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Xuan used to fight for humanity, but humanity failed him. As the Creator of 14 Martial Paths, jealousy and envy was his greatest threat. He was forced to surrender his Refining pot and his Technique scrolls by the traitors. The traitors battled him and killed him.
With him dying, he woke up again in the body of his past self. With him having a second chance, he swore to get revenge on all the traitors who killed him.
Having been put back to the past as a cripple, he will solve all his problems using his past experiences. Rising from the bottom to top!
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Ngl, this one is good. I feel like I'm reading Korean webtoon, the introduction and is good and so is the grammar. perfect
This was a really interesting read. especially the fighting at the start. It gave some insight into the novels fighting style and the techniques i only found chapter 3 a bit hard to read but after a quick skim the story starts to build up nicely.
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Great Job! The fighting scene was awesome and I couldn't stop reading. Keep up the good work!
Interesting read, not much to say because the story has only just begun, but so far so good, grammar is good, plot is good, and it is quite easy to read. The characters are also likeable. The author is doing an excellent job so far; let's see where it goes; best wishes!
This was an interesting read, I love the characters.The plot is good, keep up the good work author.
The author used a lot of the word ‘then’, I hope the author deletes it or uses it in a way that is comfortable to read. Also, the story plot seems interesting but there is something about reading it that is the issue. I hope this quote help the author when editing his work and that is, ‘you need to become the reader when you edit the story instead of its writer’. On that note, I wish the author all the best with his new work. Keep it up!![img=recommend]
Interesting read, I cannot wait for more chapters[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update]
Love the narration and writing style is great... World building is done nicely and character development is going well... Its great so far...
wow, I couldn't stop reading from the first chapter. I really hope the author will continue to surprise us