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TLDR: Maybe it's a good book.Maybe it isn't the author wants to Piggy. Back off of Harry Potter and describes the first technique, the main character gets as being directly from the Harry Potter world and the authors on words.And that just took me out of any interest that the story might have had. I was willing to give this book an honest try. But I just can't bother to read a piece of work when the author just blatantly uses other books for his novel. And I don't mean take a few ideas musically. I'm literally says in the book. The Harry Potter world and other things like that. Talking about the techniques, the character gets another stuff and honestly it just makes it so uninteresting to read at that point, even if it's an adequate description for something. It completely takes me out of the mood to read it when the author who's writing a fictional story needs to base it off of another fictional story. Maybe that's not the best way to put it, but honestly. Just the Reliance on Harry Potter, slang and the way the system works along within the main character, referencing Harry Potter all the time, it made it so I couldn't keep reading. Obviously. I'm exaggerating with all the time. But you know, I really didn't make it to chapter 3 because it got so uninteresting right? After I saw the author described the mind obscuring technique as from the Harry Potter world that I had 0 interest. Keep reading. I tried to finish the chapter and I couldn't because there was just no intro. That's in the story from that point on. Because at that point this is just gonna be a fan fiction from Harry Potter. And someone can tell me that they've read. The chapter 800 and it's a very different story than Harry Potter. And I wouldn't care because first impressions matter a lot. And this novel went from something that sounded kind of interesting with a weird character's name like link to I can't even bother to read this because if he's a Chinese author referencing Harry Potter techniques and other things like that for his wizards. It makes me wonder if the name link is connected to Nintendo's link from high rule.But I digress in the end.I couldn't even get past the third chapter because there was no interest on continuing the read.
Yeah sometimes I wonder if it a low level wizard world or real op wizard world where strength reign supreme not some mordern day like wizard word bs and Mc is righteous bastard
I don’t know why but this story just bores me. No action even after chapter 18, not my kind of story but some may still like it.
Decently built plot line. Well thought out characters. Storyline focuses heavily on inter character relationships, intrigue politics and system +abilities is secondary. Honestly, this has been done quite well and the author seems to be quite talented at understanding human psychological and the dynamic relationships situations caused. Only downside at times the author is not descriptive enough or maybe lost in translation. Still don't fully understand a few wizarding concepts. Fun entertaining and engaging read
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This has great settings, characterization, and even the way it started is good. Unfortunately, I have to drop it as it has too much trouble. You see, the protagonist goal in his school life is to be low-key and to not get in trouble with others. He's not even there for one month, and someone already had trouble with him because of Jasmine. I don't have a grudge with her, but the way she attracts trouble is like a magnet. She also constantly troubles Link, the protagonist, ruining his peaceful life. And I could already foresee on how she's planning to stick to him until the ends of the earth because she finds Link "different." And clarification, Jasmine is not the only trouble around him. I love wizard novels, but it's more on my cup of tea if the protagonist is really low-key and hates trouble. Like real.
Jasmine girl is so irritating and still the same f****king plot of some bigshot set sights on her
This is a native Chinese novel, so it is understandable that the translation wouldn’t be perfect. However, the translation on this novel is horrible. I do not recommend reading this novel, ever. If you’re a Chinese speaker than maybe this novel would be interesting to read in that language, but as for English readers-stay away from this.
what i hate is mc is smart. yet he let himself use by bimbo knowing he got nothing in return. he should just cut off from the girl after the threat.
I am just starting to read this novel and wanted to know if there is any romance or harems in it?
technology, mash up of several booke, mc gets transported to futuristic magic world with Harry Potter system,there are advanced in his own words transformers and mobile suit gundam technogy, he can pay the system material wealth like magic stones to get spells and abilities from Harry Potter world ah I know have hufflepuff botany skill card, ah these muggles don't see us, I have not read far, but its a slow slice of life novel.
Way too Boring. MC feeling so wise and smart, no social relationships, no regular interactions with people. THIS BOOK IS BORDERLINE TRASH
kind of boring.. I was hoping for something like the warlock of the magus world but this falls far short. it has some things needlessly explained too much while others are just glossed over. also it's like a diary with how it's just he did this and he did that.
One of the best Chinese novels on this app. There are practically no errors, and so far, I haven't noticed any pronoun changes, which are common in this type of novel. There was one instance where they changed the color of the girl's eyes, but I haven't seen it happen again. The only issue is that the chapters are locked too early. When I installed this app, they used to lock after 50 chapters, but now, not even 40, and they're already locked.
I can accept the fact that 12 or 13 years old children angering in scheming warfare within the school...even more ridiculous a lofty 3rd ring mage caring about the affairs of those aprentices and using them to decide the ownership of a damn 5th ring magic tool...the worst thing is the mc..I can accept the fact he need connections..the thing he can easily accomplish with his talents and the system cards..however the mc keeps accepting burdens as followers..lets take this Jasmin..she adds nothing to our mc instead she was the reason for him involving in big problems with people attempting to take his live...this trend continue despite the author trying to portray the mc as an indifferent person...the more I read the more I get frustrated..I can't feel the magic element in the story instead it feels like a Sci fi futuristic setting...I may try to keep reading as I'm over 100 chapters now..but the more I read the more dispointed I get
ネタバレを明かす TLDR: Maybe it's a good book.Maybe it isn't the author wants to Piggy. Back off of Harry Potter and describes the first technique, the main character gets as being directly from the Harry Potter world and the authors on words.And that just took me out of any interest that the story might have had. I was willing to give this book an honest try. But I just can't bother to read a piece of work when the author just blatantly uses other books for his novel. And I don't mean take a few ideas musically. I'm literally says in the book. The Harry Potter world and other things like that. Talking about the techniques, the character gets another stuff and honestly it just makes it so uninteresting to read at that point, even if it's an adequate description for something. It completely takes me out of the mood to read it when the author who's writing a fictional story needs to base it off of another fictional story. Maybe that's not the best way to put it, but honestly. Just the Reliance on Harry Potter, slang and the way the system works along within the main character, referencing Harry Potter all the time, it made it so I couldn't keep reading. Obviously. I'm exaggerating with all the time. But you know, I really didn't make it to chapter 3 because it got so uninteresting right? After I saw the author described the mind obscuring technique as from the Harry Potter world that I had 0 interest. Keep reading. I tried to finish the chapter and I couldn't because there was just no intro. That's in the story from that point on. Because at that point this is just gonna be a fan fiction from Harry Potter. And someone can tell me that they've read. The chapter 800 and it's a very different story than Harry Potter. And I wouldn't care because first impressions matter a lot. And this novel went from something that sounded kind of interesting with a weird character's name like link to I can't even bother to read this because if he's a Chinese author referencing Harry Potter techniques and other things like that for his wizards. It makes me wonder if the name link is connected to Nintendo's link from high rule.But I digress in the end.I couldn't even get past the third chapter because there was no interest on continuing the read.
Yeah sometimes I wonder if it a low level wizard world or real op wizard world where strength reign supreme not some mordern day like wizard word bs and Mc is righteous bastard
I don’t know why but this story just bores me. No action even after chapter 18, not my kind of story but some may still like it.
Decently built plot line. Well thought out characters. Storyline focuses heavily on inter character relationships, intrigue politics and system +abilities is secondary. Honestly, this has been done quite well and the author seems to be quite talented at understanding human psychological and the dynamic relationships situations caused. Only downside at times the author is not descriptive enough or maybe lost in translation. Still don't fully understand a few wizarding concepts. Fun entertaining and engaging read
ネタバレを明かす This has great settings, characterization, and even the way it started is good. Unfortunately, I have to drop it as it has too much trouble. You see, the protagonist goal in his school life is to be low-key and to not get in trouble with others. He's not even there for one month, and someone already had trouble with him because of Jasmine. I don't have a grudge with her, but the way she attracts trouble is like a magnet. She also constantly troubles Link, the protagonist, ruining his peaceful life. And I could already foresee on how she's planning to stick to him until the ends of the earth because she finds Link "different." And clarification, Jasmine is not the only trouble around him. I love wizard novels, but it's more on my cup of tea if the protagonist is really low-key and hates trouble. Like real.
Jasmine girl is so irritating and still the same f****king plot of some bigshot set sights on her
This is a native Chinese novel, so it is understandable that the translation wouldn’t be perfect. However, the translation on this novel is horrible. I do not recommend reading this novel, ever. If you’re a Chinese speaker than maybe this novel would be interesting to read in that language, but as for English readers-stay away from this.
what i hate is mc is smart. yet he let himself use by bimbo knowing he got nothing in return. he should just cut off from the girl after the threat.
I am just starting to read this novel and wanted to know if there is any romance or harems in it?
technology, mash up of several booke, mc gets transported to futuristic magic world with Harry Potter system,there are advanced in his own words transformers and mobile suit gundam technogy, he can pay the system material wealth like magic stones to get spells and abilities from Harry Potter world ah I know have hufflepuff botany skill card, ah these muggles don't see us, I have not read far, but its a slow slice of life novel.
Way too Boring. MC feeling so wise and smart, no social relationships, no regular interactions with people. THIS BOOK IS BORDERLINE TRASH
kind of boring.. I was hoping for something like the warlock of the magus world but this falls far short. it has some things needlessly explained too much while others are just glossed over. also it's like a diary with how it's just he did this and he did that.
One of the best Chinese novels on this app. There are practically no errors, and so far, I haven't noticed any pronoun changes, which are common in this type of novel. There was one instance where they changed the color of the girl's eyes, but I haven't seen it happen again. The only issue is that the chapters are locked too early. When I installed this app, they used to lock after 50 chapters, but now, not even 40, and they're already locked.
I can accept the fact that 12 or 13 years old children angering in scheming warfare within the school...even more ridiculous a lofty 3rd ring mage caring about the affairs of those aprentices and using them to decide the ownership of a damn 5th ring magic tool...the worst thing is the mc..I can accept the fact he need connections..the thing he can easily accomplish with his talents and the system cards..however the mc keeps accepting burdens as followers..lets take this Jasmin..she adds nothing to our mc instead she was the reason for him involving in big problems with people attempting to take his live...this trend continue despite the author trying to portray the mc as an indifferent person...the more I read the more I get frustrated..I can't feel the magic element in the story instead it feels like a Sci fi futuristic setting...I may try to keep reading as I'm over 100 chapters now..but the more I read the more dispointed I get
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