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Used AI to write your novel and yet it’s still garbage. How do you even manage to do that? Then again, you also said it wouldn’t be a Pokémon harem, but then one of the first love interests, Carla, falls for him nearly instantly. I mean, her legs are being crushed under a building, and yet she can’t help but drool and blush when she sees Kaito for the first time ever. Anyways, overall, if you don’t know how to write romance, then don’t write it.
Mc is emptionless. Sorry don’t like to read about robots. Prefer humans who don’t kill innocent desperate people to save others because they interest the MC. Everything else is fine. But in this era of emptionless and cruel MCs I’d really like someone to break the trend to write an MC who’s not either dense/ stupid/ too nice or inhuman/evil/ dark. These tropes are getting boring now.
Personally I really like the mixture of the mc's apathy and care at the same time, as well as the mystery keeping me in suspense. I also really like the romance so far.
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The worst point in my opinion is the comedy that doesn't exist. but the novel isn't bad, a 4.7 fits perfectly.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
while I never liked a dark character or that emotionless MC but the fanfic is excellent. I hope it doesn't get dropped. there are some grammatical errors but they won't affect your reading and might go unnoticed actually.
The story is interesting if you can understand the personality of the MC. Many people complain about the speed at which Carla's relationship with the MC developed, but that's what the story is about. If you want something serious, better go read the original material. This fanfic makes things clear to you from the beginning. As an author, I know how difficult it is to create a story, even if it is a fanfic, so you deserve 5 stars. I hope you can continue publishing more chapters.
An entertaining story, with a pretty good protagonist and the interaction between characters is quite fun to read, my recommendations would be that the MC's abilities be explained in a more expanded way, it's almost 30 chapters in and it's still not entirely clear, otherwise I consider it a solid 4,6.
Good planning and overall development but the dialogues are weird and generic, not like their real selfs, MC as well sound like a concatenation of random cringe dialogues from a Marvel movie.
Liking it so far and I'm on chapter 20. The Mc to say the least is weird? is the word I guess. Sometime I like him, sometime I'm not but overall a good read, just need more explaination about him and more interection/moment not gonna hurt. Last one, need that...
One of the best well written fanfic. If there's something I don't like, maybe it's the 'Universe involvement.' I don't mind if there are other thing beside Titans. It's not like I want MC to do whatever he wants, it just I felt MC's action is restricted because if he change the plot too much, then the retribution come upon him.But really tho, I didn't feel cringe whatsoever when reading this. It's just as I said, the writing is good.
Hi, it's the author here! This is my first time writing a full-length work, but I have tried to maintain a coherent plot with minimal grammatical errors. But if you do find any, point it out, and I will correct it. The initial chapters can be a bit confusing, so bear with me. Also, the novel can be a bit slow pace in the starting. As for what you can expect in this story, telling too much will spoil the readers, but still, let's see. No mindless harem Comedy at the most unexpected timing Plot with a bit of mystery I don't know what more to write here, so Read out and Find Out!
amazing work ....keep up the good works...also give the mc titan power like coalassol titan without side effects ...also make him the eldian king married to historia...
What a piece of art I have discovered! The mc is quirky, unafraid and above all, a bit of absurd. Starting the story you have little clue of what is happening, but as the story unfolds you realize the what's happening. It's a bit of slow-pace. Luckily you don't realize that as you get so engulfed in the story.
weird development and even weirder behaviour from the MC. he's basically a horney teen who will shoot his shot every given opportunity. the story development is bad as well, basically turning into wish fullfilment. no plot in sight
Used AI to write your novel and yet it’s still garbage. How do you even manage to do that? Then again, you also said it wouldn’t be a Pokémon harem, but then one of the first love interests, Carla, falls for him nearly instantly. I mean, her legs are being crushed under a building, and yet she can’t help but drool and blush when she sees Kaito for the first time ever. Anyways, overall, if you don’t know how to write romance, then don’t write it.
Mc is emptionless. Sorry don’t like to read about robots. Prefer humans who don’t kill innocent desperate people to save others because they interest the MC. Everything else is fine. But in this era of emptionless and cruel MCs I’d really like someone to break the trend to write an MC who’s not either dense/ stupid/ too nice or inhuman/evil/ dark. These tropes are getting boring now.
Personally I really like the mixture of the mc's apathy and care at the same time, as well as the mystery keeping me in suspense. I also really like the romance so far.
Good one but please don't drop . Good one but please don't drop . Good one but please don't drop .Good one but please don't drop .Good one but please don't drop .Good one but please don't drop .Good one but please don't drop .Good one but please don't drop .Good one but please don't drop .Good one but please don't drop .Good one but please don't drop .Good one but please don't drop .Good one but please don't drop .Good one but please don't drop .
The worst point in my opinion is the comedy that doesn't exist. but the novel isn't bad, a 4.7 fits perfectly.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
while I never liked a dark character or that emotionless MC but the fanfic is excellent. I hope it doesn't get dropped. there are some grammatical errors but they won't affect your reading and might go unnoticed actually.
The story is interesting if you can understand the personality of the MC. Many people complain about the speed at which Carla's relationship with the MC developed, but that's what the story is about. If you want something serious, better go read the original material. This fanfic makes things clear to you from the beginning. As an author, I know how difficult it is to create a story, even if it is a fanfic, so you deserve 5 stars. I hope you can continue publishing more chapters.
An entertaining story, with a pretty good protagonist and the interaction between characters is quite fun to read, my recommendations would be that the MC's abilities be explained in a more expanded way, it's almost 30 chapters in and it's still not entirely clear, otherwise I consider it a solid 4,6.
Good planning and overall development but the dialogues are weird and generic, not like their real selfs, MC as well sound like a concatenation of random cringe dialogues from a Marvel movie.
Liking it so far and I'm on chapter 20. The Mc to say the least is weird? is the word I guess. Sometime I like him, sometime I'm not but overall a good read, just need more explaination about him and more interection/moment not gonna hurt. Last one, need that...
One of the best well written fanfic. If there's something I don't like, maybe it's the 'Universe involvement.' I don't mind if there are other thing beside Titans. It's not like I want MC to do whatever he wants, it just I felt MC's action is restricted because if he change the plot too much, then the retribution come upon him.But really tho, I didn't feel cringe whatsoever when reading this. It's just as I said, the writing is good.
Hi, it's the author here! This is my first time writing a full-length work, but I have tried to maintain a coherent plot with minimal grammatical errors. But if you do find any, point it out, and I will correct it. The initial chapters can be a bit confusing, so bear with me. Also, the novel can be a bit slow pace in the starting. As for what you can expect in this story, telling too much will spoil the readers, but still, let's see. No mindless harem Comedy at the most unexpected timing Plot with a bit of mystery I don't know what more to write here, so Read out and Find Out!
amazing work ....keep up the good works...also give the mc titan power like coalassol titan without side effects ...also make him the eldian king married to historia...
What a piece of art I have discovered! The mc is quirky, unafraid and above all, a bit of absurd. Starting the story you have little clue of what is happening, but as the story unfolds you realize the what's happening. It's a bit of slow-pace. Luckily you don't realize that as you get so engulfed in the story.
weird development and even weirder behaviour from the MC. he's basically a horney teen who will shoot his shot every given opportunity. the story development is bad as well, basically turning into wish fullfilment. no plot in sight