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Me encanto la historia, pero después de que se fusiono con Osiris se me fue la chispa, la verdad que ese cliché de conseguir un simbionte y conquistar planetas como que paso de moda. La escritura y el desarrollo es muy bueno la verdad, yo esperaba mas una historia tipo viajes de exploración universal, no de formar un imperio, pero esta buena igual, seguí así que vas bien escribiendo
Was very good story until MC is replaced by goa'uld. Just couldn't keep reading after that even though the writing quality is actually good.
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It was a really great story until chapter 12. Like I loved the entire premise of the story, I looked forward to what could happen. Then the author pulls a 180, offs the MC we've come to like and replaces him with a human form goo a oold (Stargate symbiote) with a god complex.
1 star for gatekeeping content behind paywalls. I don't mean 'advanced chapters' but lemons. You should add a capital Z at the end of your username, because that's some scummy behavior. Before anyone goes "it's just lemons, they don't really add to the story" it's irrelevant of *what* is being locked behind paywalls, it's the principle of the thing
So much wasted potential. The story started out good, but then the author just dropped another character in with no thought, and then basically mentally killed the MC.
it was so good till like chapter 8 where the author basically killed off harry potter
Was going so well until the author decided to combine the memory of Osiris (random alien) with harry.
This is one of those stories where the author thinks it's a good idea to do a complete personality replace 12 chapters into the story. Yes, it's written well, yes it logically follows plot, no it isn't a good plot device to initiate after we start getting attached to the characters. Honestly, calling it Harry Potter is little more than pure clickbait by chapter 12. The MC picks up the first stray he sees, which just happened to be an old foe. She gets mad at him for not being boyfriend material when he's JUST letting her stay as a houseguest until she gets back on her feet. She inadvertently triggers a mega crisis event, one that MC could handle solo but is screwed over because she exists - noting that she has done practically nothing for the story so far, so she exists solo as an instrument of chaos. Now, after she causes chaos and pretty much ruins everything, they're basically married. Yeah, it's basically mind control from there on. This story is just a bunch of annoying plot points in sequence.
In truth, every time I see a crossover between some Magic World and Sci-Fi World, I am always very skeptical... though this time, my fears were proven wrong... - One huge plus for the Empire Building that is in the early stages, very early but it is clear that it would become important point in the story - Another probably the biggest plus, finally I seen fanfic that is also focuses on the Gau'uld, I have always though that the Gau'uld species had tremendous potential and were undeveloped. This story has a good potential if it is steadily developed, hopefully, it is not dropped (it would be tremendous loss for the world of fanfics, there are too few on StarGate and good ones at that...)
Good Job! More Please! I want mooore. Mooore. Good Job! More Please! I want mooore. Mooore. Good Job! More Please! I want mooore. Mooore. Good Job! More Please! I want mooore. Mooore.
I love Stargate, more please. I love Stargate, more please. I love Stargate, more please. I love Stargate, more please. I love Stargate, more please.
It's stargate and hp, Stargate being my favoite series of all time ever. I have never read such a combo before and so far I'm really liking it! Keep it up! And thanks!
this story is so good that I always get annoyed when I reach the end of the chapter because I know I'm going to have to wait another day to read the next one
Author did a character/personality replacement at chapter 10. Completely ruined the story they were building with the change. Don't know why they bothered putting it under "Harry Potter" except for the views it would bring. Not worth reading at this point.
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Me encanto la historia, pero después de que se fusiono con Osiris se me fue la chispa, la verdad que ese cliché de conseguir un simbionte y conquistar planetas como que paso de moda. La escritura y el desarrollo es muy bueno la verdad, yo esperaba mas una historia tipo viajes de exploración universal, no de formar un imperio, pero esta buena igual, seguí así que vas bien escribiendo
Was very good story until MC is replaced by goa'uld. Just couldn't keep reading after that even though the writing quality is actually good.
+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
It was a really great story until chapter 12. Like I loved the entire premise of the story, I looked forward to what could happen. Then the author pulls a 180, offs the MC we've come to like and replaces him with a human form goo a oold (Stargate symbiote) with a god complex.
1 star for gatekeeping content behind paywalls. I don't mean 'advanced chapters' but lemons. You should add a capital Z at the end of your username, because that's some scummy behavior. Before anyone goes "it's just lemons, they don't really add to the story" it's irrelevant of *what* is being locked behind paywalls, it's the principle of the thing
So much wasted potential. The story started out good, but then the author just dropped another character in with no thought, and then basically mentally killed the MC.
it was so good till like chapter 8 where the author basically killed off harry potter
Was going so well until the author decided to combine the memory of Osiris (random alien) with harry.
This is one of those stories where the author thinks it's a good idea to do a complete personality replace 12 chapters into the story. Yes, it's written well, yes it logically follows plot, no it isn't a good plot device to initiate after we start getting attached to the characters. Honestly, calling it Harry Potter is little more than pure clickbait by chapter 12. The MC picks up the first stray he sees, which just happened to be an old foe. She gets mad at him for not being boyfriend material when he's JUST letting her stay as a houseguest until she gets back on her feet. She inadvertently triggers a mega crisis event, one that MC could handle solo but is screwed over because she exists - noting that she has done practically nothing for the story so far, so she exists solo as an instrument of chaos. Now, after she causes chaos and pretty much ruins everything, they're basically married. Yeah, it's basically mind control from there on. This story is just a bunch of annoying plot points in sequence.
In truth, every time I see a crossover between some Magic World and Sci-Fi World, I am always very skeptical... though this time, my fears were proven wrong... - One huge plus for the Empire Building that is in the early stages, very early but it is clear that it would become important point in the story - Another probably the biggest plus, finally I seen fanfic that is also focuses on the Gau'uld, I have always though that the Gau'uld species had tremendous potential and were undeveloped. This story has a good potential if it is steadily developed, hopefully, it is not dropped (it would be tremendous loss for the world of fanfics, there are too few on StarGate and good ones at that...)
Good Job! More Please! I want mooore. Mooore. Good Job! More Please! I want mooore. Mooore. Good Job! More Please! I want mooore. Mooore. Good Job! More Please! I want mooore. Mooore.
I love Stargate, more please. I love Stargate, more please. I love Stargate, more please. I love Stargate, more please. I love Stargate, more please.
It's stargate and hp, Stargate being my favoite series of all time ever. I have never read such a combo before and so far I'm really liking it! Keep it up! And thanks!
this story is so good that I always get annoyed when I reach the end of the chapter because I know I'm going to have to wait another day to read the next one
Author did a character/personality replacement at chapter 10. Completely ruined the story they were building with the change. Don't know why they bothered putting it under "Harry Potter" except for the views it would bring. Not worth reading at this point.