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im very sorry, i can't keep reading past chapter 13, there are to many errors in the story, it also seems like it was ai gerarated. plus, there's little to no background for the story. although it would be a good comic
Utter trash. Trash grammar. Author doesn't know which character they are talking about. MC instantly contradicts herself a couple of paragraphs later. Maybe if this had a proper editor who fixed everything this would be readable. Don't waste your time and brain cells.
The author does mix up names quite often especially in the beginning, and sentinels are futas which the author probably should have given a warning about. Sentinels and guides are very similar to alpha and omega. But besides that it's a great read.
The thing that made this story for me were the characters and the way they are written. The main character is not the main highlight but everyone else around her is which makes it such an interesting lead
It's an interesting concept. I like how they are mixed to make a single concept and the audience should give it a chance as well. It's fast-paced but does not feel rushed.
Author is there Yuri in between her harem girls?[img=exp][img=proud][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
im very sorry, i can't keep reading past chapter 13, there are to many errors in the story, it also seems like it was ai gerarated. plus, there's little to no background for the story. although it would be a good comic
Utter trash. Trash grammar. Author doesn't know which character they are talking about. MC instantly contradicts herself a couple of paragraphs later. Maybe if this had a proper editor who fixed everything this would be readable. Don't waste your time and brain cells.
The author does mix up names quite often especially in the beginning, and sentinels are futas which the author probably should have given a warning about. Sentinels and guides are very similar to alpha and omega. But besides that it's a great read.
The thing that made this story for me were the characters and the way they are written. The main character is not the main highlight but everyone else around her is which makes it such an interesting lead
It's an interesting concept. I like how they are mixed to make a single concept and the audience should give it a chance as well. It's fast-paced but does not feel rushed.
Author is there Yuri in between her harem girls?[img=exp][img=proud][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]