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I’m completely loving this story so far. This ff is very good, especially for a translated story, I see little to no mistakes at all so far. The character interactions are quite nice and can be quite funny some times, what I love most about this is how much chapters are being pumped out so far. The updating has been extremely consistent and plentiful as well. The fact that in this ff there are some worlds and characters being mentioned that usually aren’t even thought of in other ff’s makes the experience reading even better. I hope this stories thrives and I don’t see it getting dropped, thank you!
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didn't read yet but will do after dropping this review btw I am really impressed by the number of chapters
nothing much could be said, aside from this book being a delicacy among the 100+ books in my library.
The story is quite interesting with ups and downs that some may like and others may not, thank you for translating it
Me encanta este fanfic pero enserio voy a dejarlo sin terminar porque si les soy sincero no puedo leer un fanfic que tenga a la basura repugnante e inútil de Yuno Gasai Como un protagonista/romance del MC de está genial historia cada ves que la nombran me dan más ganas de que muere de forma horrible y patéticamente
The original is good, it just needed an english translation. Had to slowly witness how the automatic google translate got worse and worse until I just gave up reading the og
Awesome work from the translation and awesome work from the author..!! Magnificent work in the making here and the abundant chapters makes the heart race ..!! The hot blood boils.....it's not over yet..!
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I ain't gonna write all I think about the story imma just say it's pretty decent but a bit weird but that is something I can handle cause the story is good, well at least for now.
The more I read it, the more impressed I become. Actually, the battles in Mirai Nikki are really gorgeous and breathtaking. I already felt like I'm gonna cry when our MC had been severely injured and gone into light particles. In the process of reading a part where he literally died, I thought, that's it. I wanted to drop it, but the final calmed me down, and I felt relieved. So, now I am gonna sleep because I have read it for 5 hours, and my eyes are feeling a little bit bad, you know, it's kinda hard to read it for 5 HOURS!...
Review at ch. 285. First of all, this is a translation. The translator/editor did an excellent job maintaining quality and still having the point of the novel expressed. Now, onto the novel. The background of the novel is interesting and takes a unique perspective on some of the world's involvement. The MC is a former assassin who supposedly has good experience with women, who was reincarnated at Sasuke's cousin. Unfortunately, while the MC is good at seducing random women, it feels like all of the main heroines are somewhat ignored when it comes to progressing the character development and actually making them accept his harem. They turn into yanderes or women who like to mock and rile up the yanderes. These also aren't the good yandere. These are the yanderes who will stab and kill the other heroines or MC if they aren't pacified for the next ten minutes. Instead of dealing with them and solving the issue, the MC says he will get interest out of their backside, which he barely does. Additionally, it turns any new meeting with potential future heroines into a jealousy fest where the MC has to pretend to not be interested, while being berated by the girlfriend where she swears to visit the girls in her head. The story is kind of good with somewhat unique worlds such as Guilty Crown and Future Diaries, but in each world the MC was severely nerfed for no reason other than making things difficult. This provided a false sense of difficulty and didn't actually progress his power until somehow, at the end of Guilty Crown, he absorbed the crystals and became more powerful. It wasn't developed and more just handed to him by circumstance. TLDR: The MC basically let's the heroines who are close to him walk over him and refuses to fix their issues. One example is the girls constantly waste his karma points, which he complains about but still gives it to them without handling it or putting down his foot. Being henpecked is only appropriate it monogamous relationships and gets annoying in harem stories, because it becomes constant whenever there is a new heroine introduced.
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FIrst of all , I would like the translator for translating this book Secondly (. coughing ) . . . I will proceed to shamelessly advertise my book . So . . . go read my own fanfic based of the Infinite genre
This is a great story with a good setting. The main hero has unique power, but so overpowered. All in all, I love his multiverse chat, female characters is the best at all. 👌
I was pretty hype for the story, then he is told he needs to "gather other champions to help save the world" which is just boring tbh. The story has barely began and this dude is already put on recruitment duty. I would put spoiler tag, but it only took me like 20 minutes to read up to where it said this.
FINALLY! The story was great and loved the the setting of the anime Multiverse. I once stop reading cuz I was tired of translating every paragraph when it was only the Spanish version that's available
At starting I thought it was boring from 1 to 4 or 5 but after that it was really interesting and now i am at 140 ch and I really love this.A hidden gem
I didn't know there's a translation! Instant 5star rate because I've read the Original and it's Awesome. I don't know if I'll read in here though, probably if the chapter's close to the orig because I'm up to date there. Keep it up!!!
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I haven't wrote a review of this yet? That's crazy. Anyway if you've come here to read a better than usual fanfic with mashup-anime/comic worlds then you've come to the right place! P.S. Kurumi is best girl.
story's good but the power system/ rules /characters are a mess... even the MC .There are too many contrivances at every turn and they don't even benefit the plot
The story started really losing its touch after the chat group area, not that the chat group was bad, but what's the point of making mc be an assassin in his past life when he isnt even acting like one, he is wayy too immature for someone in that. The author is also VERY HORRENDOUS at writing female characters. As for the good parts, its interesting and engaging, the story is very funny, at times though it feels the author pursues a more lecherous mc or ignores proper character interactions for comedy or hornii. Over all Its ok.
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It's good tho it does get repetitive with the whole oops something has happened and my power is mostly or totally sealed... Again. (this is a translation btw so throw all your annoyance at the original author)
(Harem Spoiler below): 1st of all a thanks to the translator for translating this ff bcz overall it's a really enjoyable fanfic with unique choices for powers and worlds. The only 2 downsides are that if u haven't read or watched the anime of some worlds u will be bored and confused about some things. The 2nd downside is the Author's failure in making the harem believable/acceptable. The Mc is a 13 yr old shota that got 5 women from naruto (tsunade, shizune, ino, hinata, himawari), 4 from guilty crown (inori/mana, tsugumi, ayase, hiraki), and all 6 of his chat members (yami, mikata, la fiola, yuno, kurumi, emilia) and that's not including the danmachi arc yet which i started (ch.150 atm) he has inori next to him yet he openly flirts with chloe and syr.... his solution to this is just sleeping with inori to calm her down since inori and tsugumi accepted the harem idea due to "stamina issues". So yeah nice ff but with a perverted mc that has a functioning pokemon harem due to author bs.
I’m completely loving this story so far. This ff is very good, especially for a translated story, I see little to no mistakes at all so far. The character interactions are quite nice and can be quite funny some times, what I love most about this is how much chapters are being pumped out so far. The updating has been extremely consistent and plentiful as well. The fact that in this ff there are some worlds and characters being mentioned that usually aren’t even thought of in other ff’s makes the experience reading even better. I hope this stories thrives and I don’t see it getting dropped, thank you!
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didn't read yet but will do after dropping this review btw I am really impressed by the number of chapters
nothing much could be said, aside from this book being a delicacy among the 100+ books in my library.
The story is quite interesting with ups and downs that some may like and others may not, thank you for translating it
Me encanta este fanfic pero enserio voy a dejarlo sin terminar porque si les soy sincero no puedo leer un fanfic que tenga a la basura repugnante e inútil de Yuno Gasai Como un protagonista/romance del MC de está genial historia cada ves que la nombran me dan más ganas de que muere de forma horrible y patéticamente
The original is good, it just needed an english translation. Had to slowly witness how the automatic google translate got worse and worse until I just gave up reading the og
Awesome work from the translation and awesome work from the author..!! Magnificent work in the making here and the abundant chapters makes the heart race ..!! The hot blood boils.....it's not over yet..!
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I ain't gonna write all I think about the story imma just say it's pretty decent but a bit weird but that is something I can handle cause the story is good, well at least for now.
The more I read it, the more impressed I become. Actually, the battles in Mirai Nikki are really gorgeous and breathtaking. I already felt like I'm gonna cry when our MC had been severely injured and gone into light particles. In the process of reading a part where he literally died, I thought, that's it. I wanted to drop it, but the final calmed me down, and I felt relieved. So, now I am gonna sleep because I have read it for 5 hours, and my eyes are feeling a little bit bad, you know, it's kinda hard to read it for 5 HOURS!...
Review at ch. 285. First of all, this is a translation. The translator/editor did an excellent job maintaining quality and still having the point of the novel expressed. Now, onto the novel. The background of the novel is interesting and takes a unique perspective on some of the world's involvement. The MC is a former assassin who supposedly has good experience with women, who was reincarnated at Sasuke's cousin. Unfortunately, while the MC is good at seducing random women, it feels like all of the main heroines are somewhat ignored when it comes to progressing the character development and actually making them accept his harem. They turn into yanderes or women who like to mock and rile up the yanderes. These also aren't the good yandere. These are the yanderes who will stab and kill the other heroines or MC if they aren't pacified for the next ten minutes. Instead of dealing with them and solving the issue, the MC says he will get interest out of their backside, which he barely does. Additionally, it turns any new meeting with potential future heroines into a jealousy fest where the MC has to pretend to not be interested, while being berated by the girlfriend where she swears to visit the girls in her head. The story is kind of good with somewhat unique worlds such as Guilty Crown and Future Diaries, but in each world the MC was severely nerfed for no reason other than making things difficult. This provided a false sense of difficulty and didn't actually progress his power until somehow, at the end of Guilty Crown, he absorbed the crystals and became more powerful. It wasn't developed and more just handed to him by circumstance. TLDR: The MC basically let's the heroines who are close to him walk over him and refuses to fix their issues. One example is the girls constantly waste his karma points, which he complains about but still gives it to them without handling it or putting down his foot. Being henpecked is only appropriate it monogamous relationships and gets annoying in harem stories, because it becomes constant whenever there is a new heroine introduced.
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FIrst of all , I would like the translator for translating this book Secondly (. coughing ) . . . I will proceed to shamelessly advertise my book . So . . . go read my own fanfic based of the Infinite genre
This is a great story with a good setting. The main hero has unique power, but so overpowered. All in all, I love his multiverse chat, female characters is the best at all. 👌
I was pretty hype for the story, then he is told he needs to "gather other champions to help save the world" which is just boring tbh. The story has barely began and this dude is already put on recruitment duty. I would put spoiler tag, but it only took me like 20 minutes to read up to where it said this.
FINALLY! The story was great and loved the the setting of the anime Multiverse. I once stop reading cuz I was tired of translating every paragraph when it was only the Spanish version that's available
At starting I thought it was boring from 1 to 4 or 5 but after that it was really interesting and now i am at 140 ch and I really love this.A hidden gem
I didn't know there's a translation! Instant 5star rate because I've read the Original and it's Awesome. I don't know if I'll read in here though, probably if the chapter's close to the orig because I'm up to date there. Keep it up!!!
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I haven't wrote a review of this yet? That's crazy. Anyway if you've come here to read a better than usual fanfic with mashup-anime/comic worlds then you've come to the right place! P.S. Kurumi is best girl.
story's good but the power system/ rules /characters are a mess... even the MC .There are too many contrivances at every turn and they don't even benefit the plot
The story started really losing its touch after the chat group area, not that the chat group was bad, but what's the point of making mc be an assassin in his past life when he isnt even acting like one, he is wayy too immature for someone in that. The author is also VERY HORRENDOUS at writing female characters. As for the good parts, its interesting and engaging, the story is very funny, at times though it feels the author pursues a more lecherous mc or ignores proper character interactions for comedy or hornii. Over all Its ok.
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It's good tho it does get repetitive with the whole oops something has happened and my power is mostly or totally sealed... Again. (this is a translation btw so throw all your annoyance at the original author)
(Harem Spoiler below): 1st of all a thanks to the translator for translating this ff bcz overall it's a really enjoyable fanfic with unique choices for powers and worlds. The only 2 downsides are that if u haven't read or watched the anime of some worlds u will be bored and confused about some things. The 2nd downside is the Author's failure in making the harem believable/acceptable. The Mc is a 13 yr old shota that got 5 women from naruto (tsunade, shizune, ino, hinata, himawari), 4 from guilty crown (inori/mana, tsugumi, ayase, hiraki), and all 6 of his chat members (yami, mikata, la fiola, yuno, kurumi, emilia) and that's not including the danmachi arc yet which i started (ch.150 atm) he has inori next to him yet he openly flirts with chloe and syr.... his solution to this is just sleeping with inori to calm her down since inori and tsugumi accepted the harem idea due to "stamina issues". So yeah nice ff but with a perverted mc that has a functioning pokemon harem due to author bs.
Well why not its a lovely fic all the praise to author DE_LEON :D