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i didn't like the ending, it could have been better even if it was rushed so only 4 star i can give
I think this fanfic had great potential, but it definitely did not achieve it completely. 1. The MC was raised by Scathatch from the time he was a baby, but it feels like the only things he gained from her are spearmanship, primordial runes, and history knowledge. From my understanding, in no way would Scathatch allow her child to not know military strategies as one thing. For training with her for 16 years, he lacks a lot of characteristics as a warrior that she would instill. 2. The only growth the MC has after around chapter 50 is he accumulation of some more divine keys. However, this stops at around ch 200, and he never gets more. So essentially, the MC never gets stronger. 3. The yuri argument is something I particularly agree with because as of chapter 450 he has only one girl, even if the others show interest in him. 4. I think the story became somewhat bland, because it feels like the MC is just going through the other stories that somehow have OP enemies thrown in them to make it difficult. He never grows and just faces these challenges. TLDR the story lacks character and strength growth and the system doesn't play a part of the story after ch 200.
Makes me want to vomit, because of how stupid the MC is, it's such a shame because the idea of this novel is good.
A história é muito boa, o protagonistas tem um crescimento bem rápido, então para que gosta de protagonista op e que quase nunca apanha essa é a história certa
Una buena historia, con un final decepcionante y apresurado. Aun asi, es divertido leerlo. Lo recomiendo. ------------------------------------- ----------------------
This novel was such a ride... It was such awesome work 👏. Though I am a little sad that it's the end. Thank you for your hard work in translating this novel.
Great fic. 100% recommended. Little bit rushed ending but overall enjoyable fic.
Overall, it's a very good story. A somewhat intelligent MC, interesting power system, stable updates, and so on. If there is anything that I consider bad, it's the ending. And I think everyone can agree on that. The ending was rushed and Badly made, very unsatisfying for such an amazing story.
ALRIGHT BOOM!! REVIEW I just finished, and without revealing any spoilers, it's a very good translation. It's so good that I thought it was an original. Story. Uhhhh.. the reason the MC got his abilities is a bit blurry to me because I can't remember. The first ark was the best ark by far. No harem, good. There's nothing else to say other than a less than ideal ending, but I'm still kinda sour about that. If you find my comments, be sure to like and reply. See you in the next book.
Honestly really liked it, very good translation. The charecters also felt alive i guess? Sure there were some parts that was kinda boring but. It still was a trult fasenating story the ending as well was't the best and was very rushasde, and no epiloug or any like. "it was a great journey" and him not returning home and seeing him use the grail was kinda a let down. Anyways good book would recommend reading it. ( sorry if the spelling was't great english isn't my mother language)
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Muy buena historia talvez con un final apresurado pero bueno talvez si ubiera Una capitulo que diga que paso después en Camelot sería aún mejor
Thank you, I liked the work. But the Epilogue is missing....................................................................................
I love this. The characters are well made, the protagonist learns and becomes stronger, takes his time to learn making things fun! I loved Morgan's interaction with him, I also loved how the herrscher, herrscher cores and relics very used. Very creative.
Good story only its ending was a bit anticlimactic [img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar]
okay the end was absolutely terrible The main character would continuously make stupid decisions but it was an enjoyable story nonetheless I had a good time and thank you two are dearest translated
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5/5. This fic is amazing, props to the author almost everything is realy good. There is not much to say other than this fic is great, the only point I have to give is that Fate/team death match is a bit boring in the start but is not a really big problem. Unrelated: Author will you update the Fate my mother is king Arthur fic? Or did you just drop it?
is it always Gonna be like him appearing to other timeline just to be a hero kinda boring.
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if you want to read a good fgo fanfic with almost no yuri go read one with nature on wattpad its pretty good in my opinion and its almost as long as this one
Funny................................................................................................................................................................ really funny
As of now, I've catched up to the most recent chapter(392). Mainly wanted to write this review for everyone to know that there is no ntr and no harem(Arkhan married only one person, won't spoil who though).
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Very beautiful.................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
perfect and stay enthusiastic..................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
i didn't like the ending, it could have been better even if it was rushed so only 4 star i can give
I think this fanfic had great potential, but it definitely did not achieve it completely. 1. The MC was raised by Scathatch from the time he was a baby, but it feels like the only things he gained from her are spearmanship, primordial runes, and history knowledge. From my understanding, in no way would Scathatch allow her child to not know military strategies as one thing. For training with her for 16 years, he lacks a lot of characteristics as a warrior that she would instill. 2. The only growth the MC has after around chapter 50 is he accumulation of some more divine keys. However, this stops at around ch 200, and he never gets more. So essentially, the MC never gets stronger. 3. The yuri argument is something I particularly agree with because as of chapter 450 he has only one girl, even if the others show interest in him. 4. I think the story became somewhat bland, because it feels like the MC is just going through the other stories that somehow have OP enemies thrown in them to make it difficult. He never grows and just faces these challenges. TLDR the story lacks character and strength growth and the system doesn't play a part of the story after ch 200.
Makes me want to vomit, because of how stupid the MC is, it's such a shame because the idea of this novel is good.
A história é muito boa, o protagonistas tem um crescimento bem rápido, então para que gosta de protagonista op e que quase nunca apanha essa é a história certa
Una buena historia, con un final decepcionante y apresurado. Aun asi, es divertido leerlo. Lo recomiendo. ------------------------------------- ----------------------
This novel was such a ride... It was such awesome work 👏. Though I am a little sad that it's the end. Thank you for your hard work in translating this novel.
Great fic. 100% recommended. Little bit rushed ending but overall enjoyable fic.
Overall, it's a very good story. A somewhat intelligent MC, interesting power system, stable updates, and so on. If there is anything that I consider bad, it's the ending. And I think everyone can agree on that. The ending was rushed and Badly made, very unsatisfying for such an amazing story.
ALRIGHT BOOM!! REVIEW I just finished, and without revealing any spoilers, it's a very good translation. It's so good that I thought it was an original. Story. Uhhhh.. the reason the MC got his abilities is a bit blurry to me because I can't remember. The first ark was the best ark by far. No harem, good. There's nothing else to say other than a less than ideal ending, but I'm still kinda sour about that. If you find my comments, be sure to like and reply. See you in the next book.
Honestly really liked it, very good translation. The charecters also felt alive i guess? Sure there were some parts that was kinda boring but. It still was a trult fasenating story the ending as well was't the best and was very rushasde, and no epiloug or any like. "it was a great journey" and him not returning home and seeing him use the grail was kinda a let down. Anyways good book would recommend reading it. ( sorry if the spelling was't great english isn't my mother language)
ネタバレを明かす Muy buena historia talvez con un final apresurado pero bueno talvez si ubiera Una capitulo que diga que paso después en Camelot sería aún mejor
Thank you, I liked the work. But the Epilogue is missing....................................................................................
I love this. The characters are well made, the protagonist learns and becomes stronger, takes his time to learn making things fun! I loved Morgan's interaction with him, I also loved how the herrscher, herrscher cores and relics very used. Very creative.
Good story only its ending was a bit anticlimactic [img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar]
okay the end was absolutely terrible The main character would continuously make stupid decisions but it was an enjoyable story nonetheless I had a good time and thank you two are dearest translated
ネタバレを明かす 5/5. This fic is amazing, props to the author almost everything is realy good. There is not much to say other than this fic is great, the only point I have to give is that Fate/team death match is a bit boring in the start but is not a really big problem. Unrelated: Author will you update the Fate my mother is king Arthur fic? Or did you just drop it?
is it always Gonna be like him appearing to other timeline just to be a hero kinda boring.
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if you want to read a good fgo fanfic with almost no yuri go read one with nature on wattpad its pretty good in my opinion and its almost as long as this one
Funny................................................................................................................................................................ really funny
As of now, I've catched up to the most recent chapter(392). Mainly wanted to write this review for everyone to know that there is no ntr and no harem(Arkhan married only one person, won't spoil who though).
Boooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooom
Very beautiful.................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
perfect and stay enthusiastic..................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
a good story with a rushed ending but okkkkkkay