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The grammar is shit. then there is the overused British dialect which assaults the reader in every passage . and lastly the lag is just horrendous .
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so the first 3 chapters are about the REAL MC then 30 chapters of simulation and looks like it's going to have even more.
Hmm well the Idea of this is good like really good but there are some problems here and there but hey its ok as long as u don't abandon this many people will still watch this. Also can we not stop picking up girls like pebbles or something and make the mc have interection with more DC character's
Thirty one chapters and the main character has technically done nothing but lay in bed.
This is a really interesting story and i dont know where all the bad reviews come from, i just hope it doesnt discourage you from continuing this create story Author-san
I’m going to be honest this fic needed more than life to it compare to the hallow fic which I can see development this just feels lost
at this point, the whole book will be about the misfits universe. besides, we've not seen him do anything worthwhile in DC
la historia tiene potencial pero no la estas manejando bien si le vas a dar una sistema de simulación mundial no podes hacer que las simulaciones sean tan largas deberían durar entre 1 y 3 capítulos máximo sino la historia pierde su foco del MC en su mundo con sus habilidades. te estas enfocando demasiado en las simulaciones como si fuera el mc original reencarnado en ese mundo y lo estas desarrollando así no habría problema si ese fuera el foco de la historia pero no lo es solo debería ser una parte del sistema que ayudara al MC a fortalecerse
This could have been so much more, This type of concept is quite nice, But as always for some books the author ruins a great concept with horniness and trash development, 😢😢 pls someone take this concept and make a actual book.
I expected for the simulations to be quick, a few discriptions or a whole chapter even! More than half of the chapters are just one simulation!!! Yeah, ima let this amass a hundred chapters before I get back
It looks primising if the author really want to write something original sometime, but until chapter 15, 80% was just some copy and paste of the original show with the Mc just saying one phrase per chapter...
Good work ngl I coudnt get into your other book it just wasn't for me this on the other hand has me hooked keep up the good work
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The simulation is not the same as I expected. Is the world in the simulation even relevant to the original world? I doubt this story would even reach 100 chapters at this rate. Chances are, the author would drop this without even reaching the 2nd or 3rd simulation.
The grammar is shit. then there is the overused British dialect which assaults the reader in every passage . and lastly the lag is just horrendous .
ネタバレを明かす so the first 3 chapters are about the REAL MC then 30 chapters of simulation and looks like it's going to have even more.
Hmm well the Idea of this is good like really good but there are some problems here and there but hey its ok as long as u don't abandon this many people will still watch this. Also can we not stop picking up girls like pebbles or something and make the mc have interection with more DC character's
Thirty one chapters and the main character has technically done nothing but lay in bed.
This is a really interesting story and i dont know where all the bad reviews come from, i just hope it doesnt discourage you from continuing this create story Author-san
I’m going to be honest this fic needed more than life to it compare to the hallow fic which I can see development this just feels lost
at this point, the whole book will be about the misfits universe. besides, we've not seen him do anything worthwhile in DC
la historia tiene potencial pero no la estas manejando bien si le vas a dar una sistema de simulación mundial no podes hacer que las simulaciones sean tan largas deberían durar entre 1 y 3 capítulos máximo sino la historia pierde su foco del MC en su mundo con sus habilidades. te estas enfocando demasiado en las simulaciones como si fuera el mc original reencarnado en ese mundo y lo estas desarrollando así no habría problema si ese fuera el foco de la historia pero no lo es solo debería ser una parte del sistema que ayudara al MC a fortalecerse
This could have been so much more, This type of concept is quite nice, But as always for some books the author ruins a great concept with horniness and trash development, 😢😢 pls someone take this concept and make a actual book.
I expected for the simulations to be quick, a few discriptions or a whole chapter even! More than half of the chapters are just one simulation!!! Yeah, ima let this amass a hundred chapters before I get back
It looks primising if the author really want to write something original sometime, but until chapter 15, 80% was just some copy and paste of the original show with the Mc just saying one phrase per chapter...
Good work ngl I coudnt get into your other book it just wasn't for me this on the other hand has me hooked keep up the good work
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The simulation is not the same as I expected. Is the world in the simulation even relevant to the original world? I doubt this story would even reach 100 chapters at this rate. Chances are, the author would drop this without even reaching the 2nd or 3rd simulation.