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yeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah booooooyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
it may at the start look and sound weird when reading, but overall, the story is pretty good.
I love it and I can't wait for the next chapter and keep up with the great work
К сожалению эта работа пока не погрузила нас через гг в мир Рика и Морти, но то что она появилась уже большой плюс. Автору нужно чтобы его гг вëл жизнь примерно как злой Морти после побега из центральной кривой. Просто хотелось бы увидеть не просто пересказ, а нечто большее так как это первый попаданец который не спалился перед Риком.
The concept is great and the execution has gotten better than the first few chapters. I would like to see some longer chapters but overall I have enjoyed the story. I would recommend getting rid of the 2 non-chapters soon though.
I liked the story, I'm a little disappointed by the lack of chapters, I think the writing is good, but a little difficult to read because of the strange translation. English is not my first language, so these comments may have spelling errors or misspelled words.
it's not that good in the beginning, but thankfully, later on, it gets better.
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Is it a harem, a relationship with a girl from the cast or will he simply not be able to have a partner like the rest of the Smith brothers?
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most of the chapters are filler and to show up in the rankings, please post some readable ch before putting skips or put it in auxiliary ch
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There are only 9 chaptes written but less than 2 chapters worth of conten in my opinio.
Godawful, bet the author hasn't made it into high-school yet. The type of writing that considers fourth wall breaking the epitome of humor, not to mention the endless amounts of edge. Also the amount of bloat is unreal.
Hasta el momento la historia me gusta,dejando de lado que la mitad de los capítulos son anuncios o palabras sin sentido,pero por el momento todos bien
Es mejor que sea harem con chicas solamente de ese universo, el personaje está bien pero no lo hagas demasiado op o si no la historia se vuelve aburrida
Chapter padding for getting into ranking, this is worse than a bad story. Word threshold was added to avoid empty stories getting there, and you baiting people with empty story
I don't have to say why I give 2 star right after all it's clear why I give it 2 star.. . . .. . . . .... . . .... . . . . . .. .. . . . . .
this work is easy to read , very good humor , but you need to add more single adventures for the main character........................................
yeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah booooooyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
it may at the start look and sound weird when reading, but overall, the story is pretty good.
I love it and I can't wait for the next chapter and keep up with the great work
К сожалению эта работа пока не погрузила нас через гг в мир Рика и Морти, но то что она появилась уже большой плюс. Автору нужно чтобы его гг вëл жизнь примерно как злой Морти после побега из центральной кривой. Просто хотелось бы увидеть не просто пересказ, а нечто большее так как это первый попаданец который не спалился перед Риком.
The concept is great and the execution has gotten better than the first few chapters. I would like to see some longer chapters but overall I have enjoyed the story. I would recommend getting rid of the 2 non-chapters soon though.
I liked the story, I'm a little disappointed by the lack of chapters, I think the writing is good, but a little difficult to read because of the strange translation. English is not my first language, so these comments may have spelling errors or misspelled words.
it's not that good in the beginning, but thankfully, later on, it gets better.
Pure trash[img = tapa na cara][img = tapa na cara][img = tapa na cara][img = tapa na cara][img = tapa na cara]...................................................................................................................................................
Is it a harem, a relationship with a girl from the cast or will he simply not be able to have a partner like the rest of the Smith brothers?
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most of the chapters are filler and to show up in the rankings, please post some readable ch before putting skips or put it in auxiliary ch
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There are only 9 chaptes written but less than 2 chapters worth of conten in my opinio.
Godawful, bet the author hasn't made it into high-school yet. The type of writing that considers fourth wall breaking the epitome of humor, not to mention the endless amounts of edge. Also the amount of bloat is unreal.
Hasta el momento la historia me gusta,dejando de lado que la mitad de los capítulos son anuncios o palabras sin sentido,pero por el momento todos bien
Es mejor que sea harem con chicas solamente de ese universo, el personaje está bien pero no lo hagas demasiado op o si no la historia se vuelve aburrida
Chapter padding for getting into ranking, this is worse than a bad story. Word threshold was added to avoid empty stories getting there, and you baiting people with empty story
I don't have to say why I give 2 star right after all it's clear why I give it 2 star.. . . .. . . . .... . . .... . . . . . .. .. . . . . .
this work is easy to read , very good humor , but you need to add more single adventures for the main character........................................