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章 11: Chapter-11

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"It's not over yet!"

"The Yuan Dan has been completed; then the following is the turn of the spiritual power." 

Once Lin Dong's mind moved, the spiritual power within the Mud Pill Palace began to become active. Only to see that a natal spiritual talisman within the Mud Pill Palace had already cracked a rather large opening, just a hair short of complete separation.

"The third original spiritual talisman comes out!"

The spiritual power in the Mud Pill Palace was also pouring into the attempted splitting of the original spirit talisman. Under this source of infusion, a crisp sound, "click," signaled the final splitting of the original spirit talisman.

The third original spirit talisman appeared!

The Third Seal Talisman Master, becomes!

"Wooo~"

With the accomplishment of the third original spirit talisman, the storm of spiritual energy that kept swirling inside the Mud Pill Palace slowly came to a stop.

"Small Yuan Dan realm, three seal talisman master, is indeed quite a powerful force. With my current strength, Yuan Power and spiritual power superimposed, facing Yuan Dan Great Perfection has no problem; I have an 80% chance of victory."

Lin Dong slightly opened his eyes, spread his hands, and silently felt the majestic power flowing through his body, an unexplained feeling of joy gushing out inside.

...

The sun gradually rose, and a new day began. The entire Lin family grounds also became lively because today is the Lin family's annual clan competition, where the Lin family's young life disciples showcase their skills.

Countless Lin family fathers and daughters, with their sons and daughters, quickly rushed to the Lin family's trial hall. Of course, this included Lin Xiao, Lin Dong, and Qing Tan.

In the eastern part of the Lin family's inner district, the Trial Hall awaited.

The entry of Lin Xiao's three people immediately caught the attention of a lean man standing at the entrance, who was there to welcome them. His brow visibly frowned as he asked, "Lin Xiao, why did you come to the Trial Hall? Aren't you afraid of disgracing the family?"

"I heard that you only stepped into the realm of Heavenly Origin two years ago. Your progress is really too slow. It seems that being in charge of the family's financial power these years has made you slack in your cultivation."

Lin Xiao stopped in his tracks and looked up at his half-brother, answering with a hint of condescension.

"Lin Xiao, you..."

Lin Anaconda, the second master of the Lin family, had a change in his face and was about to rebuke, but he found that the three members of Lin Xiao's family had already walked away.

"Hmph, being stuck in the Earth Origin realm for a lifetime, unable to make any progress in cultivation. What a disappointment."

Lin Python grimaced and spat viciously at Lin Xiao's back. When Lin Xiao used to be the family's second expert, Lin Python tolerated him. But now that Lin Xiao was considered a half-invalid, why should he give this so-called third brother any respect?

"Father, now you are already a Yuan Dan realm powerhouse. Lin Python is just a small Tian Yuan realm upstart. How dare he call father a waste? Isn't he even worse than a waste?"

After taking his seat, Lin Dong quipped.

"Just a jumping clown. Let him be. Well, it's your grandfather and the others who are here. Quickly, get up with me to welcome them."

Lin Xiao's gaze swept, and he saw Lin family head Lin Zhentian, who came in from the door. He quickly led a pair of children to welcome them.

"Old Third, you finally gave up to come out to see me?"

The old man, dressed in a brocade robe and long shirt, with a hint of majesty on his face, looked at the son he was once most proud of and said with a complicated expression.

"I just want to find a quiet place to focus on cultivating my son and Qing Tan."

Lin Xiao stood tall, exuding a lofty and proud elegance.

"Huh, it seems that you have changed a lot in the past few years."

Looking at the great changes in his son's body, Lin Zhentian's old eyes also displayed a trace of surprise. This kind of confidence he had only seen in Lin Xiao before he was injured.

"But you've trained your son and Qing Tan well in the past few years. I heard that four months ago, your son was able to defeat Hong's sixth-ranked body-quenching son, and Qing Tan was able to defeat Shan's fourth-ranked body-quenching son?"

Lin Zhentian's gaze shifted to Lin Dong and Qing Tan, who were standing nearby.

"Grandpa (grandfather)."

Lin Dong and Qing Tan both stepped forward and bowed politely.

"Well, you are all good children of my Lin family. Behave well at the clan competition later. Grandpa has a reward for good performance."

Lin Zhentian praised the two for a while and then led Lin Ken, Lin Dong's eldest uncle, towards the main seat.

The Lin family's trial hall buzzed with excitement as the clan competition got underway. Lin Ken stood up under Lin Zhentian's gesture and declared in a loud voice, "This Lin family competition officially begins!"

With the order of the Lin family's grandmaster, Lin Ken, the trial hall immediately became lively. The Lin family's children lined up to draw lots for the competition, and several stone platforms quickly filled with the sounds of anticipation.

"Lin Long Gun, are you sure you want to compete with me?"

Looking at the little fatty who was struggling to climb onto the stage across from him, Lin Dong said with a wry smile.

"Ahem, I don't want to compete with you, pervert. You stepped into the seventh level of body quenching four months ago and now you're at the peak of the seventh level, while I'm only at the fourth level. Who wants to compete with you?"

Lin Long Gun coughed gently, then raised his right arm and shouted, "I admit defeat!"

The stone platforms that had just started the competition were abruptly silent. Everyone looked at Lin Long Gun in disbelief. Admitting defeat so quickly? Lin Long Gun had surely broken the record for the fastest admission of defeat.

Lin Ken also looked bewildered and waved his hand as if in disgust. "Since you have admitted defeat, come down quickly."

As for Lin Long Gun's father, the fifth master of the Lin family, he felt embarrassed. If not for the presence of Lin Zhentian, he might have hidden his face and left.

"Father, why do you look so upset?"

Lin Long Gun, who ran off the stage, gave his father a puzzled look.

"Well, it's fine. Concentrate on the clan competition. I have a surprise for you at home tonight."

The fifth master of the Lin family resisted the urge to scold his son and showed a doting fatherly smile.

"Goodler, thanks a lot, father."

Lin Long Gun didn't think much about it and happily responded, sitting down to observe Lin Dong's bout.

"I didn't expect to lose the match and get a nice surprise."

"Second match, Lin Meteor vs. Lin Dong."

Lin Ken quickly announced Lin Dong's next opponent. A silent, gray-clad teenager nimbly jumped onto the bouting stage.


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