Reviews of Adventure Time: Shadow Elemental(Ownership has been handed over) by SirRandom - Webnovel

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SirRandom

Its been a long time and I've gotten much better at writing, but the first 15 or so chapters(some not posted yet) are kinda... bad(?), like they're ok, but just that, ok. I can write better now, when I say I've gotten better I mean it, to the point where I cant read other peoples stories without automatically being conscious of every mistake, inconsistency, bad piece of dialogue, bland character design and so on. Its a curse.

10mth
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Shadow_Demons_0996

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4mth
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Indra_lord

author can you give name of the account of your friend so I find it. is the fanfic name the same?

5mth
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iliacube

the idea of a shadow elemental in adventure time is alone pretty cool. plus we get to see his friendship with bubble gum as the start to rebuild the war. can't wait to see how itl play out when the rest of the cast gets involved.

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9mth
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Chogyal_Drag_A

Author please keep on updating, im eagerly waiting for new chap

9mth
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yoshi_koba

my lord if you could Grace this peasant with more chapters from your noble and magnificent hands I will be infinitely grateful for your endless kindness oh my great king. Jokes aside please give me more chapters I'm quite unhealthily obsessed with this story[img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls]

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DeathE
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is . it. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Harem?

9mth
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Supper_mega

more!!!! I'm obsessed with this fanfic especially the relationship of the mc and bubble gum

9mth
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PunchingDrywallMan

The story is very entertaining I wish There's more chapters to it.

1yr
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Lox_Of_Sins

Everything but update ability is good, am just waiting for more updates to get into this story more so I can judge if I want to give it a perfect 5/5.

1yr
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lutov
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DaoistSUsqmF

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1yr
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Miki_Marlo75

I like the story it's going on a slow path but that's good I hope it doesn't jump too fast in the timeline and has more development We just have to wait for other chapters and see what comes out.

1yr
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General_Kenobi_0

there aren't many adventure time fanfictions, but I'm happy that the few that are out there have this one with them

1yr
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ZephurosStormheart

Well this has been a true breath of fresh air to read. The main character feels like he belongs in the world of Adventure Time, like he was always meant to be part of the story. The grammar is pretty good and the author is paying attention to the background of the series.

1yr
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Thorok_Thorok

this is the second Adventure time fic on this app and for that tage these five stars

1yr
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aMz
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allthough it's too early to review i will just give you 5 stars, since i haven't seen any adventure time fanfics before and i hope you continue writing it and i will be checking out your other works on TheCartoonist

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1yr
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SirRandom

Its been a long time and I've gotten much better at writing, but the first 15 or so chapters(some not posted yet) are kinda... bad(?), like they're ok, but just that, ok. I can write better now, when I say I've gotten better I mean it, to the point where I cant read other peoples stories without automatically being conscious of every mistake, inconsistency, bad piece of dialogue, bland character design and so on. Its a curse.

10mth
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Shadow_Demons_0996

[img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls]

4mth
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Indra_lord

author can you give name of the account of your friend so I find it. is the fanfic name the same?

5mth
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iliacube

the idea of a shadow elemental in adventure time is alone pretty cool. plus we get to see his friendship with bubble gum as the start to rebuild the war. can't wait to see how itl play out when the rest of the cast gets involved.

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9mth
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Chogyal_Drag_A

Author please keep on updating, im eagerly waiting for new chap

9mth
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yoshi_koba

my lord if you could Grace this peasant with more chapters from your noble and magnificent hands I will be infinitely grateful for your endless kindness oh my great king. Jokes aside please give me more chapters I'm quite unhealthily obsessed with this story[img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls]

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9mth
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DeathE
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is . it. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Harem?

9mth
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Supper_mega

more!!!! I'm obsessed with this fanfic especially the relationship of the mc and bubble gum

9mth
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PunchingDrywallMan

The story is very entertaining I wish There's more chapters to it.

1yr
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Lox_Of_Sins

Everything but update ability is good, am just waiting for more updates to get into this story more so I can judge if I want to give it a perfect 5/5.

1yr
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lutov
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1yr
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DaoistSUsqmF

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1yr
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Miki_Marlo75

I like the story it's going on a slow path but that's good I hope it doesn't jump too fast in the timeline and has more development We just have to wait for other chapters and see what comes out.

1yr
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General_Kenobi_0

there aren't many adventure time fanfictions, but I'm happy that the few that are out there have this one with them

1yr
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ZephurosStormheart

Well this has been a true breath of fresh air to read. The main character feels like he belongs in the world of Adventure Time, like he was always meant to be part of the story. The grammar is pretty good and the author is paying attention to the background of the series.

1yr
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Thorok_Thorok

this is the second Adventure time fic on this app and for that tage these five stars

1yr
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aMz
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allthough it's too early to review i will just give you 5 stars, since i haven't seen any adventure time fanfics before and i hope you continue writing it and i will be checking out your other works on TheCartoonist

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1yr
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