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Ожидал большего. Если правильно помню, было сказано, что герою в сумма 38 лет. Много неподтверждённых теорий из оригинальной истории и фанфиков в его памяти сохранилось. Но при этом такие резкие изменения он даже не пытается маскировать, буд-то всё это игра и всегда можно попробовать снова.
Ron Weasley... Mc... OP... hero [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Masterclass. I enjoyed the thrill and the way you mixed the whole reincarnation thing was pure class. 🤩
let's start reading this..........................................................................................................................................................................
Its stealing posting a story from an author without permission even when you dont make money of the story. The original title is Voleur D'âme and not the one you wrote, just delete your stolen content.
you goooootta make breaks in your writing when switching from one scene to the other, it's so annoying.
Its not this author's work but this fanfic is great. The MC ignores Hermione to spend time with fluer, this thing makes the likeness of this novel drop. He and Harry are learning theory, dueling and other magic but Hermione is not included in that. This makes the novel not pleasing to read.
Make the abominable Ron Weasley the protagonist ? Just out of curiosity, did you often bang your head as a child ? Do the world a favor and never write again!
I don't know if the author asked for permission so this review is my take on the fic itself.The writing quality is good but that's it Mc has no control over himself, he gets over-angry at every little thing, is totally useless and a burden to others, too arrogant with no improvement in character as the fic goes on.Although it's not my thing but others can give it a try if want.
Thanks for sharing the story. People take pleasure in criticizing but you actually said from the start in the description that it was not your work. However, I am grateful to you for introducing me to this story.
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What is with the "trend" posting another persons work here? I could understand if you have permission for it but you don't!
Honestly really scummy thing to do this author has this problem where people have stolen there work before and ask them to take it down ask be fore you do
Amazing novel, I like especially that ron helps harry get stronger, truly a great friend.///////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
Voleaur Dame by twins in FF. it's completed and available there! ! ask permission from authors before pulling stuff like this! ! and readers read summary xd
had low expectations but i was pleasently suprised, minor flaws are that it might be a bit fast paced and sometimes it suddenly switched scenes making it a bit harder to read
This is one of the better Hp fanfics with Ron as the Mc. For those who want an intelligent and powerful Ron Mc, then this story is for you.
Ожидал большего. Если правильно помню, было сказано, что герою в сумма 38 лет. Много неподтверждённых теорий из оригинальной истории и фанфиков в его памяти сохранилось. Но при этом такие резкие изменения он даже не пытается маскировать, буд-то всё это игра и всегда можно попробовать снова.
Ron Weasley... Mc... OP... hero [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Masterclass. I enjoyed the thrill and the way you mixed the whole reincarnation thing was pure class. 🤩
let's start reading this..........................................................................................................................................................................
Its stealing posting a story from an author without permission even when you dont make money of the story. The original title is Voleur D'âme and not the one you wrote, just delete your stolen content.
you goooootta make breaks in your writing when switching from one scene to the other, it's so annoying.
Its not this author's work but this fanfic is great. The MC ignores Hermione to spend time with fluer, this thing makes the likeness of this novel drop. He and Harry are learning theory, dueling and other magic but Hermione is not included in that. This makes the novel not pleasing to read.
Make the abominable Ron Weasley the protagonist ? Just out of curiosity, did you often bang your head as a child ? Do the world a favor and never write again!
I don't know if the author asked for permission so this review is my take on the fic itself.The writing quality is good but that's it Mc has no control over himself, he gets over-angry at every little thing, is totally useless and a burden to others, too arrogant with no improvement in character as the fic goes on.Although it's not my thing but others can give it a try if want.
Thanks for sharing the story. People take pleasure in criticizing but you actually said from the start in the description that it was not your work. However, I am grateful to you for introducing me to this story.
Stolen story......................Stolen story......................Stolen story......................Stolen story......................Stolen story......................Stolen story......................Stolen story......................Stolen story......................Stolen story......................Stolen story......................Stolen story......................Stolen story......................Stolen story......................Stolen story......................Stolen story......................
ネタバレを明かす What is with the "trend" posting another persons work here? I could understand if you have permission for it but you don't!
Honestly really scummy thing to do this author has this problem where people have stolen there work before and ask them to take it down ask be fore you do
Amazing novel, I like especially that ron helps harry get stronger, truly a great friend.///////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
Voleaur Dame by twins in FF. it's completed and available there! ! ask permission from authors before pulling stuff like this! ! and readers read summary xd
had low expectations but i was pleasently suprised, minor flaws are that it might be a bit fast paced and sometimes it suddenly switched scenes making it a bit harder to read
This is one of the better Hp fanfics with Ron as the Mc. For those who want an intelligent and powerful Ron Mc, then this story is for you.
very good story, it's just a pity the author did not continued it