When World Eaters Fall

LV 4

ToufiqUlAlam

The story is very relatable. The real-life crisis of a person who lost her way to walk again, then suddenly fell into a disaster situation. The narrative style is fluid and I loved the way you described the situations of our hero. I will keep reading so please finish the story. Cheers.

Great Story! The main character is just relateable with the way she reacts, and the writing style just really makes me feel like I'm there with her

LV 3

Albinus_istamar

ok, i like th MC, and her enviroment, i liked so much the plot. Writing style it's ok, maybe some great praragraf that give me some slow motios vibes when i0m reading it, but it's a nice style. Only thing, give us some hook or some clues, a litle bite lost on where is ti going

LV 13

Deranwoods

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