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The story started out great and had a good premise but the progress of the MC's power was to fast and by his second simulation world Danmachi is no longer even important to the story and the future of the story would rely on him using the simulator as he is already the strongest adventurer after just 1 month and Bell hasn't even came to Orario yet. He can no longer level up in the dungeon and needs to do simulations for achievements as he is as strong as a level 7 at level 2 destroying the worldview. He also has a weird obsession with Hestia but hardly ever interacts with her. The world of Danmachi at this point is no longer even important to the story and has become a slice of life harem world for his enjoyment the only real story left is his future confrontation with Freya I guess and maybe him killing the dragon.
Muy buena historia, una de las mejores que leí, la trama es muy original y no es como otra que haya leído(desde mi punto de vista). Me encantó.
o protagonista é um lixo, ele da as técnicas dele para pessoas que acusaram e tentaram matar ele e ele deu as técnicas dele, so porque são mulheres, nem da mesma familia é.
is there a system here? i would like it if there was, but it will still be good even if there wasn't a system just hard work
At the start it was good… but after a few chapters it got worse.. not recommended to read
I don't know who needs it but you can go to mtlarchive.com and read upwards to over 300 chapters
It was a fun story to read and pass the time. Today I'm unfollowing. For those who want to know if it's worth reading, it's a decent fanfic, and it quickly passes the time reading. But if you want to read to get hooked, I don't recommend it. The author doesn't usually finish his work, and doesn't focus on a single story.
Come back author!!! I can't stand looking for something decent to read, and only finding rubbish! You write so well man! Forget about your other stories and focus here for a bit! Please! Hahaha Congratulations on the work here!
It has a lot of potential! The relationship that the MC builds alongside Hephy is step by step, which is very rewarding! It's not forced... I hope the author continues, it's one of my favorite Danmachi stories!
it's a good story, but I stopped after ch 145 because 146 is missing and just goes to 147.
Great story, the only problem I found was the quick development of the character, despite the 154 chapters... I think it could have been developed more in the main world part, the MC has little Interaction with everyone, so in my opinion, whoever is reading feels less attached to the development of the MC.But I really like the story a lot
Really like the concept, although the pacing is good at beginning but it became too fast at the end. Otherwise, awesome, a must read.
The story is not there, to a certain extent it is entertaining. The problem is that at some point too many characters were added and the protagonist was somewhat forgotten. Like a filler, but it's not anime.
everything is good, the only flaw was everything that MC got from his simulation went to hestia while he IS member of Hephaestus family, and mc might or (if not) already quit and joining hestia
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You are doing a good job and I just don't like the character too much but it's not ypur fault .It's too much Hestia this Hestia that but she is great legal Loli well there is Illiya from Fate who is cute but then again she is illegal in some stories .Also can you tell me the MtL Version? I like to loose my Iq quite a bit
The story at first was good, but as it went on I got more and more lazy about reading it. I don't understand the MC, if you like Hestia why don't you just join the Hestia family instead of Hephaestus, he's like a traitor because of everything he did for Hestia, and used the Hephaestus family for his own security. I wonder if when he gets stronger he will leave the Hephaestus family and become the Hestia family🤣🤣. I think he's just like Hestia's slave, all for Hestia. He didn't have a stance, he just agreed with everything Hestia said and prioritized Hestia over Hephaestus when the two argued. This is my personal opinion about this novel. Thank you😁
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Harem Always, 😆😆 But apart from that I'm liking it very much. keep the updates rolling. 🙂🤘👍
The main character is obsessed with Hestia for no reason. I hope it will be fixed as the story continues ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
The story started out great and had a good premise but the progress of the MC's power was to fast and by his second simulation world Danmachi is no longer even important to the story and the future of the story would rely on him using the simulator as he is already the strongest adventurer after just 1 month and Bell hasn't even came to Orario yet. He can no longer level up in the dungeon and needs to do simulations for achievements as he is as strong as a level 7 at level 2 destroying the worldview. He also has a weird obsession with Hestia but hardly ever interacts with her. The world of Danmachi at this point is no longer even important to the story and has become a slice of life harem world for his enjoyment the only real story left is his future confrontation with Freya I guess and maybe him killing the dragon.
Muy buena historia, una de las mejores que leí, la trama es muy original y no es como otra que haya leído(desde mi punto de vista). Me encantó.
o protagonista é um lixo, ele da as técnicas dele para pessoas que acusaram e tentaram matar ele e ele deu as técnicas dele, so porque são mulheres, nem da mesma familia é.
is there a system here? i would like it if there was, but it will still be good even if there wasn't a system just hard work
At the start it was good… but after a few chapters it got worse.. not recommended to read
I don't know who needs it but you can go to mtlarchive.com and read upwards to over 300 chapters
It was a fun story to read and pass the time. Today I'm unfollowing. For those who want to know if it's worth reading, it's a decent fanfic, and it quickly passes the time reading. But if you want to read to get hooked, I don't recommend it. The author doesn't usually finish his work, and doesn't focus on a single story.
Come back author!!! I can't stand looking for something decent to read, and only finding rubbish! You write so well man! Forget about your other stories and focus here for a bit! Please! Hahaha Congratulations on the work here!
It has a lot of potential! The relationship that the MC builds alongside Hephy is step by step, which is very rewarding! It's not forced... I hope the author continues, it's one of my favorite Danmachi stories!
it's a good story, but I stopped after ch 145 because 146 is missing and just goes to 147.
Great story, the only problem I found was the quick development of the character, despite the 154 chapters... I think it could have been developed more in the main world part, the MC has little Interaction with everyone, so in my opinion, whoever is reading feels less attached to the development of the MC.But I really like the story a lot
Really like the concept, although the pacing is good at beginning but it became too fast at the end. Otherwise, awesome, a must read.
The story is not there, to a certain extent it is entertaining. The problem is that at some point too many characters were added and the protagonist was somewhat forgotten. Like a filler, but it's not anime.
everything is good, the only flaw was everything that MC got from his simulation went to hestia while he IS member of Hephaestus family, and mc might or (if not) already quit and joining hestia
,🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🎈🎈🎈🎈🎈🎈🎈🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳😱😱😱☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️😍😍😍😍😍😀😍😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😃😃😄😍😄🥰😙🥰😚🥰😚🥰😚😍😍😚😍😍😍😉😉😀😀😃😃😃😃😃 just read, is to goood.
You are doing a good job and I just don't like the character too much but it's not ypur fault .It's too much Hestia this Hestia that but she is great legal Loli well there is Illiya from Fate who is cute but then again she is illegal in some stories .Also can you tell me the MtL Version? I like to loose my Iq quite a bit
The story at first was good, but as it went on I got more and more lazy about reading it. I don't understand the MC, if you like Hestia why don't you just join the Hestia family instead of Hephaestus, he's like a traitor because of everything he did for Hestia, and used the Hephaestus family for his own security. I wonder if when he gets stronger he will leave the Hephaestus family and become the Hestia family🤣🤣. I think he's just like Hestia's slave, all for Hestia. He didn't have a stance, he just agreed with everything Hestia said and prioritized Hestia over Hephaestus when the two argued. This is my personal opinion about this novel. Thank you😁
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Harem Always, 😆😆 But apart from that I'm liking it very much. keep the updates rolling. 🙂🤘👍
The main character is obsessed with Hestia for no reason. I hope it will be fixed as the story continues ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------