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It's still in its early stages, so it's difficult to know whether it will have a good direction or not. However, so far I found it very interesting and promising. I'm really looking forward to seeing where this story goes, especially Long Ming's development. Despite this, it has a slow pace and without a clear objective. But as this story is still in its infancy, I have faith that the author will be able to show us what the direction of this story will be.
Hello! Writer here, this is a story I've been working on for a long time, with several changes (both major and minor) over time. After all this time, I feel that this story has reached an acceptable level, which is why I decided to release it. As a beginning writer, I am open to all types of criticism and hope for help from everyone who likes this story to help me unfold Long Ming's journey.
It's still in its early stages, so it's difficult to know whether it will have a good direction or not. However, so far I found it very interesting and promising. I'm really looking forward to seeing where this story goes, especially Long Ming's development. Despite this, it has a slow pace and without a clear objective. But as this story is still in its infancy, I have faith that the author will be able to show us what the direction of this story will be.
Hello! Writer here, this is a story I've been working on for a long time, with several changes (both major and minor) over time. After all this time, I feel that this story has reached an acceptable level, which is why I decided to release it. As a beginning writer, I am open to all types of criticism and hope for help from everyone who likes this story to help me unfold Long Ming's journey.