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I love it I do admit that the story in certain parts like during the time skips could have senses in them but either way I love it good job
Whaddup gang, I’m giving u a 5 star cuz I love your celestial dragon ff, please continue I absolutely love that ff. At least continue after you complete this one
Great read, long live kumo!! However I’m going to back out after the chunin arc because I’m scared at how easily author kills side characters and how inconsequential the mc reacted to it. Even hinata died but came back. I’m not good with character deaths. And the “payoff” wasn’t worth it, all orochimaru lost was a body, no satisfying revenge or anything
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I feel like I'm watching Konoha being recreated in Kumo. What's the point of having the Uchiha in Kumo? The Uchiha has lived in the Land of Fire for thousands of years and they agreed to move just like that? Why not retrieve the Land of Lightning's Chinoike Clan whom they banished to the Land of Hot Water? It's like I'm reading Konoha all over again, all the interesting parts of Kumo are stripped and replaced with Konoha Dojutsu, Itachi and Shisui. Shisui is basically an idiot and Itachi is not himself. The Uchiha is an evil clan and they deserved to be wiped out, and Itachi here is too lacking in resolve. The part with Yugito Nii giving him tailed Chakra is interesting, but it went downhill the moment he proposed to take away Hinata, it really doesn't make sense that Hiashi would make the direct descendant of the main family leave the Land of Fire even when cornered, but at least this part was feasable.
It went down hill when the author started making huge plotholes and started killing people off.
es buena serie y más que es único por no empezar en konoha como el 99% , además de que este solo con hinata y cambiará su personalidad también es bueno y sobre todo que esta creciendo sin un sistema, buena serie lo único malo es que en los últimos capítulos su comportamiento es demasiado engreído
MC reincarnated into Cloud village, something that I see very rare happens in Naruto fanfic. The potential Waifu selection is good and the best part of the story is how cunning and shameless the MC is. (Hiruzen Get REKT boiiii)🤣😤
I must say that I only read it to pass the time, not taking into account the canonical, since if it were so in most fics what I have read it would not include all the aspects of the original
Writing Quality 5/5 Stability of Updates 4/5 Story Development 5/5 Character Design 5/5 World Background 5/5 Please don't drop!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Alright this is a weird one. Honestly writing quality is good it’s just the plot progression is so strange man… characters don’t act as they should sometimes and are strange. He meets character K and immediately asks for them to live with him and his sister, charactwr S who is loyal to his village bends to him very quickly and the whole hyuga talks were so out of character and strange to me. He writes well and there’s good jokes here so if you can look past the plot that sometimes is janky you could have some fun here.
The protagonist is too opㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ
Good start, I have the hypothesis, if the mc learns the thunder chakra mode and masters it at a level higher than the third raikage, I imagine that in this entire process of mastering the technique, his body and cells will become terribly strong, could it be withstand a transplant of Hashirama's cells? It would be great if he could withstand it and acquire the mokuton or else he becomes stronger, increases his regeneration speed, physical power and amount of chakra, you could also make his vagabond parents have some relationship with the gold and silver brothers by relatives behind, and could awaken that lineage, allowing him to carry some weapon of these brothers, he could also negotiate with orochimaru to learn the wise way of the snakes, obtain some sample of the juice body to try to acquire the ability to absorb natural energy passively and would not go crazy if he mastered a sage mode. Furthermore, I could also pay him to capture a hyuga from the main branch to transplant the byakugan, since these do not cause the same problem as the sharingan, and since Orochimaru can easily sneak into the leaf (it is just a matter of convincing Orochimaru ), he could also consider learning Tsunade's strange strength, although it would be difficult for Tsunade to teach him, unless he captures Sakura and tortures her to learn the method as well as the forehead seal technique, it is too useful, or First he obtains the byakugan and then with those eyes they try to see the movement of the chakra of the strange force technique to copy it. In addition, they should also develop the technological side in Kumo. Didn't they manage to create a cannon capable of destroying the moon? It would be great if that was brought forward and they used it against the Juubi if it managed to revive or to destroy the moon. Technology has to be used and there is a lot of potential.
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It is a good story with a interesting take on. The MC starts as a average talented person in hidden cloud. A realistic take on and funny too. I can only say read the first couple chapters to make yourself a picture.
отличная история мне очень нравится. надеюсь ты продолжишь это до конца[img=обновить][img=обновить][img=обновить][img=обновить][img=обновить][img=обновить]
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Very good fanfic, canon divergence is also good. Seems original. No major language issues. Plot is very good. MC is intelligent but not in the chinese novel sense. Overall a very good fic. Also mc is(obviously) from kumo so smth new.
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Not much if reviewer so I will keep it shot and sweet....read it it is a nice novel that does not center in and around konoha and gives the other villages (kumo) their time in the sun (I know I said that I waill keep it short I didn't so sue me....don't sue me )
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It's good i am really excited what happens from now on in the story [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Thank you for the fanfic author san, there are few fanfics that talk about other Bijuus, especially Matatabi who is my favorite Bijuu, I hope you finish this fanfic, show the perspectives of other characters and have lots of interactions between the MC and Yugito
Reborn in the ninja world, Sato had nothing to call his own, not even a home to protect himself from wind and frost. It is from such a situation that Sato will rise, through sheer wits alone he will become one of the strongest beings in the Ninja world.
I love it I do admit that the story in certain parts like during the time skips could have senses in them but either way I love it good job
Whaddup gang, I’m giving u a 5 star cuz I love your celestial dragon ff, please continue I absolutely love that ff. At least continue after you complete this one
Great read, long live kumo!! However I’m going to back out after the chunin arc because I’m scared at how easily author kills side characters and how inconsequential the mc reacted to it. Even hinata died but came back. I’m not good with character deaths. And the “payoff” wasn’t worth it, all orochimaru lost was a body, no satisfying revenge or anything
ネタバレを明かす I feel like I'm watching Konoha being recreated in Kumo. What's the point of having the Uchiha in Kumo? The Uchiha has lived in the Land of Fire for thousands of years and they agreed to move just like that? Why not retrieve the Land of Lightning's Chinoike Clan whom they banished to the Land of Hot Water? It's like I'm reading Konoha all over again, all the interesting parts of Kumo are stripped and replaced with Konoha Dojutsu, Itachi and Shisui. Shisui is basically an idiot and Itachi is not himself. The Uchiha is an evil clan and they deserved to be wiped out, and Itachi here is too lacking in resolve. The part with Yugito Nii giving him tailed Chakra is interesting, but it went downhill the moment he proposed to take away Hinata, it really doesn't make sense that Hiashi would make the direct descendant of the main family leave the Land of Fire even when cornered, but at least this part was feasable.
It went down hill when the author started making huge plotholes and started killing people off.
es buena serie y más que es único por no empezar en konoha como el 99% , además de que este solo con hinata y cambiará su personalidad también es bueno y sobre todo que esta creciendo sin un sistema, buena serie lo único malo es que en los últimos capítulos su comportamiento es demasiado engreído
MC reincarnated into Cloud village, something that I see very rare happens in Naruto fanfic. The potential Waifu selection is good and the best part of the story is how cunning and shameless the MC is. (Hiruzen Get REKT boiiii)🤣😤
I must say that I only read it to pass the time, not taking into account the canonical, since if it were so in most fics what I have read it would not include all the aspects of the original
Writing Quality 5/5 Stability of Updates 4/5 Story Development 5/5 Character Design 5/5 World Background 5/5 Please don't drop!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Alright this is a weird one. Honestly writing quality is good it’s just the plot progression is so strange man… characters don’t act as they should sometimes and are strange. He meets character K and immediately asks for them to live with him and his sister, charactwr S who is loyal to his village bends to him very quickly and the whole hyuga talks were so out of character and strange to me. He writes well and there’s good jokes here so if you can look past the plot that sometimes is janky you could have some fun here.
The protagonist is too opㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ
Good start, I have the hypothesis, if the mc learns the thunder chakra mode and masters it at a level higher than the third raikage, I imagine that in this entire process of mastering the technique, his body and cells will become terribly strong, could it be withstand a transplant of Hashirama's cells? It would be great if he could withstand it and acquire the mokuton or else he becomes stronger, increases his regeneration speed, physical power and amount of chakra, you could also make his vagabond parents have some relationship with the gold and silver brothers by relatives behind, and could awaken that lineage, allowing him to carry some weapon of these brothers, he could also negotiate with orochimaru to learn the wise way of the snakes, obtain some sample of the juice body to try to acquire the ability to absorb natural energy passively and would not go crazy if he mastered a sage mode. Furthermore, I could also pay him to capture a hyuga from the main branch to transplant the byakugan, since these do not cause the same problem as the sharingan, and since Orochimaru can easily sneak into the leaf (it is just a matter of convincing Orochimaru ), he could also consider learning Tsunade's strange strength, although it would be difficult for Tsunade to teach him, unless he captures Sakura and tortures her to learn the method as well as the forehead seal technique, it is too useful, or First he obtains the byakugan and then with those eyes they try to see the movement of the chakra of the strange force technique to copy it. In addition, they should also develop the technological side in Kumo. Didn't they manage to create a cannon capable of destroying the moon? It would be great if that was brought forward and they used it against the Juubi if it managed to revive or to destroy the moon. Technology has to be used and there is a lot of potential.
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I gave you 2 stones for this chapter.......................................................................................................................
It is a good story with a interesting take on. The MC starts as a average talented person in hidden cloud. A realistic take on and funny too. I can only say read the first couple chapters to make yourself a picture.
отличная история мне очень нравится. надеюсь ты продолжишь это до конца[img=обновить][img=обновить][img=обновить][img=обновить][img=обновить][img=обновить]
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Very good fanfic, canon divergence is also good. Seems original. No major language issues. Plot is very good. MC is intelligent but not in the chinese novel sense. Overall a very good fic. Also mc is(obviously) from kumo so smth new.
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Not much if reviewer so I will keep it shot and sweet....read it it is a nice novel that does not center in and around konoha and gives the other villages (kumo) their time in the sun (I know I said that I waill keep it short I didn't so sue me....don't sue me )
Xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx not bed not bed
ネタバレを明かす It's good i am really excited what happens from now on in the story [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Thank you for the fanfic author san, there are few fanfics that talk about other Bijuus, especially Matatabi who is my favorite Bijuu, I hope you finish this fanfic, show the perspectives of other characters and have lots of interactions between the MC and Yugito
Reborn in the ninja world, Sato had nothing to call his own, not even a home to protect himself from wind and frost. It is from such a situation that Sato will rise, through sheer wits alone he will become one of the strongest beings in the Ninja world.