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I'm simply addicted, I need more chapters. I need to know when it's coming back, otherwise I'll go crazy
A gripping blend of sci-fi and fantasy, the synopsis delivers an exciting premise where Earth's sudden displacement into a Mana-infused galaxy turns reality on its head. The stakes are high, the characters intriguing, and the mix of survival, cosmic mystery, and intergalactic politics promises a thrilling, multidimensional adventure. With its unique setting and compelling conflicts, this story has all the elements of an epic saga.
Read up to chapter 500 and let me say I am tired if I keep reading. I am sure I will lose brain cells. one of the worst system books I have read at first it looked like a washed of rewrite of the bloodline system. But u see it take a different turn what kind of idiot increases their charm stat. That one is still better he then lose his mana core in the most stupid way,only morphs his hands or to a humbad and are telling me he couldn't change to a fly till he lost his mana core but could turn in to a fish . or he never thought for digging into the ground. For me, the book is just scattered and disappointing. the writer is confused like his character
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Deat author the only thing o didn't like in this is that you should have nerfed the humans. when humans suddenly fight against alien species they should not win instead they should lose as humans don't know their place. So as fan of this in your future works please nere the humans to an extreme degree. Even if they are wiped off there is no problem.
repetitive like a lot of novels here..............................................................................................................
What is with spouting skills and powers like they are pokemons every few chapters the mc is shitting new powers and the main power of the story which is chaos devourer had been forgotten my opinion the writer has to focus on a couple of powers (quality over quantity ) this is stupid tbh
The story had a great start with nice characters development . Then when MC joined the EIA is like the author just dropped the devouring system and start writing some bs. I’m dropping this book at chapter 57.
I made it to chapter 230 roughly and I've noticed there are a significant amount of chapters that are from entirely different stories. one of the annoying things outside of the continuous spelling and grammar mistakes is his insistent use on immediately. in one chapter you can see immediately being used six or so times or more
While I won't deny the fact that the story is well written, I just can't continue reading it. Juxtaposing this novel with MBS, the only difference would be when he went to the academy. Tbh, I hate it when the academy arc comes, like a whole lot cliche happen there. Anyways, when can I get a loner mc(pls not a half baked one)
This book is so amazing but I can't read further because of lack of points and I don't know why but fast pass is not working??
this book clearly takes to much inspiration from bloodline system. The main character has very similar powers to Gutav from bloodline system even their friend groups have basically the same powers. the moment I realized how much of a ripoff this is is the beginning of the school training because it is literally the same method of training. The author added very little of his own creation except for character design and names. All the author has changed is the really fast pacing which is like skipping major arcs in bloodline system to accelerate his story. If you have read or do read bloodline system you will clearly see what I'm talking about. The biggest thing is it took a few hundred chapters for the bloodline system mc to get in the academy.
As of around 200 chapters that I've read... the book is well written. I especially like how mysterious the system is. Where it gradually transforms to be more talkative. Overall, the story is quite unique and interesting.
Only a few chapters into this novel but I've already fallen in love with the sheer brutality of the story. Can't help but admit that I'm a sucker for stories like this.
this webnovel has a good story, a good, MC, a good power system and a good global background, but the author makes some writing erros sometimes.
Super novel que j'apprécie, je vais surement acheter la suite des chapitres car je veux savoir comment va se développer l'histoire ! Merci à l'écrivain 😊
Well written plot and story. However, some of the side characters need more development and interactions. Nonetheless, beautiful read and interesting MC.
i would lie this a f**king Masterpiece it feels like an addiction keep it up 👍👍👍
The storyline has been great so far, the plot is interesting. The character interactions while good for the most part seem strange and awkward at times. The authors writing is great but a couple things hold it back, repetition and redundancy, typos although these are minor, and just general laziness in regards to keeping up with the main characters abilities. His stats and levels are regularly retconned due to lazy management. Overall though story has a lot of potential and is an interesting read.
The story so far is good but only downside I can see is the chapter is so short! This is my first time seeing a pay wall that have such a short chapters. Sometimes to make the chapters long the author put the last sentence in the last chapter to the first part of the next chapter. Unnecessary.
As someone who just started reading your story, it seems like it's off to a great start, however with over 500 chapters locked there is no way new readers like me can stick with your story.
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bro keep uploading the chapters of ththese novel and please don't comple these novel to early at least 1000 or 2000 chapter should be there before completing these novel it is really nice novel so don't want to end these nove soon and also don't drop these novel in between pll at least complete the novel first before. otherwise it fill bad if novel stay incomplete aand stort 😭
Updated Author Review: As we’ve reached a total of 750+ chapters, I believe it’s time to address some of the common questions and concerns. One of the most frequently asked questions is: “Is this a harem novel? How many female leads, if any?” Well, as of now, with 750 chapters written, the MC has not shown any interest in settling down with a female lead, and he is still a virgin. So, if you’re reading this for romance or intimate scenes, I’m afraid this might not be the story for you. Secondly, I’ve received quite a few complaints regarding the mixing of stats and poor grammar. I understand there have been a lot of negative reviews about these issues, and I’ve taken them to heart. In response, I decided to pause writing temporarily until these problems are fully addressed. I’m happy to announce that I’ve hired a qualified and experienced editor to help re-edit the book, starting from Chapter 1. He plans to edit 20 chapters a day until we reach Chapter 750. Starting from October 15th, you can expect 20 edited chapters every day. If you prefer to read the corrected version, I recommend calculating the number of edited chapters based on the date you’re reading this review and adjusting your reading pace accordingly. Another 20 chapters will be edited the following day, and so on. If you still encounter grammatical errors, please try clearing the app’s cache or delete and re-download the book. That should fix the issue. Regarding updates, since I’ve now hired an editor, I plan to resume releasing new chapters—at least 2 per day—starting soon. Lastly, to all those who were disappointed by the pause in updates, I sincerely apologize. I’m still learning the ropes of being an author, and seeing negative comments can be tough to handle. That’s why I chose to stop temporarily and fix the issues before continuing. Thank you for your patience and understanding. I’m grateful to everyone who has stuck with me this far, and I’m committed to seeing this story through to the end. Muchos gracias to you all.
I'm simply addicted, I need more chapters. I need to know when it's coming back, otherwise I'll go crazy
A gripping blend of sci-fi and fantasy, the synopsis delivers an exciting premise where Earth's sudden displacement into a Mana-infused galaxy turns reality on its head. The stakes are high, the characters intriguing, and the mix of survival, cosmic mystery, and intergalactic politics promises a thrilling, multidimensional adventure. With its unique setting and compelling conflicts, this story has all the elements of an epic saga.
Read up to chapter 500 and let me say I am tired if I keep reading. I am sure I will lose brain cells. one of the worst system books I have read at first it looked like a washed of rewrite of the bloodline system. But u see it take a different turn what kind of idiot increases their charm stat. That one is still better he then lose his mana core in the most stupid way,only morphs his hands or to a humbad and are telling me he couldn't change to a fly till he lost his mana core but could turn in to a fish . or he never thought for digging into the ground. For me, the book is just scattered and disappointing. the writer is confused like his character
ネタバレを明かす Deat author the only thing o didn't like in this is that you should have nerfed the humans. when humans suddenly fight against alien species they should not win instead they should lose as humans don't know their place. So as fan of this in your future works please nere the humans to an extreme degree. Even if they are wiped off there is no problem.
repetitive like a lot of novels here..............................................................................................................
What is with spouting skills and powers like they are pokemons every few chapters the mc is shitting new powers and the main power of the story which is chaos devourer had been forgotten my opinion the writer has to focus on a couple of powers (quality over quantity ) this is stupid tbh
The story had a great start with nice characters development . Then when MC joined the EIA is like the author just dropped the devouring system and start writing some bs. I’m dropping this book at chapter 57.
I made it to chapter 230 roughly and I've noticed there are a significant amount of chapters that are from entirely different stories. one of the annoying things outside of the continuous spelling and grammar mistakes is his insistent use on immediately. in one chapter you can see immediately being used six or so times or more
While I won't deny the fact that the story is well written, I just can't continue reading it. Juxtaposing this novel with MBS, the only difference would be when he went to the academy. Tbh, I hate it when the academy arc comes, like a whole lot cliche happen there. Anyways, when can I get a loner mc(pls not a half baked one)
This book is so amazing but I can't read further because of lack of points and I don't know why but fast pass is not working??
this book clearly takes to much inspiration from bloodline system. The main character has very similar powers to Gutav from bloodline system even their friend groups have basically the same powers. the moment I realized how much of a ripoff this is is the beginning of the school training because it is literally the same method of training. The author added very little of his own creation except for character design and names. All the author has changed is the really fast pacing which is like skipping major arcs in bloodline system to accelerate his story. If you have read or do read bloodline system you will clearly see what I'm talking about. The biggest thing is it took a few hundred chapters for the bloodline system mc to get in the academy.
As of around 200 chapters that I've read... the book is well written. I especially like how mysterious the system is. Where it gradually transforms to be more talkative. Overall, the story is quite unique and interesting.
Only a few chapters into this novel but I've already fallen in love with the sheer brutality of the story. Can't help but admit that I'm a sucker for stories like this.
this webnovel has a good story, a good, MC, a good power system and a good global background, but the author makes some writing erros sometimes.
Super novel que j'apprécie, je vais surement acheter la suite des chapitres car je veux savoir comment va se développer l'histoire ! Merci à l'écrivain 😊
Well written plot and story. However, some of the side characters need more development and interactions. Nonetheless, beautiful read and interesting MC.
i would lie this a f**king Masterpiece it feels like an addiction keep it up 👍👍👍
The storyline has been great so far, the plot is interesting. The character interactions while good for the most part seem strange and awkward at times. The authors writing is great but a couple things hold it back, repetition and redundancy, typos although these are minor, and just general laziness in regards to keeping up with the main characters abilities. His stats and levels are regularly retconned due to lazy management. Overall though story has a lot of potential and is an interesting read.
The story so far is good but only downside I can see is the chapter is so short! This is my first time seeing a pay wall that have such a short chapters. Sometimes to make the chapters long the author put the last sentence in the last chapter to the first part of the next chapter. Unnecessary.
As someone who just started reading your story, it seems like it's off to a great start, however with over 500 chapters locked there is no way new readers like me can stick with your story.
I am the invincible snapdragon of a thousand votes, upvote me in my quest to achieve a thousand upvotes!
bro keep uploading the chapters of ththese novel and please don't comple these novel to early at least 1000 or 2000 chapter should be there before completing these novel it is really nice novel so don't want to end these nove soon and also don't drop these novel in between pll at least complete the novel first before. otherwise it fill bad if novel stay incomplete aand stort 😭
Updated Author Review: As we’ve reached a total of 750+ chapters, I believe it’s time to address some of the common questions and concerns. One of the most frequently asked questions is: “Is this a harem novel? How many female leads, if any?” Well, as of now, with 750 chapters written, the MC has not shown any interest in settling down with a female lead, and he is still a virgin. So, if you’re reading this for romance or intimate scenes, I’m afraid this might not be the story for you. Secondly, I’ve received quite a few complaints regarding the mixing of stats and poor grammar. I understand there have been a lot of negative reviews about these issues, and I’ve taken them to heart. In response, I decided to pause writing temporarily until these problems are fully addressed. I’m happy to announce that I’ve hired a qualified and experienced editor to help re-edit the book, starting from Chapter 1. He plans to edit 20 chapters a day until we reach Chapter 750. Starting from October 15th, you can expect 20 edited chapters every day. If you prefer to read the corrected version, I recommend calculating the number of edited chapters based on the date you’re reading this review and adjusting your reading pace accordingly. Another 20 chapters will be edited the following day, and so on. If you still encounter grammatical errors, please try clearing the app’s cache or delete and re-download the book. That should fix the issue. Regarding updates, since I’ve now hired an editor, I plan to resume releasing new chapters—at least 2 per day—starting soon. Lastly, to all those who were disappointed by the pause in updates, I sincerely apologize. I’m still learning the ropes of being an author, and seeing negative comments can be tough to handle. That’s why I chose to stop temporarily and fix the issues before continuing. Thank you for your patience and understanding. I’m grateful to everyone who has stuck with me this far, and I’m committed to seeing this story through to the end. Muchos gracias to you all.