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Smoker appears as a child in the beginning chapters, will the story be non-canon?[img=proud][img=proud][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=angry][img=angry]
the translation for first 20 or so chapter is pretty bad as the author said, but thankfully it have improve. its rare to get a Marine ff, so im enjoying it right now
Очень хорошая работа Приятное не китайское имя персонажа вписывающееся в мир Именно те способности персонажа, о которых я давно мечтал прочитать
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It's not a bad story, but it's extremely cliché. He is basically a very strong MC who is part of the Navy. ( I'm using a translator, so forgive me if there are a lot of grammatical errors)
Interesting story and nice plot. Good daily updates. Overall, this is a good fanfiction story, only ruined by Translation quality. The translation is... Like Machine Translated, put into Grammar apps, then fixing names. Readable, but have to do lots of auto-correct in my mind. Translator should try to read more non-translated (original) english story to improve
whoever said this is a good translation must read at least a children's story book. I really really tried to read this and give it a chance. I dont think even the translator is reading what he is uploading.
I really like this story so far, there's not a lot of marine based one piece fanfiction and finding this makes me really happy.
Прекрасная работа, мне очень понравилась. Герой харизматичный и при этом не является излишне высокомерным и заносчивым. Также здраво оценивает свои силы и раньше времени слишком активно не выступает против Мирового Правительства, хотя и по прибытию на Сабаоди стал действовать смелее. Очень жду продолжения.
I would be shocked if this isn't amazing, this is ONE of the greatest if not THE greatest TRANSLATION to ever exist. The author must translate more, he must bring more joy to this world.
VERY GOOD TRANSLATION.......................................................................................................................................
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Solid fanfic so far. The writing quality isn’t great and there’s a number of grammatical errors, but it’s not bad by webnovel standards. If you’re used to reading mtl or chinese translated fics then you’ll be fine with the grammar, and btw this fic doesn’t have a chinese feel.
It's been a while since I found a good One Piece Fanfic, until I came across this one, without a doubt a good story, a constant development and visible growth in the protagonist based on effort and with a somewhat curious but nostalgic cheat. 10/10[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend]
You are doing great. Keep it up 👍 ////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////%%%%%%%%%%%%%///////////////////
Carrying the tradition of author review(though i am just a translator). The story will end at 500 chapter, and the update rate is 7 per week, bonus chapters will be available when reaching a goal, special days, or having a new patreon member. Enjoy the story, Add it to your library and comment any thoughts you have.
Smoker appears as a child in the beginning chapters, will the story be non-canon?[img=proud][img=proud][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=angry][img=angry]
the translation for first 20 or so chapter is pretty bad as the author said, but thankfully it have improve. its rare to get a Marine ff, so im enjoying it right now
Очень хорошая работа Приятное не китайское имя персонажа вписывающееся в мир Именно те способности персонажа, о которых я давно мечтал прочитать
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It's not a bad story, but it's extremely cliché. He is basically a very strong MC who is part of the Navy. ( I'm using a translator, so forgive me if there are a lot of grammatical errors)
Interesting story and nice plot. Good daily updates. Overall, this is a good fanfiction story, only ruined by Translation quality. The translation is... Like Machine Translated, put into Grammar apps, then fixing names. Readable, but have to do lots of auto-correct in my mind. Translator should try to read more non-translated (original) english story to improve
whoever said this is a good translation must read at least a children's story book. I really really tried to read this and give it a chance. I dont think even the translator is reading what he is uploading.
I really like this story so far, there's not a lot of marine based one piece fanfiction and finding this makes me really happy.
Прекрасная работа, мне очень понравилась. Герой харизматичный и при этом не является излишне высокомерным и заносчивым. Также здраво оценивает свои силы и раньше времени слишком активно не выступает против Мирового Правительства, хотя и по прибытию на Сабаоди стал действовать смелее. Очень жду продолжения.
I would be shocked if this isn't amazing, this is ONE of the greatest if not THE greatest TRANSLATION to ever exist. The author must translate more, he must bring more joy to this world.
VERY GOOD TRANSLATION.......................................................................................................................................
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Solid fanfic so far. The writing quality isn’t great and there’s a number of grammatical errors, but it’s not bad by webnovel standards. If you’re used to reading mtl or chinese translated fics then you’ll be fine with the grammar, and btw this fic doesn’t have a chinese feel.
It's been a while since I found a good One Piece Fanfic, until I came across this one, without a doubt a good story, a constant development and visible growth in the protagonist based on effort and with a somewhat curious but nostalgic cheat. 10/10[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend]
You are doing great. Keep it up 👍 ////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////%%%%%%%%%%%%%///////////////////
Carrying the tradition of author review(though i am just a translator). The story will end at 500 chapter, and the update rate is 7 per week, bonus chapters will be available when reaching a goal, special days, or having a new patreon member. Enjoy the story, Add it to your library and comment any thoughts you have.