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I love your story! It's very well written and has a good plot that manages to hook any reader in! I hope to see more of your work soon! Especially to see how will he interact with Makima.
sinceramente es interesante el tema,pero siento que está demasiado roto desde el principio (a menos que le subas el poder a los personajes en general,sino estaría demasiado desbalanceado) xD
Love it so far but I want more of his backstory but everything else is good
I love your story! It's very well written and has a good plot that manages to hook any reader in! I hope to see more of your work soon! Especially to see how will he interact with Makima.
sinceramente es interesante el tema,pero siento que está demasiado roto desde el principio (a menos que le subas el poder a los personajes en general,sino estaría demasiado desbalanceado) xD
Love it so far but I want more of his backstory but everything else is good
Need more of this story, it's very interesting