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The progression is super monotonous and distasteful. Everything goes according to the mc. There is no tension, no conflict , no arguments, no learning path. no challenges. Even if the MC is a reincarnation of an old guy with vast experience, you can make his speech, his thoughts clash with modern day rules and trends. His walk could have been made criticized. If everything goes right it stops being believable. Always try to retain small blemishes in character. It will bring more depth to character. Side characters come and go and everyone has the same relationship with MC. All the side characters only say the things that are necessary for the story to proceed . Nothing more , nothing less. They don't have any personal gimmicks, habits, features that can separate one another. In my mind all of them may look the same, it will not matter. The plot progression is so summary like that everytime I read a chapter I want to stop then and there.
Interesting read with a clear premise based on an alternate world. The MC is over powered but limited by both circumstances and environment. Though the characters are not overly well developed, they still draw attention and not completely clichéd. The storyline and plot is entertaining and writing is well paced. If you like a well balanced novel, this one is a good read.
Why are the girls and women in this story so weird? Either they are perverts or sexual assaulters... Not one woman was mentioned without sexual thoughts including the MC's mother! The author doesn't know how to write women. The pacing of the story is very summary like. It's the type of things I would expect from an article review of the story rather than the actual story...The world building is almost nonexistent... All I know about the place is that it's the modern world with hidden martial artists. I had good expectations at the beginning but it just went downhill after the students started sexually assaulting the mc in public because of his sweat. The parents of the MC are also there just for name's sake. They contribute almost nothing to the story except their existence. Sorry to say this Author but this is my honest opinion.
This is an excellent story. I just can't get enough!definitely worthy of my daily power stones!!!
Awesome Characters. I can't wait for more 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
The storyline was made very well, especially the story of the ml who fights for his life, has self-development and is eager to gain more knowledge all the time. I really like this character and want to watch him grow up. So, I'll wait to see his progression. Keep fighting, Bai Zhe!!
This is kinda like a survival story at the present time.. where everything is so expensive. The character can't do farming or anything like a Chinese ancient time. So, the main lead has to do something else to make money for a living. As his Qi is very useful, he took this opportunity to use it to upgrade his life such as in working or in school. I think if he worked in the entertainment industry, there would be a scene in which he would absolutely use Qi to help with his acting. By the way, I'll keep reading this novel till the end. No regret for sure :)
I have so much fun reading this book, it is so well-explained. Also, the way the author adds humor to the story and the characters' dialog is quite smooth, I can feel their needs and efforts. Btw, the ml's behavior and manner are so kyute!! >< making me root for him all along. He is not the best character but he fights with all his life. Come take my heart baby!! <3
I'm a fan of this novel already! The reason why I wrote a review is because I want to support the writer. His work is really great, it's been a while since I found a great novel like this. In the story, the male lead is a nice guy as well as their parents. It's a shame that their life is so tough, hope they'll get a better life.
Being a martial artist from an ancient time who transmigrated to the present time is not easy. It's lucky that he has a fast adaptation, otherwise, we would laugh at him all the story for sure hahaha. From the person who used to be a great swordsman and practiced Qi power so much all the time, he had to change his goal to become a superstar instead. Love his effort lol. It's funny and attracts me to root for him to survive in his new world haha
It's worth following, I'll give it a full score of 100!! Hehe. I've just read this genre for the first time. Mostly, I usually read about reincarnation or transmigration in a Chinese ancient-era but this plot is about a current time. Moreover, the progression of this story is so fast that the lead is just transmigrated, but then he can talk and adapt himself like people in the present time. In addition, I like how the lead secretly uses his power to fix things such as a bag, shoes, and clothes because he's too poor to buy a new one. Thus, we can tell that his Qi is really useful for living in this world.
I normally read about the transmigration to the ancient era, but this book is about the protagonist who is transmigrated to the present time and has to adapt to this era. It's unusal but unique as well. I need this kind of genre more!!![img=update]
for the price of five star here's the question what is the title in MtlN ??? [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Nicely written, I can't wait to see how famous the ml would be in the future! A story about a master of martial arts who is transmigrated into a normal boy's body and has to start from zero is my cup of tea.[img=recommend][img=recommend]
I like the character that he is not picking girls up like Pokémon (am at the beginning of the story, like chapter 45) and how he is not like this evil MC a good person and helps his parents🙃🙃🥰
The progression is super monotonous and distasteful. Everything goes according to the mc. There is no tension, no conflict , no arguments, no learning path. no challenges. Even if the MC is a reincarnation of an old guy with vast experience, you can make his speech, his thoughts clash with modern day rules and trends. His walk could have been made criticized. If everything goes right it stops being believable. Always try to retain small blemishes in character. It will bring more depth to character. Side characters come and go and everyone has the same relationship with MC. All the side characters only say the things that are necessary for the story to proceed . Nothing more , nothing less. They don't have any personal gimmicks, habits, features that can separate one another. In my mind all of them may look the same, it will not matter. The plot progression is so summary like that everytime I read a chapter I want to stop then and there.
Interesting read with a clear premise based on an alternate world. The MC is over powered but limited by both circumstances and environment. Though the characters are not overly well developed, they still draw attention and not completely clichéd. The storyline and plot is entertaining and writing is well paced. If you like a well balanced novel, this one is a good read.
Why are the girls and women in this story so weird? Either they are perverts or sexual assaulters... Not one woman was mentioned without sexual thoughts including the MC's mother! The author doesn't know how to write women. The pacing of the story is very summary like. It's the type of things I would expect from an article review of the story rather than the actual story...The world building is almost nonexistent... All I know about the place is that it's the modern world with hidden martial artists. I had good expectations at the beginning but it just went downhill after the students started sexually assaulting the mc in public because of his sweat. The parents of the MC are also there just for name's sake. They contribute almost nothing to the story except their existence. Sorry to say this Author but this is my honest opinion.
This is an excellent story. I just can't get enough!definitely worthy of my daily power stones!!!
Awesome Characters. I can't wait for more 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
The storyline was made very well, especially the story of the ml who fights for his life, has self-development and is eager to gain more knowledge all the time. I really like this character and want to watch him grow up. So, I'll wait to see his progression. Keep fighting, Bai Zhe!!
This is kinda like a survival story at the present time.. where everything is so expensive. The character can't do farming or anything like a Chinese ancient time. So, the main lead has to do something else to make money for a living. As his Qi is very useful, he took this opportunity to use it to upgrade his life such as in working or in school. I think if he worked in the entertainment industry, there would be a scene in which he would absolutely use Qi to help with his acting. By the way, I'll keep reading this novel till the end. No regret for sure :)
I have so much fun reading this book, it is so well-explained. Also, the way the author adds humor to the story and the characters' dialog is quite smooth, I can feel their needs and efforts. Btw, the ml's behavior and manner are so kyute!! >< making me root for him all along. He is not the best character but he fights with all his life. Come take my heart baby!! <3
I'm a fan of this novel already! The reason why I wrote a review is because I want to support the writer. His work is really great, it's been a while since I found a great novel like this. In the story, the male lead is a nice guy as well as their parents. It's a shame that their life is so tough, hope they'll get a better life.
Being a martial artist from an ancient time who transmigrated to the present time is not easy. It's lucky that he has a fast adaptation, otherwise, we would laugh at him all the story for sure hahaha. From the person who used to be a great swordsman and practiced Qi power so much all the time, he had to change his goal to become a superstar instead. Love his effort lol. It's funny and attracts me to root for him to survive in his new world haha
It's worth following, I'll give it a full score of 100!! Hehe. I've just read this genre for the first time. Mostly, I usually read about reincarnation or transmigration in a Chinese ancient-era but this plot is about a current time. Moreover, the progression of this story is so fast that the lead is just transmigrated, but then he can talk and adapt himself like people in the present time. In addition, I like how the lead secretly uses his power to fix things such as a bag, shoes, and clothes because he's too poor to buy a new one. Thus, we can tell that his Qi is really useful for living in this world.
I normally read about the transmigration to the ancient era, but this book is about the protagonist who is transmigrated to the present time and has to adapt to this era. It's unusal but unique as well. I need this kind of genre more!!![img=update]
for the price of five star here's the question what is the title in MtlN ??? [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Nicely written, I can't wait to see how famous the ml would be in the future! A story about a master of martial arts who is transmigrated into a normal boy's body and has to start from zero is my cup of tea.[img=recommend][img=recommend]
I like the character that he is not picking girls up like Pokémon (am at the beginning of the story, like chapter 45) and how he is not like this evil MC a good person and helps his parents🙃🙃🥰