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Having caught up with the latest chapters, I can confidently say that this novel offers excellent writing quality. The author has a fine grasp of the English language which makes his writing neither repetitive nor boring. The storyline itself captivates us from the start, making us connect and sympathize with the main character.We root for and cheer him on his quest for revenge, and it's sweet to see the drama unfolding. While the world background may appear confusing at first, rest assured that the author has a clear vision for his story that gradually unfolds. The characters are unique, each possessing a distinct voice. You will both hate and then slightly like some characters which clearly shows the author's skill in creating conflicting yet compelling characters. Overall, I personally liked the story and am waiting for future updates. Worship the author-sama!
It sucks that this book didnt continue!!! I actually liked this book!!! From what I read It had potential to be really really good and exciting!!! I was hoping it was going to become a big book and that it would have lasted awhile but I guess not!! It was just another let down!!
Y DID THIS BOOK STIP?? IT WAS A PRETTY GOOD BOOK!! I LIKED IT EVEN THOUGH IT WAS MOVING Q LITTLE FAST BUT IT WAS STILL REALLY GOOD AND WANT IT TO CONTINUE!! MY PHONE IS BROKE SO I TEXT LIKE THIS
and here you can advertise your novel, please tell me yyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
THIS BOOK IS REALLY GOOD!! I DONT KNOW Y THE AUTHOR STOPPED WRITING IT BUT IT SUCKS!! IF UR NOT GOING TO COME BACK AND KEEP WRITING THEN Y KEEP THE BOOK UP!!?? U SHOULD TAKE IT DOWN IF UR NOT WRITING IT ANYMORE!! MY PHONE IS BROKE I HAVE TO TEXT LIKE THIS
I REALLY LIKE THIS BOOK!! ITS DIFFERENT FROM OTHERS AND I WOULD LIKE TO KEEP READING IT!! PLEASE DONT STOP WRITING THE BOOK!! I HAVE TO TEXT LIKE THIS BECAUSE MY PHONE IS BROKE!
The early chapter of the novel was confusing for me, first of all the MCs disregard to secrecy and the subsequent troubles that may arise after he sharing his secrets without dime and reason are baffling... But the major let down was when MCs mother was shot and the subsequent disregard or inaction to that, there was not even an iota of logic to that as after being cured i suppose MC's mother helped the guy who shot her and denied access to his son to move to his family.... The level of nonsense here just was over the top... Strangely enough, i dont know how to articulate but the conversations/actions of and between characters are weird, cant put a word to it but overall, i gotta say this novel didnt turn out as i hoped it to be, lots of logicless action, the apparent/common sense kind.
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This story is for you, if you like an abnormal stupid mc. 😊😊 And I Also think he will take his revenge in a very stupid. like in the future mc might be marrying the girl who killed him by buring his "D" and treated him like a slave for 10 years.
I JUST FINISHED CHAPTER 38 AND I LIKE THIS BOOK SO FAR BUT THERE I AT LEAST ONE THINK THAT HAPPEN THAT I DONT LIKE AND DONT AGREE WITH!! AND THAT IS Y HAS NO ONE TOLD HIM ABOUT WHAT HAPPENED TO HIS MOM?? THATS THE FIRST THING THAT SHOULD HAVE BEEN OUT OF ANYONES MOUTH SAYING SHE WAS SHOT OR AT LEAST HURT BY SOMEONE!! AND Y IS HE NOT CONFRONTING HIM AND Y WOULD HE BE SO STUPID TO THINK THAT A FRIEND WOULD NEVER GO AGAINST HIS FAMILY HES STUPID NO MATTER HOW MANY YEARS THEY KNOWN EACH OTHER!! PLUS THE PEOPLE THAT R HIDDEN AND THEY SPLIT UP THE ZODIACS SO HE HAS THIS PROBLEM TO DEAL WITH!! Y WOULD U JEEP PUTTING IN MORE PROBLEMS?? THE MORE PROBLEMS U HAVE THE BOOK STARTS TO GET COMPLICATED!! AND MY PHONE IS BROKE SO I TEXT LIKE THIS
The story is good if you like a regresser mc who gets stepped on by every single person he meets. None of the characters are likable they are all scum. His best freinds dad shoots his mom and after she healed they just act like it didn’t happen when he threatens and shot civilians then goes on to say he is an honorable man. He’s nice and saves the women that tortured and killed him like he is some simp that wants it to happen again. Next he has one of the worst abilities ever it’s EX which is higher than sss but can’t copy sss skills and the people know when he does it to. Then the 2 abilites he got were a- and got lucky they merged to a sss just cause they were from twins. Then he has this weird cross dressing fetish going on with these 2 twins that are like 10.
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I don't know how is this writing get 5 stars. It hard to read, to many blank in the story. The characters just jump in the plot unnaturally. Not so smart mc with childlike mindset just happened to get powerful Ability.
To be honest I don't know how to write this , it was confusing, first mc was killed by 3 girls and later when he travels back to time and gets abilities he saves the same three girls and gives them beast core to awaken their abilities.I thought it was alright since mc has the ability to copy the skills of other people and since they were heroines with SSS ability he would get them too but the author was like :no no~ , although a bit disappointed i continued reading.But mc's best friend father shot mc mom and mind you mc was the reason they were all safe because he gave them warning first and when mc returned and saw his mom injured he did nothing, he didn't ask how his mom got injured , the girls didn't tell him either that she was shot, the level of stupidity *sigh but no it doesn't end here later when mc find out that his best friend father is likely to do something bad, what does he do? He informed his best friend to keep an eye on his father as he might be up to do something, so let me ask you who do you think will bestfriend chose his own father or a friend. Logically father, right? I know author will give one reason or another but mom's injury part was a major disappointment for me and i stopped reading .
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10/10 all round. Grammar is perfect, story line while just few chapters already looks intriguing. of course the only thing i suggest which you obviously don't have to listen to is about how you skip all the xxx scenes. Of course the book is still nice without it but think of it like the cherry on the pie.
Great story, quality, development, update stability is all top tier. World back has been nicely set and character designs are unique. I'll give it a 5/5. Keep it up and it'll definitely be big!
These three wives truly know the art of how to play with Balls. I suggest you give it a read, and see just how could they are with their ball playing skills.
Authors, are you going to drop this book like your previous books? [img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted]
hmm, after seeing the title I thought it would be like those Chinese novels, where the ML whatever he does, girls line for him but the story is really good. starting off it is entertaining, the writing quality and word usage are really good, and the updates of chapters are stable which is really good, The world background and character designs are made very clear with dialogues that have a feeling of realism, overall it is a good read and I will give it a 4.8 out of 5.0, keep up author.
Writing Quality: 5/5 It's consistent so far, with vivid descriptions regarding each of the characters and their actions as well. The fight scene was done well. Stability of Updates: 5/5 Given the time of this review, the author has been updating consistently, so it will drop if time passed by and the author suddenly stopped updating or went into hiatus mode. Story Development: 4.5/5 Instantly, I can get a sense of deja vu that the world is overrun by monsters within these portals and humans emerged with special power that could fight back. And as for the MC, he's your naturally untalented man working as a porter until the second chance happening. Character Design: 4.6/5 The three women might have description of them early on, but since it's early, they aren't that known to us readers much, but so far, it's looking good. We can see the MC being a somewhat typical male as well. And there were parts that are somewhat illogical and confusing. World Background: 4.7/5 If you have read the dungeon-hunter type of novel, you can understand the world pretty much based on the first chapter. If not, it was still enough for you to grasp a basic understandings of the world structure. Overall: 4.7/5 Not bad, and I can see the potential of this story with how the story would change with the MC nullifying his porter status and making those three women his wives. TLDR: Give it a try and if it's not your type of book, feel free to check out "Rebirth of the Death Knight" instead. This review was written on October 23, 2023, by a robot cat, Doraemon.
As per usual with OWAs novels, the quality is present. The grammar is perfect, the world is well described as he progresses, and the characters don't feel robotic or plastic. Where I was a bit more taken aback is the similarity with Solo Leveling. It's uncanny in the first few chaps. But this still has plenty of time to become a very unique story and take the charts by storm.
Feels like reading an anime for each scene the writer made. It was so good ah my brain is excited that it might explode owo. it's like eating your plate of pizza rolls and when you get to the last update. you run out of pizza rolls but you know the next time you go to the store you can make more pizza rolls.
Although the dialogue was a little cringe at times, the development and writing quality is super, I liked how the author progressed the plot. Has some ups and downs but a win in my eyes. Would, definitively recommend.
What can I say, from all the books I have read recently this shines brightly. I expect great things from this book. Author you've thought up a gem! Keep on writing and don't ever stop. I will read this book until it's end.
So only one talk with hand was enough to send him in the past. Boy be cautious whenever you have a deep talk with yourself and whenever you are alone, close your door tightly. Don't let anyone disturb your quality time.
The start is already looking promising. I have only read four chapters but the writing is really sublime and hooks you in. Will be reading more whenever I get the chance!
I didn’t know how someone would pull off three wives in an apocalypse setting, but the author surely is doing the gods work out here. Starting off, it’s entertaining and humorous. It pulled me in with the MC getting in trouble for being indecent. But the more I was reading, I liked how the author appropriately added the backstory of why things are the way they are without info dumping. The plot idea is refreshing and unique. I’ve read other books with portal openings, but the zodiac thing has to be my favorite as a lover of astrology and astronomy. The pace is not over detailed, every character is three dimensional and have their own distinct personality. And most of all, the action is bad àss and immersive. I adored how even in moments where’s it’s just dialogue is intriguing. I also love the wholesomeness the MC has with his mother. Definitely will add to library and keep reading! Keep up the excellent work.
Having caught up with the latest chapters, I can confidently say that this novel offers excellent writing quality. The author has a fine grasp of the English language which makes his writing neither repetitive nor boring. The storyline itself captivates us from the start, making us connect and sympathize with the main character.We root for and cheer him on his quest for revenge, and it's sweet to see the drama unfolding. While the world background may appear confusing at first, rest assured that the author has a clear vision for his story that gradually unfolds. The characters are unique, each possessing a distinct voice. You will both hate and then slightly like some characters which clearly shows the author's skill in creating conflicting yet compelling characters. Overall, I personally liked the story and am waiting for future updates. Worship the author-sama!
It sucks that this book didnt continue!!! I actually liked this book!!! From what I read It had potential to be really really good and exciting!!! I was hoping it was going to become a big book and that it would have lasted awhile but I guess not!! It was just another let down!!
Y DID THIS BOOK STIP?? IT WAS A PRETTY GOOD BOOK!! I LIKED IT EVEN THOUGH IT WAS MOVING Q LITTLE FAST BUT IT WAS STILL REALLY GOOD AND WANT IT TO CONTINUE!! MY PHONE IS BROKE SO I TEXT LIKE THIS
and here you can advertise your novel, please tell me yyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
THIS BOOK IS REALLY GOOD!! I DONT KNOW Y THE AUTHOR STOPPED WRITING IT BUT IT SUCKS!! IF UR NOT GOING TO COME BACK AND KEEP WRITING THEN Y KEEP THE BOOK UP!!?? U SHOULD TAKE IT DOWN IF UR NOT WRITING IT ANYMORE!! MY PHONE IS BROKE I HAVE TO TEXT LIKE THIS
I REALLY LIKE THIS BOOK!! ITS DIFFERENT FROM OTHERS AND I WOULD LIKE TO KEEP READING IT!! PLEASE DONT STOP WRITING THE BOOK!! I HAVE TO TEXT LIKE THIS BECAUSE MY PHONE IS BROKE!
The early chapter of the novel was confusing for me, first of all the MCs disregard to secrecy and the subsequent troubles that may arise after he sharing his secrets without dime and reason are baffling... But the major let down was when MCs mother was shot and the subsequent disregard or inaction to that, there was not even an iota of logic to that as after being cured i suppose MC's mother helped the guy who shot her and denied access to his son to move to his family.... The level of nonsense here just was over the top... Strangely enough, i dont know how to articulate but the conversations/actions of and between characters are weird, cant put a word to it but overall, i gotta say this novel didnt turn out as i hoped it to be, lots of logicless action, the apparent/common sense kind.
ネタバレを明かす This story is for you, if you like an abnormal stupid mc. 😊😊 And I Also think he will take his revenge in a very stupid. like in the future mc might be marrying the girl who killed him by buring his "D" and treated him like a slave for 10 years.
I JUST FINISHED CHAPTER 38 AND I LIKE THIS BOOK SO FAR BUT THERE I AT LEAST ONE THINK THAT HAPPEN THAT I DONT LIKE AND DONT AGREE WITH!! AND THAT IS Y HAS NO ONE TOLD HIM ABOUT WHAT HAPPENED TO HIS MOM?? THATS THE FIRST THING THAT SHOULD HAVE BEEN OUT OF ANYONES MOUTH SAYING SHE WAS SHOT OR AT LEAST HURT BY SOMEONE!! AND Y IS HE NOT CONFRONTING HIM AND Y WOULD HE BE SO STUPID TO THINK THAT A FRIEND WOULD NEVER GO AGAINST HIS FAMILY HES STUPID NO MATTER HOW MANY YEARS THEY KNOWN EACH OTHER!! PLUS THE PEOPLE THAT R HIDDEN AND THEY SPLIT UP THE ZODIACS SO HE HAS THIS PROBLEM TO DEAL WITH!! Y WOULD U JEEP PUTTING IN MORE PROBLEMS?? THE MORE PROBLEMS U HAVE THE BOOK STARTS TO GET COMPLICATED!! AND MY PHONE IS BROKE SO I TEXT LIKE THIS
The story is good if you like a regresser mc who gets stepped on by every single person he meets. None of the characters are likable they are all scum. His best freinds dad shoots his mom and after she healed they just act like it didn’t happen when he threatens and shot civilians then goes on to say he is an honorable man. He’s nice and saves the women that tortured and killed him like he is some simp that wants it to happen again. Next he has one of the worst abilities ever it’s EX which is higher than sss but can’t copy sss skills and the people know when he does it to. Then the 2 abilites he got were a- and got lucky they merged to a sss just cause they were from twins. Then he has this weird cross dressing fetish going on with these 2 twins that are like 10.
ネタバレを明かす I don't know how is this writing get 5 stars. It hard to read, to many blank in the story. The characters just jump in the plot unnaturally. Not so smart mc with childlike mindset just happened to get powerful Ability.
To be honest I don't know how to write this , it was confusing, first mc was killed by 3 girls and later when he travels back to time and gets abilities he saves the same three girls and gives them beast core to awaken their abilities.I thought it was alright since mc has the ability to copy the skills of other people and since they were heroines with SSS ability he would get them too but the author was like :no no~ , although a bit disappointed i continued reading.But mc's best friend father shot mc mom and mind you mc was the reason they were all safe because he gave them warning first and when mc returned and saw his mom injured he did nothing, he didn't ask how his mom got injured , the girls didn't tell him either that she was shot, the level of stupidity *sigh but no it doesn't end here later when mc find out that his best friend father is likely to do something bad, what does he do? He informed his best friend to keep an eye on his father as he might be up to do something, so let me ask you who do you think will bestfriend chose his own father or a friend. Logically father, right? I know author will give one reason or another but mom's injury part was a major disappointment for me and i stopped reading .
ネタバレを明かす 10/10 all round. Grammar is perfect, story line while just few chapters already looks intriguing. of course the only thing i suggest which you obviously don't have to listen to is about how you skip all the xxx scenes. Of course the book is still nice without it but think of it like the cherry on the pie.
Great story, quality, development, update stability is all top tier. World back has been nicely set and character designs are unique. I'll give it a 5/5. Keep it up and it'll definitely be big!
These three wives truly know the art of how to play with Balls. I suggest you give it a read, and see just how could they are with their ball playing skills.
Authors, are you going to drop this book like your previous books? [img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted]
hmm, after seeing the title I thought it would be like those Chinese novels, where the ML whatever he does, girls line for him but the story is really good. starting off it is entertaining, the writing quality and word usage are really good, and the updates of chapters are stable which is really good, The world background and character designs are made very clear with dialogues that have a feeling of realism, overall it is a good read and I will give it a 4.8 out of 5.0, keep up author.
Writing Quality: 5/5 It's consistent so far, with vivid descriptions regarding each of the characters and their actions as well. The fight scene was done well. Stability of Updates: 5/5 Given the time of this review, the author has been updating consistently, so it will drop if time passed by and the author suddenly stopped updating or went into hiatus mode. Story Development: 4.5/5 Instantly, I can get a sense of deja vu that the world is overrun by monsters within these portals and humans emerged with special power that could fight back. And as for the MC, he's your naturally untalented man working as a porter until the second chance happening. Character Design: 4.6/5 The three women might have description of them early on, but since it's early, they aren't that known to us readers much, but so far, it's looking good. We can see the MC being a somewhat typical male as well. And there were parts that are somewhat illogical and confusing. World Background: 4.7/5 If you have read the dungeon-hunter type of novel, you can understand the world pretty much based on the first chapter. If not, it was still enough for you to grasp a basic understandings of the world structure. Overall: 4.7/5 Not bad, and I can see the potential of this story with how the story would change with the MC nullifying his porter status and making those three women his wives. TLDR: Give it a try and if it's not your type of book, feel free to check out "Rebirth of the Death Knight" instead. This review was written on October 23, 2023, by a robot cat, Doraemon.
As per usual with OWAs novels, the quality is present. The grammar is perfect, the world is well described as he progresses, and the characters don't feel robotic or plastic. Where I was a bit more taken aback is the similarity with Solo Leveling. It's uncanny in the first few chaps. But this still has plenty of time to become a very unique story and take the charts by storm.
Feels like reading an anime for each scene the writer made. It was so good ah my brain is excited that it might explode owo. it's like eating your plate of pizza rolls and when you get to the last update. you run out of pizza rolls but you know the next time you go to the store you can make more pizza rolls.
Although the dialogue was a little cringe at times, the development and writing quality is super, I liked how the author progressed the plot. Has some ups and downs but a win in my eyes. Would, definitively recommend.
What can I say, from all the books I have read recently this shines brightly. I expect great things from this book. Author you've thought up a gem! Keep on writing and don't ever stop. I will read this book until it's end.
So only one talk with hand was enough to send him in the past. Boy be cautious whenever you have a deep talk with yourself and whenever you are alone, close your door tightly. Don't let anyone disturb your quality time.
The start is already looking promising. I have only read four chapters but the writing is really sublime and hooks you in. Will be reading more whenever I get the chance!
I didn’t know how someone would pull off three wives in an apocalypse setting, but the author surely is doing the gods work out here. Starting off, it’s entertaining and humorous. It pulled me in with the MC getting in trouble for being indecent. But the more I was reading, I liked how the author appropriately added the backstory of why things are the way they are without info dumping. The plot idea is refreshing and unique. I’ve read other books with portal openings, but the zodiac thing has to be my favorite as a lover of astrology and astronomy. The pace is not over detailed, every character is three dimensional and have their own distinct personality. And most of all, the action is bad àss and immersive. I adored how even in moments where’s it’s just dialogue is intriguing. I also love the wholesomeness the MC has with his mother. Definitely will add to library and keep reading! Keep up the excellent work.