pero lo termino dejando no porque sea malo, sino por gusto personal.
Good story author. Best Cobra Kai fanfic on the net. Good Story Development and regular updates also make this story good. pls continue updating the story.
La historia no está mal, es muy entretenida. El problema está en que este es un fanfic de Cobra Kai y lo que menos vemos es una interacción con los personajes de Cobra Kai. Son más de 100 capitulos y puedo contar con los dedos de una mano las veces que se mencionó un personaje de Cobra Kai,
Author you really are a Legend I'm a huge fan of your work please don't ever stop this novel 🙏
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I would like to start off that I only read up until chapter 5, so take this review with a grain of salt, and I will be mostly focusing on the main character/writing quality. The two main issues I noticed right off the bat is the fact that the character adapted to his circumstances extremely quickly. and the pacing of the story is over the roof, and to be quite fair. It makes no sense. As a thirteen year old child people would expect them to be full of questions and have issues adapting, but instead we see him act like an adult and make rational and extremely unlike choices for a child. This makes no sense considering he just woke up and after an hour of him living his new life he already realized he is in the karate kid/cobra kai world. His interaction with his father is also forceful, but that might be because of his strained relationship with his parents. The pacing makes the unnatural adaptation of the child even worse, and adding another layer of doubt towards the novels progression. Since the pacing and character are so bad it is starting to affect the story development since chapter 5, and making the development less competent. basically we are rushing to build the house and forgot to reinforce the foundation, this will create plothole which leads to dissatisfaction. World Background is 5*, cuz its a fanfiction held inside an already popular series. Updates is 5*. lots of chapters and a really responsive author. good overall
It's always good to have a karate kid fanfic, especially if it's as good as this one.The protagonist is very good, I want to see her interacting with the other characters in this universe.
uma das melhores fics que estou lendo atualmente e espero que o autor não drope pois é a única fic que vi sobre cobra kai
You shouldn't worry about not having seen all of Cobra Kai, just the first season is more than enough. What can I say about this novel? It is perfect, everything one would like to read after watching Cobra Kai or Karate Kid
Idk if it’s just me but the fanfic won’t save to my library and it keeps bugging when I try to read it it’s very upsetting
Author, you’re an awesome guy and I applaud you for that. Very understanding person I must say, I think this novel has the potential to be popular even though it may not be my most favorite novel. I’ll support you no matter what!
Good FF Keep it up[img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recommend]
Finally!! A cobra kai fanfic! I don’t care if it’s bad or not, its an automatic 5 stars for me
I bow down to you for your writing speed and consistency.Like how do you write so much bro and still keep the pace of other novels.just your effort to write this much is enough to give 5 stars.
A great novel without a doubt, for me personally it is refreshing to finally see something good about Cobra Kai
going to be honest started of strong but then started to fall apart quickly. Reading parts of this story was simply too hard or impossible to understand. I love the idea but the story itself needs work.
The author captures the essence of the characters, allowing readers to empathize with their internal struggles and growth. The final moment, full of emotion and delicately written, encapsulates the central themes of the story, such as personal growth and forgiveness. This ending leaves a sense of satisfaction, along with a nostalgia that only the best stories can evoke. Without a doubt, it’s a read worth experiencing
This cobra Kai fanfic has excellent grammar wording writing quality a good story line development and character design I 100% recommend reading this if you’re interested in a martial art cobra Kai world with a reincarnator as a protagonist
Hola hermano, apenas me voy a leer esta novela pero aún así le hice una portada jaja, espero te guste, como no la he leído intenté hacerla parecida a la actual, ojalá te guste, sigue con el buen trabajo [img=strong]
I already finished reading it, this is the best and only Cobra Kai fanfic I have ever read, there are almost no grammatical errors, english is my second language so i don't know about some words. Favorite word: your victory is my victory.⊂(◉‿◉)つ The character Dash had his moment of weakness and by having a second chance he was able to have the willpower to continue evolving as a human, changing the people around him for the better, this makes him a well-built character in my opinion. ᕙ(＠°▽°＠)ᕗ Thank you very much author for writing this work of art. This is the first fanfic I've read of yours and I'll definitely check out your other stories. ( ╹▽╹ )
I really enjoyed the story development and the way Dale's character grew. The one complaint I have is about how drawn out the dojo drama was, although I liked how it ended
This is easily among the best fan fictions on web novel. If you have watched or enjoyed cobra Kai or karate kid you will enjoy this. The story development is quite good, I’ll admit I got bored during a portion of the story, however that section of the story doesn’t last long. I will say that the ending is also very good it felt short I’ll admit I wanted an extra couple chapters to extend the ending however that doesn’t remove much from what it achieves. Now what ending you choose to believe in is up to you. But for me, I think it’s a great story. I with the author luck on any future writing they take on in the future.
ネタバレを明かす Really do not believe it deserves 4* translation quality more like 3*, some phrase are a pain to read and it need polishing. i really hope it gets better
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es bueno, yo no soy fan de cobra kai ni de karate kid, lo lei y me agrado, pero lo termino dejando no porque sea malo, sino por gusto personal.
Good story author. Best Cobra Kai fanfic on the net. Good Story Development and regular updates also make this story good. pls continue updating the story.
La historia no está mal, es muy entretenida. El problema está en que este es un fanfic de Cobra Kai y lo que menos vemos es una interacción con los personajes de Cobra Kai. Son más de 100 capitulos y puedo contar con los dedos de una mano las veces que se mencionó un personaje de Cobra Kai,
Author you really are a Legend I'm a huge fan of your work please don't ever stop this novel 🙏
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I would like to start off that I only read up until chapter 5, so take this review with a grain of salt, and I will be mostly focusing on the main character/writing quality. The two main issues I noticed right off the bat is the fact that the character adapted to his circumstances extremely quickly. and the pacing of the story is over the roof, and to be quite fair. It makes no sense. As a thirteen year old child people would expect them to be full of questions and have issues adapting, but instead we see him act like an adult and make rational and extremely unlike choices for a child. This makes no sense considering he just woke up and after an hour of him living his new life he already realized he is in the karate kid/cobra kai world. His interaction with his father is also forceful, but that might be because of his strained relationship with his parents. The pacing makes the unnatural adaptation of the child even worse, and adding another layer of doubt towards the novels progression. Since the pacing and character are so bad it is starting to affect the story development since chapter 5, and making the development less competent. basically we are rushing to build the house and forgot to reinforce the foundation, this will create plothole which leads to dissatisfaction. World Background is 5*, cuz its a fanfiction held inside an already popular series. Updates is 5*. lots of chapters and a really responsive author. good overall
It's always good to have a karate kid fanfic, especially if it's as good as this one.The protagonist is very good, I want to see her interacting with the other characters in this universe.
uma das melhores fics que estou lendo atualmente e espero que o autor não drope pois é a única fic que vi sobre cobra kai
You shouldn't worry about not having seen all of Cobra Kai, just the first season is more than enough. What can I say about this novel? It is perfect, everything one would like to read after watching Cobra Kai or Karate Kid
Idk if it’s just me but the fanfic won’t save to my library and it keeps bugging when I try to read it it’s very upsetting
Author, you’re an awesome guy and I applaud you for that. Very understanding person I must say, I think this novel has the potential to be popular even though it may not be my most favorite novel. I’ll support you no matter what!
Good FF Keep it up[img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recommend]
Finally!! A cobra kai fanfic! I don’t care if it’s bad or not, its an automatic 5 stars for me