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Singularity: Lord of Mysteries

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作者: Shadow_Magus

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Members of the Aurora Order had brutally murdered Max, a child of the age of 15. In the body of this unfortunate child, enters the memories of Samuel, a not-so-innocent person in his previous life, whose life choices finally caught up to him one day and ended up killing him.

However, he is reincarnated in the world of Lord of Mysteries, a horrifyingly tragic world where humans struggle against inevitable monsters of epic proportions by gaining Beyonder powers that ultimately either end up consuming them and causing them to lose control, or become strong enough that the will or the original creator takes over their souls.

In this world of steam and machinery headed towards a prophesied apocalypse, armed with a Pathway that did not exist in the fictional novel, that will either lead to his ascension or his demise, Max must strive to survive and save the world... or would he?

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P.S.

This is my first Fan-fic so go easy on me and give me pointers. Positive criticism is welcomed. If you don't like it or the writing is terrible, Ok.
Just leave and don't rub it in my face T-T

Anyway, I will post chapters hopefully daily, and I hope you guys help with the creation process of the novel. compared to my other novels, I will be writing this one with no fixed story in mind, so I will depend on you guys to give me pointers on what should come next. As of now, I have only written 2 chapters and will try to write one a day and keep up the upload schedule.

Note: I had read the novel quite some time ago, and I do not wish to read 1400 chapters of something I have already read. So I went to the wiki and read through the summaries, and got the just of at least the Tingen Plot. Unfortunately, I do not want our first arc to be in Tingen for obvious reasons; Adam.

Also, for those thinking his pathway is super overpowered after reading the first chapter, be warned that despite this, as long as he does not reach the highest Sequence and beyond, he is still too weak to survive in this chaotic world. Also, anything powerful comes at a cost, and you will see the cost when he tries to become a Beyonder.

Anyway, I hope everyone likes the story and please comment and leave a review so I know where to fix the the fan fic.

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Shadow_Magus

Hello there, Shameless Author here to give myself a 5 star review until enough normal people review the novel that I no longer need this review.

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Mr_Ice_Cream

😩 I am at chapter 10 story based it's good but so many unwise and unnecessary info dump from characters. Why would someone who the MC just met share so much info to the MC they even almost accidentally revealed their identity. For someone who is a beyonder and belongs to a secret organization like Twilight Hermit Order that's so unprofessional a doubt even a half mad and insane character who does such a thing unless influenced by supernatural powers.

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Haru_Catty

Hello readers, a reading scout here. This is certainly a good read, writing quality is good with no punctuation errors and good paragraphing. Story development is smooth and pacing is what keeps me reading. Characters are well fleshed out but need more depth and I'm sure they'll get more in the future as the story progresses. As for the world background it is still too early to tell so I'll let the time do the deed. A very good read indeed, give it a try. Cheers!

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KetchupxD

Honestly, it's good. Things might be a little confusing at the start but I would say it's a solid read since those confusions clear up eventually. [img=recommend]

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GuYueFangYuan

Kakakakaka this was something I was loog for thank you author kun keep up the good work!!

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Patrik_Crown

It's just two chaps so I can't give a worldwide big review but I try. As anyone may already know, I mainly love Vamp novels but this is an interesting concept that I never heard of. Anyway, the words flow smoothly, some funny sequences are there too (if you imagine Max grinning without any teeth :D...) and the story sounds interesting. Manipulation is one of my most favorite toxic and dark "abilities" so thumbs up for that. 4 stars cuz I don't have enough info but let me know when you have at least ten chaps and I look at it again. For now, peace~

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wisdomseeker

Definitely worth of your time, very recommended for those who like MC struggle against the world

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Demigod_of_All

So, I've read some chaps. The plot is great and the flow of the story is exact to the point. I haven't noticed any grammatical errors, either and thanks to that I can read without any problem. No spoilers since it's better to read it, it's worth your time for sure!

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Postmand

Good writing quality Don’t know yet so got a 3⭐️ Uses rituals for every potion from sequence 9 and up so if we go be the canon logic he will go insane before sequence 5, 8th sequences in his pathway is fools end or smth like that and requires him to kill Klein without Adam seeing him… yeah doesn’t make sense + everyone else that are keeping eyes on Klein. His character is made to be this evil manipulator even before he transmigrated but he is more of a power hungry baby that fires interns to show he is more powerful than them? Everything other than his power hunger is your everyday “I’m different and dark” MC only this time he was born seven months early so his brain is under developed World background is LOM so nothing original and nothing rly unexpected for those who read the novel

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Aydehan
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First of all, this review is written through a translator. The story written is generally good, but in my opinion there are a few points that are missing. For example, the romantic subplot or a bigger problem is the rituals that seem very forced. Yes, the rituals seem very forced and even make me very nervous while reading them. What, it's not even sequence 7 yet, sequence 5 wants you to mess with someone. This is complete nonsense. If he was going to attempt this kind of thing, at least the main character should have been rank 5. Also, the series should have started at least 4 years before the main events started. If you have studied the queues in the LOTM universe, you will notice that they all follow a certain route. There is no need to perform rituals, with the exception of between 9-5, because you are still human. Between 4-0 you have to perform the ritual because your journey from humanity to divinity begins. (The path of the klein is abnormal. It requires a ritual at rank 6. Likewise, it requires an anchor at rank 4.) I hope you will think about this story in more detail, polish all the rough parts and rewrite it. Then I'm sure you'll create a great work.

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The_WheelOfFortune

This fanfic is REALLY good, it’s well written and the there isn’t an overwhelming amount of cliches.

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Wizened

Writing quality is excellent and I really like it Update stability could be a bit better but then again people do have lives outside of writing Story development it’s really great some things are a bit cliche Character design very great World background it’s lotm and when he traveled to his own world that was pretty cool.

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Zane_Tam

Great story I highly recommend it it is one of the very few good LOTM novels

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BrokenInfinity

honestly it has been a delight to read this and I recommend to others the author really does a great job with the material with a new interesting pathway introduced I look forward to reading more though I wish the release rate was higher big sad

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The_enlightend_one

Your fanfic is really great and I like the premise very much. Although I like Klein and don't the mc to fight him to the death 😭 ................................ ................................. .................................

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Mamdouh_mohamed

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DaoistPVyESB

love the story! better than the Sun pathway fanfic that i read.

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DaoistPVyESB

i like it! i hope yhis story will continue till the end

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ProPug

The story is really good! The pacing is excellent, and it has a really good hook right from the start, which was so good I kept reading until I caught up :D. Expecting more great work from this author! Good luck on your book!

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Ninestar619_5803

what a great plot! The plot that the author is talking about is one of my favorites and now am writing a section from it. COOOOLLL!! I wonder how good will that be. This book is great as it has amazing storylines and outstanding plots. Great work author LOVED THIS BOOK

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Chapter 135: Lady Despair 9 days ago

卷 1 : Bender

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    Memories and Pathway 1 years ago
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    Pathway and Rituals 1 years ago
  3. 3
    Entering Tingen and Looking for Opportunities 1 years ago
  4. 4
    Getting a Job & Bathing 1 years ago
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    A day in Tingen and Emotions 1 years ago
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    Superpowers and Discussion 1 years ago
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    Past and Weapons 1 years ago
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    Ingredients & New Face 1 years ago
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    Bald Man and Betrayal 1 years ago
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    Nightmare and Letter 1 years ago
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    Cedric and Blocking 1 years ago
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    Beyonder and Departure? 1 years ago
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    Leaving Home 1 years ago
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    Knowledge Magisters and Escape 1 years ago
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    Nightmare and Artifact 1 years ago
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    Experimenting and Train 1 years ago
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    Reactions 1 years ago
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    Backlund and Meeting 1 years ago
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    Preparations for potion 1 years ago
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    Taking the potion 1 years ago
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    Vision of the Past and Present 1 years ago
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    Beyonder Powers 1 years ago
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    Meeting the Detective 1 years ago
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    Backlund and Lawyer 1 years ago
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    Ritual 1 years ago
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    Item and Eventful day 1 years ago
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    Hope to survive 1 years ago
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    Universal Amalgamation of All 1 years ago
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    Dunant's Department Store 1 years ago
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    Investment and Abilities 1 years ago
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    Abilities and expansion plans 1 years ago
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    Unexpected Guest 1 years ago
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    Dealings with a Hall 1 years ago
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    2 months and Changes 1 years ago
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    Banquet contacts 12 months ago
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    Investment expansion and Future 11 months ago
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    One year older, one year less to live 11 months ago
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    Returning to Tingen 11 months ago
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    Adam 11 months ago
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    Deal and Klein 11 months ago
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    Tarot Club 1st meeting 11 months ago
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    Death, the Destroyer of Worlds 11 months ago
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    Knowledge Magisters back again 11 months ago
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    Tarot Club 2nd Meeting 11 months ago
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    Divination Club 10 months ago
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    Me, Myself, and Death 10 months ago
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    Dead... 10 months ago
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    Gods 10 months ago
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    Tarot Club 3rd Meeting 10 months ago
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    The Ritual 10 months ago
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    Tarot Club 4th Meeting 10 months ago
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    Missing or not? 10 months ago
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    Klein meets 10 months ago
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    Tarot Club 5th Meeting 9 months ago
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    Uncertain Influence 9 months ago
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    Tarot Club 6th, 7th, and 8th meetings 9 months ago
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    New World 9 months ago
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    Independence and Pritz Harbour 9 months ago
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    Trouble and Plans 9 months ago
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    Derrick and Sun 9 months ago
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    Tarot Club 9th Meeting 9 months ago
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    Tarot Club 10th Meeting 9 months ago
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    High Priest at Independence 8 months ago
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    Meeting the King 8 months ago
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    Tarot Club 11th Meeting 8 months ago
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    Bear Witness 8 months ago
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    Joys of Life 7 months ago
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    Duke Negan and Simulaiton 7 months ago
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    September 9th 7 months ago
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    Don't look 7 months ago
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    Adam and chills 7 months ago
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    Les Misérables 6 months ago
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    Cry of Life 6 months ago
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    Dunn and Mastermind 6 months ago
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    Story of Tingen 6 months ago

卷 2 : Fool's End

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    Blinded Visionary 6 months ago
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    Rage and Hello! 6 months ago
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    Odd conversation 6 months ago
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    Nothing to hide 6 months ago
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    Train to Whitecliff 6 months ago
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    Nightmare and letters 6 months ago
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    Tarot Club 12th meeting 6 months ago
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    Mr. Fool 6 months ago
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    Let the games begin 6 months ago
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    Auction 6 months ago
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    ~Popular~ 6 months ago
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    Warning & Cedric Negan 5 months ago
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    Diary of a Missionary 1 5 months ago
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    Diary of the Giant Ape 1 5 months ago
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    Cedric and Ural 5 months ago
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    Viva La Vida 5 months ago
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    Undercurrents and Cedric 5 months ago
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    Spirit and Correction Force 5 months ago
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    Deal with the Devil 4 months ago
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    Ms. Justice! 4 months ago
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    Mr. Death??!! 4 months ago
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    Tarot Club 13th meeting 4 months ago
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    Flower and Independence 4 months ago
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    Diary of the Missionary 2 4 months ago
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    Luke of the Spectrum 4 months ago
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    Doomed 3 months ago
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    Scuba? 3 months ago
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    Hiding 3 months ago
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    Assassination 3 months ago
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    Report and Incredulous 3 months ago
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    Heading to W. St. 3 months ago
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    Commission 2 months ago
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    A structure of the Fourth Epoch? 2 months ago
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    Underground Structure 2 months ago
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    I have come to bargain 2 months ago
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    Mental Breakdown 2 months ago
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    Tarot Club 14th Meeting 2 months ago
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    Red Angel 2 months ago
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    Diary of the Missionary Part 3 2 months ago
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    A Happy Clown 2 months ago
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    A Sad Clown 1 months ago
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    Tarot Club 15th Meeting 1 months ago
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    The Fallen Creator 1 months ago
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    A Nosey Fellow! 1 months ago
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    Key of Light 1 months ago
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    Tarot Club 16th Meeting 1 months ago
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    The Corruption-Free World 1 months ago
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    Revenge is too sweet! 1 months ago
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    Monocled Preist 1 months ago
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    Tarot Club 17th Meeting 28 days ago
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    The one and only Error 28 days ago
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    Avatar the Last Airbender? 27 days ago
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    Tarot Club 18th Meeting 27 days ago
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    The Monocled Menace 27 days ago
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    Diary of the Missionary Part 4 27 days ago
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    Tarot Club 26th Meeting 9 days ago
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    Meteor and Help 9 days ago
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    Something wrong with Ince 9 days ago
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    Mr. A's conversation 9 days ago
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    Lady Despair 9 days ago

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