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Shameless Author here giving a shameless review. Well I just want to say that this fanfic is just to give one of my favorite character in Dxd some love. Riser is an interesting character for me while reading the novels. I didn't really elaborate from his previous life before he reincarnated and just went straight into the plot I desired to make a fanfic of really. Still I would like to ask readers to give this fanfic a chance, I'd say until Chapter 8. And then you can give a review. Enjoy reading! ^w^
it's a shame there is an interesting background but it's just the original story, riser is exactly the same with a system. It would have been necessary to develop the story more slowly, change the original personality of riser and not just repeat the dialogue from the anime
quite unoriginal wth even the dialogues being the same with the anime the mc is just the original riser with a system
this is pretty much just a retelling of the storyvfrom risers pov, just he's slightly stronger with a system. his personality and character is the exact same and there's is nothing different about the story at all. even when getting a system all he did was nothing. there is nothing interesting about this story at all
Gostei muito agora estou curioso para onde a história vai e por favor volte logo a postar ,.............. ... . ... .. ........,.m.. . .. . ........ . .. . . .. .
Shameless Author here giving a shameless review. Well I just want to say that this fanfic is just to give one of my favorite character in Dxd some love. Riser is an interesting character for me while reading the novels. I didn't really elaborate from his previous life before he reincarnated and just went straight into the plot I desired to make a fanfic of really. Still I would like to ask readers to give this fanfic a chance, I'd say until Chapter 8. And then you can give a review. Enjoy reading! ^w^
it's a shame there is an interesting background but it's just the original story, riser is exactly the same with a system. It would have been necessary to develop the story more slowly, change the original personality of riser and not just repeat the dialogue from the anime
quite unoriginal wth even the dialogues being the same with the anime the mc is just the original riser with a system
this is pretty much just a retelling of the storyvfrom risers pov, just he's slightly stronger with a system. his personality and character is the exact same and there's is nothing different about the story at all. even when getting a system all he did was nothing. there is nothing interesting about this story at all
Gostei muito agora estou curioso para onde a história vai e por favor volte logo a postar ,.............. ... . ... .. ........,.m.. . .. . ........ . .. . . .. .