Douluo Dalu - First Slash

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Ibrahim_NiR

Valió la pena!!! ......................................................................................................................................................................................................

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GodPL

Very good novel,Very good novel,Very good novel,Very good novel,Very good novel,Very good novel,Very good novel,Very good novel,Very good novel,Very good novel,

LV 4

daoist_shaheer

The grammer of the fanfic is alright.The mc is not a simp so you dont have to worry about seeing mc trying to build a harem and mc does not save all beauty in trouble which will give him trouble later. Also the fanfic is more focus on the story and as for romance i cant say as the female has not arrive yet or which girl is the lead i dont know

LV 4

Anup_RyuSenju

a trash novel of Chinese and even this translation is trash, could have removed many things but nah you still wanna add it. piece uf garbage.

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Vikas_Thakur_8226

Your writing quality is bad. I've to read everything twice.

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Who_are_you_

Where's the original link? It is not in the sypnosis

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Denver_0631

If Tang san is Arrogant then MC is more Arrogant.. .. no sense of realism and Plot sucks

LV 12

Hanzreyn

I really like the mc's personality i just hope this won't turn into a harem and i know this would cuz its xianxia its just i hope!! 🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹 Im giving all 5 stars except Translation quality cuz there's still some problems with the grammar, that's all is the problems i have on this novel and please more chaps 😍😍

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Reykun

Good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good

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AnimeReader_player

From the beginning it is good and interesting but from chapter 11 it become worsen and I can't pass through chapter 12. Mc becoming Second tang-san. Pls, spoil me a bit would he stay arrogant with stupid decision and nonsense logic.

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Lord_Rings

this is the best douluo dalu fan fiction novel I ever read. don't not just ignore this novel this is the hidden jade. everyone has to try it once and continue if you like it.

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Gray_1

What is the name of the raw? You should put the original name and the authors name in description.

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DaoistTwPNf9

2 coisas que acredito deveriam ter colocado na história 1: mais técnicas de espada só que apenas a técnica de desenhar a espada. 2: mc e um personagem extremamente bruto sem possuir nenhuma tática ou plano reserva considerando, o mundo que ele foi parar, agir dessa forma e estúpido

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Reyrine_Aetherna

Good I want my daily updates So yeah it's not the best fic but it's good and bit funny.........................................................

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404ErrorNoName

Good I want my daily updates So yeah it’s not the best fic but it’s good and bit funny

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Dark_Symphony

Read till chapter 9 translation looks good so far. Good to see an self centered mc In Douluo

LV 4

iModex

The first 5 chapters are good , looking forward for more

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Venalter

This novel readable if you just ignore many translator inconsistent with their translate I really expect it this novel has same quality like Doulou Ronin if the Translator fix their translation. - Readable - Many Grammar mistakes on power term in soul land ( Soul Power, Name of beast, Name of items)

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crimsonitaci

very good novel thx........................................................................................................................ lao also raws?