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The story is well writtenThe author does a great job at building her world Great story! I love the background, This novel really has potential.
Honestly, I love the characters and their interactions! There are no forced scenes and the story flow is simply fantastic. Keep up the good work!!
Good book and great story line. It has an excellent paces in the story and lots of fantastic paces that would drag most teens. Good book author, keep it up
I love a good NSFW book and I can tell I will enjoy this one very much! Can’t wait for more chapters, this story goes stright into my library! I’d gladly do as many reviews as needed. Leave one under my novel, I’ll track you down and help you with yours 😉
I don't read 18+ web novels very often but I like where the plot is going. the overall plot structure is good but in terms of the story pace it's a bit slow so I feel your characters are all over the place reading at some points in the story but you have an excellent distribution of dialogue. You also have a distinctive writing style that separates you from other authors which is a huge positive, but I'd like to say you should keep writing this story. Keep working hard author! :D
I tagged it weak to strong because the fl won't conquer the world or anything like that. She will just win her emotions and herself. Everybody knows what 18+ is. I don't need to explain that tag. As the title says, this is gonna burn you. Fun fact: FL can conquer the heart of readers too. 😉
I guess I'm in a good mood. I'll give this 5 stars. This story has good writing, nice updates, impressive description, cool characters, and a respectful background for this sort of story. I invite the author to check out my adventure fanfic "Avatar: The Vindicated Avenger (TLV)". It is a spinoff of "Avatar: Macai's Journey (AMJ)". It might help to read the first 1-3 chapters of AMJ first, but I really don't think that's necessary to enjoy this one.
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The story is well writtenThe author does a great job at building her world Great story! I love the background, This novel really has potential.
Honestly, I love the characters and their interactions! There are no forced scenes and the story flow is simply fantastic. Keep up the good work!!
Good book and great story line. It has an excellent paces in the story and lots of fantastic paces that would drag most teens. Good book author, keep it up
I love a good NSFW book and I can tell I will enjoy this one very much! Can’t wait for more chapters, this story goes stright into my library! I’d gladly do as many reviews as needed. Leave one under my novel, I’ll track you down and help you with yours 😉
I don't read 18+ web novels very often but I like where the plot is going. the overall plot structure is good but in terms of the story pace it's a bit slow so I feel your characters are all over the place reading at some points in the story but you have an excellent distribution of dialogue. You also have a distinctive writing style that separates you from other authors which is a huge positive, but I'd like to say you should keep writing this story. Keep working hard author! :D
I tagged it weak to strong because the fl won't conquer the world or anything like that. She will just win her emotions and herself. Everybody knows what 18+ is. I don't need to explain that tag. As the title says, this is gonna burn you. Fun fact: FL can conquer the heart of readers too. 😉
I guess I'm in a good mood. I'll give this 5 stars. This story has good writing, nice updates, impressive description, cool characters, and a respectful background for this sort of story. I invite the author to check out my adventure fanfic "Avatar: The Vindicated Avenger (TLV)". It is a spinoff of "Avatar: Macai's Journey (AMJ)". It might help to read the first 1-3 chapters of AMJ first, but I really don't think that's necessary to enjoy this one.