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I love this. I can't explain it but the chapters cannot come fast enough. I could mention the usual, great writing, interesting characters/world-building (literally). But that is not enough. This story is Enthralling, if you haven't read it, do so.
For everyone who expected a Story about an Main Charakter will be dissapointed. Some Side Charakter have mote Screentime than him. And If you expect Action this is also not for you. And If you Like an Naive MC to the Point where He gets sealed away than this Story is for you.
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this is an absolute gem, I loved reading every word of it, it's so rare to have a warhammer fiction on this app, let alone one so good, extra points for having zero romance, another point for sticking to the Lore as much as possible even if the war in heaven was never discussed as intensively as you have done, so in short.. Love It and Totally recommended
such à gréât story .... unfortinatly its discontinuited and the author seems to Havre dropped the thg .... i hope to read the next chps
I came looking for bronze only to find gold, the overall story is growing to a good area, I can only hope that you continue this work and not be disheartened by the negativity, after all stories at this quality are rare for every fandom.
I don’t know much about the 40k universe but I found this enjoyable to read! Also the people complaining about the mc not being the mc are dumber than the korks, from what little I know about 40k, it is big with lots going on, so the author is setting up the world while also developing the characters of those he will use. Definitely worth a read! A try atleast!
Study the history of warhammer 40k. And if you're writing fan fiction, then spend more time with your main character!
I'm extremely curious to see the main character's relationship with the Emperor of mankind.
For the Emperor For the Emperor For the Emperor For the Emperor For the Emperor For the Emperor For the Emperor For the Emperor For the Emperor For the Emperor For the Emperor For the Emperor For the Emperor For the Emperor For the Emperor For the Emperor For the Emperor For the Emperor For the Emperor For the Emperor
all I gotta say is the main character is not the main character but a plot device. dont read if you want a story about the main character. this story is just the authors retelling of war hammer lore witha bit of the au sprinkled in. bad story basically but hats just my incredibly good oppinion.
Its rare to see such a good story, if the quality keeps up then im dying of happines
Very good......................................................................................................................................................................................................
Best fanfic of Warhammer 40K for me, Don't drop please.........................................................................................................
Is this Warhammer???????¿...........................…...................... .,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,
it's good i can see the potential and is really nothing wrong on your grammar i hope you don't drop and continue this well i just hope you listen to my words and many more people like me so don't drop okay
I don't say this often but this work has no flaws. I'm not saying it's perfect. But it has no flaws✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨ ✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨
Such a lovely change of pace compared to other 40k fanfics, I love it… I hope it keeps going. Definitely not what I was expecting from 40k lol.
a great start to the story hope you continue it and don't drop it .....................................................................................
This is probably the best book this month, and maybe these last few months. I hope it gets all the recognition it deserves.
You are quite talented at writing guardsman.Hmm? what's this? you are dropping the fic? That's understandabl... stand against that wall guardsman. *bang*
why why must this be so God dang GOOD and so God dang SHORT !!! haha . . . sigh I suppose that's the trade off for both high quality chapters and daily updates huh 10 out of 10 do recommend
The progression of the story is mid not to fast not to slow just have the right pace to it. I can wait and see what you vision for the future is.
I like how the story is progressing thus far.I would like see how c'tan are created and evolution of the universe.keep up the good work 👏.
Good casual read, very interesting and imaginative, easily able to keep my intrest, i'm definitely feeling an increasing need for more updates.
I love this. I can't explain it but the chapters cannot come fast enough. I could mention the usual, great writing, interesting characters/world-building (literally). But that is not enough. This story is Enthralling, if you haven't read it, do so.
For everyone who expected a Story about an Main Charakter will be dissapointed. Some Side Charakter have mote Screentime than him. And If you expect Action this is also not for you. And If you Like an Naive MC to the Point where He gets sealed away than this Story is for you.
ネタバレを明かす this is an absolute gem, I loved reading every word of it, it's so rare to have a warhammer fiction on this app, let alone one so good, extra points for having zero romance, another point for sticking to the Lore as much as possible even if the war in heaven was never discussed as intensively as you have done, so in short.. Love It and Totally recommended
such à gréât story .... unfortinatly its discontinuited and the author seems to Havre dropped the thg .... i hope to read the next chps
I came looking for bronze only to find gold, the overall story is growing to a good area, I can only hope that you continue this work and not be disheartened by the negativity, after all stories at this quality are rare for every fandom.
I don’t know much about the 40k universe but I found this enjoyable to read! Also the people complaining about the mc not being the mc are dumber than the korks, from what little I know about 40k, it is big with lots going on, so the author is setting up the world while also developing the characters of those he will use. Definitely worth a read! A try atleast!
Study the history of warhammer 40k. And if you're writing fan fiction, then spend more time with your main character!
I'm extremely curious to see the main character's relationship with the Emperor of mankind.
For the Emperor For the Emperor For the Emperor For the Emperor For the Emperor For the Emperor For the Emperor For the Emperor For the Emperor For the Emperor For the Emperor For the Emperor For the Emperor For the Emperor For the Emperor For the Emperor For the Emperor For the Emperor For the Emperor For the Emperor
all I gotta say is the main character is not the main character but a plot device. dont read if you want a story about the main character. this story is just the authors retelling of war hammer lore witha bit of the au sprinkled in. bad story basically but hats just my incredibly good oppinion.
Its rare to see such a good story, if the quality keeps up then im dying of happines
Very good......................................................................................................................................................................................................
Best fanfic of Warhammer 40K for me, Don't drop please.........................................................................................................
Is this Warhammer???????¿...........................…...................... .,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,
it's good i can see the potential and is really nothing wrong on your grammar i hope you don't drop and continue this well i just hope you listen to my words and many more people like me so don't drop okay
I don't say this often but this work has no flaws. I'm not saying it's perfect. But it has no flaws✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨ ✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨
Such a lovely change of pace compared to other 40k fanfics, I love it… I hope it keeps going. Definitely not what I was expecting from 40k lol.
a great start to the story hope you continue it and don't drop it .....................................................................................
This is probably the best book this month, and maybe these last few months. I hope it gets all the recognition it deserves.
You are quite talented at writing guardsman.Hmm? what's this? you are dropping the fic? That's understandabl... stand against that wall guardsman. *bang*
why why must this be so God dang GOOD and so God dang SHORT !!! haha . . . sigh I suppose that's the trade off for both high quality chapters and daily updates huh 10 out of 10 do recommend
The progression of the story is mid not to fast not to slow just have the right pace to it. I can wait and see what you vision for the future is.
I like how the story is progressing thus far.I would like see how c'tan are created and evolution of the universe.keep up the good work 👏.
Good casual read, very interesting and imaginative, easily able to keep my intrest, i'm definitely feeling an increasing need for more updates.