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Ibrahim_NiR

Valió la pena!!! ......................................................................................................................................................................................................

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GodPL
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1yr
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daoist_shaheer

The grammer of the fanfic is alright.The mc is not a simp so you dont have to worry about seeing mc trying to build a harem and mc does not save all beauty in trouble which will give him trouble later. Also the fanfic is more focus on the story and as for romance i cant say as the female has not arrive yet or which girl is the lead i dont know

1yr
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Lord_Rings

this is the best douluo dalu fan fiction novel I ever read. don't not just ignore this novel this is the hidden jade. everyone has to try it once and continue if you like it.

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Gray_1
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What is the name of the raw? You should put the original name and the authors name in description.

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Venalter

This novel readable if you just ignore many translator inconsistent with their translate I really expect it this novel has same quality like Doulou Ronin if the Translator fix their translation. - Readable - Many Grammar mistakes on power term in soul land ( Soul Power, Name of beast, Name of items)

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Denver_0631

If Tang san is Arrogant then MC is more Arrogant.. .. no sense of realism and Plot sucks

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Oleg_Nikitin

История довольно интересная и весёлая. Читается легко. Конечно, и недостатки присутствуют. Например гг, который поднимает свои ранги как на ракете, кольца душ у него из ничего появляются, боевого духа его никто не видел, и все дружно это игнорируют, буд-то так и должно быть. Расстроен тем, что он не забрал кость души А Инь, да и на арене мог чаще сражаться, очки себе зарабатывать, вроде бы очевидные варианты. Надеюсь на продолжение и пусть муза вас не покидает.

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DaoistTwPNf9

2 coisas que acredito deveriam ter colocado na história 1: mais técnicas de espada só que apenas a técnica de desenhar a espada. 2: mc e um personagem extremamente bruto sem possuir nenhuma tática ou plano reserva considerando, o mundo que ele foi parar, agir dessa forma e estúpido

11mth
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Anup_RyuSenju

a trash novel of Chinese and even this translation is trash, could have removed many things but nah you still wanna add it. piece uf garbage.

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crimsonitaci

very good novel thx........................................................................................................................ lao also raws?

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Vikas_Thakur_8226

Your writing quality is bad. I've to read everything twice.

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Reykun
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Reyrine_Aetherna

Good I want my daily updates So yeah it's not the best fic but it's good and bit funny.........................................................

1yr
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Hanzreyn

I really like the mc's personality i just hope this won't turn into a harem and i know this would cuz its xianxia its just i hope!! 🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹 Im giving all 5 stars except Translation quality cuz there's still some problems with the grammar, that's all is the problems i have on this novel and please more chaps 😍😍

1yr
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404ErrorNoName

Good I want my daily updates So yeah it’s not the best fic but it’s good and bit funny

1yr
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Who_are_you_

Where's the original link? It is not in the sypnosis

1yr
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Dark_Symphony

Read till chapter 9 translation looks good so far. Good to see an self centered mc In Douluo

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iModex

The first 5 chapters are good , looking forward for more

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Ibrahim_NiR

Valió la pena!!! ......................................................................................................................................................................................................

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GodPL
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1yr
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daoist_shaheer

The grammer of the fanfic is alright.The mc is not a simp so you dont have to worry about seeing mc trying to build a harem and mc does not save all beauty in trouble which will give him trouble later. Also the fanfic is more focus on the story and as for romance i cant say as the female has not arrive yet or which girl is the lead i dont know

1yr
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Lord_Rings

this is the best douluo dalu fan fiction novel I ever read. don't not just ignore this novel this is the hidden jade. everyone has to try it once and continue if you like it.

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3mth
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Gray_1
LV 13 Badge

What is the name of the raw? You should put the original name and the authors name in description.

3mth
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Venalter

This novel readable if you just ignore many translator inconsistent with their translate I really expect it this novel has same quality like Doulou Ronin if the Translator fix their translation. - Readable - Many Grammar mistakes on power term in soul land ( Soul Power, Name of beast, Name of items)

8mth
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Denver_0631

If Tang san is Arrogant then MC is more Arrogant.. .. no sense of realism and Plot sucks

9mth
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Oleg_Nikitin

История довольно интересная и весёлая. Читается легко. Конечно, и недостатки присутствуют. Например гг, который поднимает свои ранги как на ракете, кольца душ у него из ничего появляются, боевого духа его никто не видел, и все дружно это игнорируют, буд-то так и должно быть. Расстроен тем, что он не забрал кость души А Инь, да и на арене мог чаще сражаться, очки себе зарабатывать, вроде бы очевидные варианты. Надеюсь на продолжение и пусть муза вас не покидает.

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10mth
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DaoistTwPNf9

2 coisas que acredito deveriam ter colocado na história 1: mais técnicas de espada só que apenas a técnica de desenhar a espada. 2: mc e um personagem extremamente bruto sem possuir nenhuma tática ou plano reserva considerando, o mundo que ele foi parar, agir dessa forma e estúpido

11mth
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Anup_RyuSenju

a trash novel of Chinese and even this translation is trash, could have removed many things but nah you still wanna add it. piece uf garbage.

11mth
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crimsonitaci

very good novel thx........................................................................................................................ lao also raws?

1yr
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Vikas_Thakur_8226

Your writing quality is bad. I've to read everything twice.

1yr
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Reykun
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1yr
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Reyrine_Aetherna

Good I want my daily updates So yeah it's not the best fic but it's good and bit funny.........................................................

1yr
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Hanzreyn

I really like the mc's personality i just hope this won't turn into a harem and i know this would cuz its xianxia its just i hope!! 🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹 Im giving all 5 stars except Translation quality cuz there's still some problems with the grammar, that's all is the problems i have on this novel and please more chaps 😍😍

1yr
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404ErrorNoName

Good I want my daily updates So yeah it’s not the best fic but it’s good and bit funny

1yr
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Who_are_you_

Where's the original link? It is not in the sypnosis

1yr
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Dark_Symphony

Read till chapter 9 translation looks good so far. Good to see an self centered mc In Douluo

1yr
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iModex

The first 5 chapters are good , looking forward for more

1yr
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