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This 'story' is akin to someone with ADHD who is fond of lucid dreaming. I read about 25 chapters and only 6 of them progressed the plot and narrative with drawn out narration and exposition that literally adds nothing to the book. Do yourself a favour and find a real story to read, this is just terrible.
This book is way better than it has any right to be & as the point I'm writing this is one of my favorite stories on the app
It's not my cup of tea. It comes across as written by someone projecting their personal issues onto the DxD work. There's no fun to be found. Familial love is replaced with bitterness, loathing, and revolting levels of angst. It's well written; I just don't know why the author's writing this into DxD. In essence, it would be great if it were an original novel. As a fanfiction though, it's disturbing.
a very good fanfiction if u compare it other dxd fics on this platform if u want read similar dxd fanfic i recommend [ Understanding the void] not as good as this fic but better than most other dxd fic on this platform
one of the very few good dxd self insert out there. I mostly avoid fmc fics but this is written so good that this just works out despite my taste and the brilliant and seamless crossover I have seen only one other dxd fic (some marvel× dxd fic with a human magician mc and oc scared gear with power to look in into something's past)
its's quite nice. but i don't like the relationship with Akeno. especially her bossy attitude at our main character. even if it's only "in bed". she should be more respectful. for only this reason my rate Will be low. extremely low. was my rating truthful and deserving? maybe no. am i petty absolutely!
ネタバレを明かす
odio cuando en una relación Yuri meten pollas en medio, y más cuando es al MC al que se joden, me asquea
One of the best fics i have read about dxd definetly the most detaild one i would recomend for all to read its straigth fire 🔥🔥🔥🔥
Writing style is incredible , I love that someone actually knows lore in depth. also I'm at like chapter 9 or sumn but when do Akeno and Rias get married (date, get together, whatever term u wanna use really)
One of the most seamless crossovers i have ever had the pleasure of reading and the quality of the authors writing is really deserving of 5 stars. I cant imagine how to do it better, a must read for any fan of mature and complex writing.
I love the story, the way it develops and most of all Rias' personality and power development.
The story is really great! It's as if I wasn't reading a fanfiction, but a whole new story. I don't know how it will develop from now on, since I never even heard about sandman and only have rudimentary knowledge of dxd, but from how it's going so far, I am sure it's gonna be great. 10 out of 10
Pretty good fic with a bunch of minor crossover references. FMC is rias and I know some people have trouble with her but she is more of a self-insert than anything canon. I don't know where it mentions what powers mc chose, but in first chapters rias triggers (which is the way of obtaining superpower in worm/parahuman by Wildbow) and yea the power levels in that world is absolutely bonkers. (they have kaiju known as Endbringer which attacks the world cities every 3 months) and it's pretty much a grim apocalypse world with a lot of messed up stuff and this fic looks to be highly like that as well.The one thing I don't like is kinda small but it's the teenage angst or I guess the romance. I haven't read any F/F relationship so it's very weird for me, but yeah you can prob ignore that. give this fic a try you won't regret it.P.S where is canon? coz author is writing a story that is far from canon you will ask the same question lolI recently got into worm so correct me if i am wrong though.
Definitely a very well written and fantastic story so far by chapter 14, with a plethora of much more complex characters across the board. The main character is very interesting and the way she grows in power fits very well in this more complex world, allowing her to grow quickly but still needing hard work and perseverance. The supernatural aspects are done incredibly well as well, since Fallen Angles, Devils, and so on actually fell like they are more than human rather than their species just being cool window dressing. The world building and altered history is also very well done making you sympathize with even some of the villains and root for the side characters just as much, even as you spill a tear or two. All in all, I highly recommend this story.
protagonista é muito inconsistente, odeio esse protagonista mal feitos, ela não sabe se odeia ou ama, é o tipo de gente que se uma mulher chorar por causa dela, ela se arrepende, entende, ela não tem consistência
May god bless this peak fiction. I love how the author improved upon the original by making very character in this fic feel so much more human and nuanced. Muah! Chef's kiss!
I like how you are showing the devil in dxd that they are more than human and not human.But I don't like the cheats you have given to OC(rias) she has the essence of evolution which means she will never lose any fight and grow stronger with every fight and become the strongest being there is no suspense left for me.Try to do something this issue
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I'll be honest here, this is amazing and my rating reflects it, however I don't think I'll continue reading it. I haven't read Sandman, but I know enough to know that a crossover tends to get out of hand very quickly when it get involved. It's a preference of mine, but I'm more into street fighting or on a scale I can understand, once you enter such high realms of power my brain just shuts down. What I'm trying to say is that even though that kind of scale isn't my cup of tea, this is still a very good fanfic. All the best. ^.^
Amazing book never thought that a Rias SI fanfic would be so good to read............................................................................
tremenda obra maestra 20 de 10 y god. hasta ahora el mejor fanfic de DXD, y eso que solo tiene 3 capitulos.
Not gonna lie with the quality of chapters 1 to 3 were great don’t have anything bad to say and I don’t know how long these chapters take to write but takes some break if needed to continue this good fanfic
I like this book............................,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,. ,,,..,.,.,,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,,.,.,..,,.....,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.
This 'story' is akin to someone with ADHD who is fond of lucid dreaming. I read about 25 chapters and only 6 of them progressed the plot and narrative with drawn out narration and exposition that literally adds nothing to the book. Do yourself a favour and find a real story to read, this is just terrible.
This book is way better than it has any right to be & as the point I'm writing this is one of my favorite stories on the app
It's not my cup of tea. It comes across as written by someone projecting their personal issues onto the DxD work. There's no fun to be found. Familial love is replaced with bitterness, loathing, and revolting levels of angst. It's well written; I just don't know why the author's writing this into DxD. In essence, it would be great if it were an original novel. As a fanfiction though, it's disturbing.
a very good fanfiction if u compare it other dxd fics on this platform if u want read similar dxd fanfic i recommend [ Understanding the void] not as good as this fic but better than most other dxd fic on this platform
one of the very few good dxd self insert out there. I mostly avoid fmc fics but this is written so good that this just works out despite my taste and the brilliant and seamless crossover I have seen only one other dxd fic (some marvel× dxd fic with a human magician mc and oc scared gear with power to look in into something's past)
its's quite nice. but i don't like the relationship with Akeno. especially her bossy attitude at our main character. even if it's only "in bed". she should be more respectful. for only this reason my rate Will be low. extremely low. was my rating truthful and deserving? maybe no. am i petty absolutely!
ネタバレを明かす odio cuando en una relación Yuri meten pollas en medio, y más cuando es al MC al que se joden, me asquea
One of the best fics i have read about dxd definetly the most detaild one i would recomend for all to read its straigth fire 🔥🔥🔥🔥
Writing style is incredible , I love that someone actually knows lore in depth. also I'm at like chapter 9 or sumn but when do Akeno and Rias get married (date, get together, whatever term u wanna use really)
One of the most seamless crossovers i have ever had the pleasure of reading and the quality of the authors writing is really deserving of 5 stars. I cant imagine how to do it better, a must read for any fan of mature and complex writing.
I love the story, the way it develops and most of all Rias' personality and power development.
The story is really great! It's as if I wasn't reading a fanfiction, but a whole new story. I don't know how it will develop from now on, since I never even heard about sandman and only have rudimentary knowledge of dxd, but from how it's going so far, I am sure it's gonna be great. 10 out of 10
Pretty good fic with a bunch of minor crossover references. FMC is rias and I know some people have trouble with her but she is more of a self-insert than anything canon. I don't know where it mentions what powers mc chose, but in first chapters rias triggers (which is the way of obtaining superpower in worm/parahuman by Wildbow) and yea the power levels in that world is absolutely bonkers. (they have kaiju known as Endbringer which attacks the world cities every 3 months) and it's pretty much a grim apocalypse world with a lot of messed up stuff and this fic looks to be highly like that as well.The one thing I don't like is kinda small but it's the teenage angst or I guess the romance. I haven't read any F/F relationship so it's very weird for me, but yeah you can prob ignore that. give this fic a try you won't regret it.P.S where is canon? coz author is writing a story that is far from canon you will ask the same question lolI recently got into worm so correct me if i am wrong though.
Definitely a very well written and fantastic story so far by chapter 14, with a plethora of much more complex characters across the board. The main character is very interesting and the way she grows in power fits very well in this more complex world, allowing her to grow quickly but still needing hard work and perseverance. The supernatural aspects are done incredibly well as well, since Fallen Angles, Devils, and so on actually fell like they are more than human rather than their species just being cool window dressing. The world building and altered history is also very well done making you sympathize with even some of the villains and root for the side characters just as much, even as you spill a tear or two. All in all, I highly recommend this story.
protagonista é muito inconsistente, odeio esse protagonista mal feitos, ela não sabe se odeia ou ama, é o tipo de gente que se uma mulher chorar por causa dela, ela se arrepende, entende, ela não tem consistência
May god bless this peak fiction. I love how the author improved upon the original by making very character in this fic feel so much more human and nuanced. Muah! Chef's kiss!
I like how you are showing the devil in dxd that they are more than human and not human.But I don't like the cheats you have given to OC(rias) she has the essence of evolution which means she will never lose any fight and grow stronger with every fight and become the strongest being there is no suspense left for me.Try to do something this issue
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I'll be honest here, this is amazing and my rating reflects it, however I don't think I'll continue reading it. I haven't read Sandman, but I know enough to know that a crossover tends to get out of hand very quickly when it get involved. It's a preference of mine, but I'm more into street fighting or on a scale I can understand, once you enter such high realms of power my brain just shuts down. What I'm trying to say is that even though that kind of scale isn't my cup of tea, this is still a very good fanfic. All the best. ^.^
Amazing book never thought that a Rias SI fanfic would be so good to read............................................................................
tremenda obra maestra 20 de 10 y god. hasta ahora el mejor fanfic de DXD, y eso que solo tiene 3 capitulos.
Not gonna lie with the quality of chapters 1 to 3 were great don’t have anything bad to say and I don’t know how long these chapters take to write but takes some break if needed to continue this good fanfic
I like this book............................,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,. ,,,..,.,.,,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,,.,.,..,,.....,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.
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