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Overall it's just okay. I only read up to the paywall so maybe it gets better. The pacing is slow mainly because it repeats a lot. The main character is a little bland. He's got a manufacturing company that just got shutdown for making knockoffs. He did it but it's also a plot against him somehow. He's also already an outstanding martial artist but that's not his focus. The system helps him recover his business by turning free but slow to accumulate energy into currency he can exchange with other system holders in the universe for slightly better products than can be made on earth. The free chapters spend a lot of time with him wholeselling a power bank that no one can believe.
Mc is stupid. Get's an external battery litteraly 10 times better than the best currently available and decides to directly sell it : no production line, no pattent, nothing.
Overall it's just okay. I only read up to the paywall so maybe it gets better. The pacing is slow mainly because it repeats a lot. The main character is a little bland. He's got a manufacturing company that just got shutdown for making knockoffs. He did it but it's also a plot against him somehow. He's also already an outstanding martial artist but that's not his focus. The system helps him recover his business by turning free but slow to accumulate energy into currency he can exchange with other system holders in the universe for slightly better products than can be made on earth. The free chapters spend a lot of time with him wholeselling a power bank that no one can believe.
Mc is stupid. Get's an external battery litteraly 10 times better than the best currently available and decides to directly sell it : no production line, no pattent, nothing.