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Novel made by AI without soul cheap copy of already better novel's the author will promise you that it will become better and will not copy anything but that is a lie it's still the same cheapest copy with minimum to no human interface......
I know I already reviewed but my views have changed this is literally a blatant copy with minor changes to the novels extra and the authors point of view
It’s a decent read but it’s so F*ing generic I’m on 63 and I swear to god the author just rips off stuff from other novels like The novels extra or like The authors point of view… Packhorse stock…(same as The novels extra) Isabella getting a gift from a fallen human(same premise as the other novels)
The author writes names like someone selling used cars. Darkheart, Thornheart, Morningstar, etc in the future we'll probably get Starbreaker, Worldender, Godkiller!!! Tone it down. Rule of writing: SHOW dont tell. This character hates demons, this character is smart, this one values rules, this one loves magic, blah blah. Show it to the readers. This is supposed to be a novel not a newspaper. Make character personalities come out instead of feeding descriptions. Character dialogue is written like the author hasnt talked to people in a while. Conversations are unnatural. Dont push yourself too hard because of ylur hate for demons dont forget to enjoy your life, who the hell talks like theyre breaking down your character motivations and sharing wisdom from a temple. The author needs to read more. Generic settings and world building are excusable if executed right. This work is written like someone got inspired by the first novel they read. Read more and experience more dont make novels expositions.
Alas, dropped at chapter 13. After chapter 5, the writing style became the one I hate the most - chatGPT edited and artificially stretched. I hate this disgusting writing style.
to much of a copy of the novel's extra. like almost all the scenarios are the same create something original next time. the Isabella arc was the most obvious. The author didn't even hide the fact that he copied Che Nayun's back story and mixed it with Yeonha's demonic human plot. the story has its good points, but I don't feel like this is an original idea, so I rate it at 2.5
after reading the first couple of chapters I'm 90% convinced that the author uses perchance or something similar to write the story. The personality of the mc and his interactions with his family felt so forced. i couldn't help but cringe at the interactions.
Isso tem muita cópia aqui kkkk, simplesmente copia uma 3 a 5 novels, no inicio parecia inspiração só que logo o cara só copiou os evento, e não mudou quase nada, os personagens são burros e desinteressantes, o vilão é estupido e parece criança, a forma como tudo ocorre é muito ruim, desisti com uns 70 capitulos, não inova em quase nada e nem arrisca, copiou a maioria dos eventos, espero que quem continue me diga se melhorou, até
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Apart from the plot being too generic almost as if it was taken from another book, the worst part is the grammar. So many errors are laying around. And when brought to the author's attention he says he would fix it but leaves it as it is.
Decent but it feels like ai and ChatGPT most of the time with over the top descriptions and many grammar mistakes that just don’t get fixed apparently the author or the ai writing this story doesn’t know how to spell words like artifact among others just turn your brain off to read this because you pretty much have two to enjoy this
Character speech, character personality, events in the story There is only copying and pasting from other novels. such as the author's point of view I will kill the author of the special novel. Read until chapter 68, still very bad, nothing new.
Felt like a copycat of all the other “reincarnated as an extra books with worse grammar. MCs personality would flip flop back and forth
You know once you read it. At first I thought it was but a typo but as I noticed the same mistakes again and again I realized it wasn't, and the author didn't even bother to look back and fix the mistakes.
So far, I’ve only seen one major problem in this novel. Other than that, this would be a very good read. 1st. The author needs to proof read his work. Checking over the grammars and spelling errors can significantly improve the writing quality. Perhaps read the script or writing aloud and see if the dialogue or narration makes sense to read. 2nd. The vocabulary used by the author has versatility and overall very nice sounding words. I don’t remember seeing any major repeats in vocab that were annoying. 3rd. There are times when the story development is too abrupt. Sometimes the author needs to slow down and take some time breaking down the situation. 4th. I don’t have any opinion against the character design. I guess it’s in the middle, not too good and not too bad. 5th. What this novel does really well is with the world background. The world background is very interesting and fascinating... The factions in races, the divide in opinions between them, and the overall dynamics of the world. It is solid and an excellent point in the novel. This is sort of just my overall opinion of this novel. It definitely has an incredible potential if the author somehow corrects the deficits in his writing. The points I mentioned were what I analyzed with my limited expertise in writing. Please don’t take my word for it.
This Novel is simply Gorgeous and Breathtaking 🤩✨🌟⭐🌠⭐🌟✨🤩 All Five Stars for Each Categories for You 🤩✨⭐🌟🌠🌟⭐✨🤩 Keep up your Good Works, Author 😎📖🍻
Too overrated. It's not worth it. Firstly, there are too many grammatical errors. Secondly, if Mc transmigrate into his trash novel, then the novel is gonna be trash anyway
look, im not homo.phobic (allot) or anything , but why is there two male leads ? (rating will change depending on answer)
The author's spelling and grammar are way off so please proofread your work before posting new chaps. Thank you!
infuriating, at this point I'm just rereading stuff that I READ BEFORE ,there's a stark difference between inspiration and whatever you've done ,try cooking something bizarre of your own, you can do it ^^
don't drop this like other authors do after writing 300 chapters it's a request to you . have a great life ahead!
First of congrats to the Author for reaching 1M views, this novel has been a really motivation for my on work and I like the story the way it is moving, even though there are a lot of cliche moments.MC: GoodOG MC: I dislike him.Romance: Huh? I will just live it at that.
author u know when a person read ur work , spending his time reading ur work .it's ur responsibility to make him feel tha that his time was not wasted , and here ur picking plots from another novels , character and merging them with cringe lines .it's hurting my brain .I thought it will be different but it still feels same.well i would raher prefer a novel with yur original idea and imagination .good bye and best of wishes for ur future endeavours
It just feels like the author can’t handle what he started. And common, I don’t mind reading copy and paste but just don’t let the names from the other novels slip up.
I feel like the author writes this story more on a whim, without much coherent thought behind it. It feels like he just tosses a bunch of information at you at the start of the novel, and then goes off and writes random plot twists dependent on his mood. Characters just perform actions outside of their explained personality, which personally i don't consider character development,character derailment maybe. Way too much time is also spent on random scuffles not really relevant to the story, being labelled as main scenarios, but could honestly be reduced to a chapter or 2 and nothing would change. I think the more egregious thing however is the author biting off more than he can chew. He spends several chapters building up this world based on a potentially predetermined story, and without the readers even knowing much about it, he sets about changing everything. I frankly don't understand setting up this world around certain characters to just add more supposedly, spicing up the novel however I just find it confusing. It's similar to wearing a full suit then just putting on a pair of pink underwear over it for flare, unnecessary. I think trying to add surprising elements to the Mc's background is ok, however shoving it into your face 20 chapters in is just so jarring and such an uncomfortable upset to the pace of the story. It's like if you're reading a novel about killing the demon king, then you spent 20 chapters on stopping some bullying not relevant, 30 chapters on a dungeon that could be 5, meaningless character interactions yes please give me 25, now why don't we make the mc's family secretly demon worshipers and the female lead's family a group of anthropomorphic hamsters, oh wait what was the main goal again, the demon king? The novel is now 100+ chapters and the author is getting tired, demon king is too far away and the hamster arc still needs to be solved, gg go next. If you don't have 600 chapters worth of effort and time to put into a novel, please don't write it as such with so many plot twists and turns before you've even properly started on the main path. Sorry bit of a rant at the end but thanks for reading, even this review could be shorter lol.
The story is good at the start but later it lost its's spark. It got boring pretty fast and it felt like it's not worth the time.
After reading it, I felt like there was nothing new at all. Many of the plot points are inspired by other novels, which makes the novel lack personality.
First ever review. I’ll be doing some pros and cons for the series so let’s start. Pros If you like authors pov and I will kill the author then you’ll like this story. It is very similar yet different so you could differentiate between them. Also I like the power scaling or training. It isn’t one of those “I have unlimited potential now, I’ll train crazy hard and become stronger than original MC.” It’s at a pace where I don’t really think it’s unreasonable but not too slow. The mc is like Lucas from I will kill the author so if you like him than you’ll enjoy this mc. Cons I only see one major flaw. The grammar. Throughout the story you’ll see many grammatical Issues or typos however the author says they do this from their phone so I can’t be too harsh because it’s a bit harder to type on phone than keyboard. So overal in my opinion this is a good read if you can ignore spelling mistakes.
Shameless Author is here!After 65 chapters I'm finally going to review my novel. It's been a long journey for me guys. Anyway, I know that many people are dissatisfied with the old chapter. So I'm going to edit all of them, I can't edit all of them at the same time but I will edit one or two chapters a day.So please support Guys in this novel.And if you want you can send gifts to me, I mean I didn't receive any gifts from my dear viewers, so if you like you can send gifts.And if you have any questions you can ask me here. Of course, I'm not going to be spoiled anything. So, bye-bye for now.
The story have a lot of potential it's all depends of the author. The characters specialy the mc have funny personalitie. the original mc its kinda annoying (this is my point of view from personalitie) and how i imagen the mc Lucas
Novel made by AI without soul cheap copy of already better novel's the author will promise you that it will become better and will not copy anything but that is a lie it's still the same cheapest copy with minimum to no human interface......
I know I already reviewed but my views have changed this is literally a blatant copy with minor changes to the novels extra and the authors point of view
It’s a decent read but it’s so F*ing generic I’m on 63 and I swear to god the author just rips off stuff from other novels like The novels extra or like The authors point of view… Packhorse stock…(same as The novels extra) Isabella getting a gift from a fallen human(same premise as the other novels)
The author writes names like someone selling used cars. Darkheart, Thornheart, Morningstar, etc in the future we'll probably get Starbreaker, Worldender, Godkiller!!! Tone it down. Rule of writing: SHOW dont tell. This character hates demons, this character is smart, this one values rules, this one loves magic, blah blah. Show it to the readers. This is supposed to be a novel not a newspaper. Make character personalities come out instead of feeding descriptions. Character dialogue is written like the author hasnt talked to people in a while. Conversations are unnatural. Dont push yourself too hard because of ylur hate for demons dont forget to enjoy your life, who the hell talks like theyre breaking down your character motivations and sharing wisdom from a temple. The author needs to read more. Generic settings and world building are excusable if executed right. This work is written like someone got inspired by the first novel they read. Read more and experience more dont make novels expositions.
Alas, dropped at chapter 13. After chapter 5, the writing style became the one I hate the most - chatGPT edited and artificially stretched. I hate this disgusting writing style.
to much of a copy of the novel's extra. like almost all the scenarios are the same create something original next time. the Isabella arc was the most obvious. The author didn't even hide the fact that he copied Che Nayun's back story and mixed it with Yeonha's demonic human plot. the story has its good points, but I don't feel like this is an original idea, so I rate it at 2.5
after reading the first couple of chapters I'm 90% convinced that the author uses perchance or something similar to write the story. The personality of the mc and his interactions with his family felt so forced. i couldn't help but cringe at the interactions.
Isso tem muita cópia aqui kkkk, simplesmente copia uma 3 a 5 novels, no inicio parecia inspiração só que logo o cara só copiou os evento, e não mudou quase nada, os personagens são burros e desinteressantes, o vilão é estupido e parece criança, a forma como tudo ocorre é muito ruim, desisti com uns 70 capitulos, não inova em quase nada e nem arrisca, copiou a maioria dos eventos, espero que quem continue me diga se melhorou, até
ネタバレを明かす Apart from the plot being too generic almost as if it was taken from another book, the worst part is the grammar. So many errors are laying around. And when brought to the author's attention he says he would fix it but leaves it as it is.
Decent but it feels like ai and ChatGPT most of the time with over the top descriptions and many grammar mistakes that just don’t get fixed apparently the author or the ai writing this story doesn’t know how to spell words like artifact among others just turn your brain off to read this because you pretty much have two to enjoy this
Character speech, character personality, events in the story There is only copying and pasting from other novels. such as the author's point of view I will kill the author of the special novel. Read until chapter 68, still very bad, nothing new.
Felt like a copycat of all the other “reincarnated as an extra books with worse grammar. MCs personality would flip flop back and forth
You know once you read it. At first I thought it was but a typo but as I noticed the same mistakes again and again I realized it wasn't, and the author didn't even bother to look back and fix the mistakes.
So far, I’ve only seen one major problem in this novel. Other than that, this would be a very good read. 1st. The author needs to proof read his work. Checking over the grammars and spelling errors can significantly improve the writing quality. Perhaps read the script or writing aloud and see if the dialogue or narration makes sense to read. 2nd. The vocabulary used by the author has versatility and overall very nice sounding words. I don’t remember seeing any major repeats in vocab that were annoying. 3rd. There are times when the story development is too abrupt. Sometimes the author needs to slow down and take some time breaking down the situation. 4th. I don’t have any opinion against the character design. I guess it’s in the middle, not too good and not too bad. 5th. What this novel does really well is with the world background. The world background is very interesting and fascinating... The factions in races, the divide in opinions between them, and the overall dynamics of the world. It is solid and an excellent point in the novel. This is sort of just my overall opinion of this novel. It definitely has an incredible potential if the author somehow corrects the deficits in his writing. The points I mentioned were what I analyzed with my limited expertise in writing. Please don’t take my word for it.
This Novel is simply Gorgeous and Breathtaking 🤩✨🌟⭐🌠⭐🌟✨🤩 All Five Stars for Each Categories for You 🤩✨⭐🌟🌠🌟⭐✨🤩 Keep up your Good Works, Author 😎📖🍻
Too overrated. It's not worth it. Firstly, there are too many grammatical errors. Secondly, if Mc transmigrate into his trash novel, then the novel is gonna be trash anyway
look, im not homo.phobic (allot) or anything , but why is there two male leads ? (rating will change depending on answer)
The author's spelling and grammar are way off so please proofread your work before posting new chaps. Thank you!
infuriating, at this point I'm just rereading stuff that I READ BEFORE ,there's a stark difference between inspiration and whatever you've done ,try cooking something bizarre of your own, you can do it ^^
don't drop this like other authors do after writing 300 chapters it's a request to you . have a great life ahead!
First of congrats to the Author for reaching 1M views, this novel has been a really motivation for my on work and I like the story the way it is moving, even though there are a lot of cliche moments.MC: GoodOG MC: I dislike him.Romance: Huh? I will just live it at that.
author u know when a person read ur work , spending his time reading ur work .it's ur responsibility to make him feel tha that his time was not wasted , and here ur picking plots from another novels , character and merging them with cringe lines .it's hurting my brain .I thought it will be different but it still feels same.well i would raher prefer a novel with yur original idea and imagination .good bye and best of wishes for ur future endeavours
It just feels like the author can’t handle what he started. And common, I don’t mind reading copy and paste but just don’t let the names from the other novels slip up.
I feel like the author writes this story more on a whim, without much coherent thought behind it. It feels like he just tosses a bunch of information at you at the start of the novel, and then goes off and writes random plot twists dependent on his mood. Characters just perform actions outside of their explained personality, which personally i don't consider character development,character derailment maybe. Way too much time is also spent on random scuffles not really relevant to the story, being labelled as main scenarios, but could honestly be reduced to a chapter or 2 and nothing would change. I think the more egregious thing however is the author biting off more than he can chew. He spends several chapters building up this world based on a potentially predetermined story, and without the readers even knowing much about it, he sets about changing everything. I frankly don't understand setting up this world around certain characters to just add more supposedly, spicing up the novel however I just find it confusing. It's similar to wearing a full suit then just putting on a pair of pink underwear over it for flare, unnecessary. I think trying to add surprising elements to the Mc's background is ok, however shoving it into your face 20 chapters in is just so jarring and such an uncomfortable upset to the pace of the story. It's like if you're reading a novel about killing the demon king, then you spent 20 chapters on stopping some bullying not relevant, 30 chapters on a dungeon that could be 5, meaningless character interactions yes please give me 25, now why don't we make the mc's family secretly demon worshipers and the female lead's family a group of anthropomorphic hamsters, oh wait what was the main goal again, the demon king? The novel is now 100+ chapters and the author is getting tired, demon king is too far away and the hamster arc still needs to be solved, gg go next. If you don't have 600 chapters worth of effort and time to put into a novel, please don't write it as such with so many plot twists and turns before you've even properly started on the main path. Sorry bit of a rant at the end but thanks for reading, even this review could be shorter lol.
The story is good at the start but later it lost its's spark. It got boring pretty fast and it felt like it's not worth the time.
After reading it, I felt like there was nothing new at all. Many of the plot points are inspired by other novels, which makes the novel lack personality.
First ever review. I’ll be doing some pros and cons for the series so let’s start. Pros If you like authors pov and I will kill the author then you’ll like this story. It is very similar yet different so you could differentiate between them. Also I like the power scaling or training. It isn’t one of those “I have unlimited potential now, I’ll train crazy hard and become stronger than original MC.” It’s at a pace where I don’t really think it’s unreasonable but not too slow. The mc is like Lucas from I will kill the author so if you like him than you’ll enjoy this mc. Cons I only see one major flaw. The grammar. Throughout the story you’ll see many grammatical Issues or typos however the author says they do this from their phone so I can’t be too harsh because it’s a bit harder to type on phone than keyboard. So overal in my opinion this is a good read if you can ignore spelling mistakes.
Shameless Author is here!After 65 chapters I'm finally going to review my novel. It's been a long journey for me guys. Anyway, I know that many people are dissatisfied with the old chapter. So I'm going to edit all of them, I can't edit all of them at the same time but I will edit one or two chapters a day.So please support Guys in this novel.And if you want you can send gifts to me, I mean I didn't receive any gifts from my dear viewers, so if you like you can send gifts.And if you have any questions you can ask me here. Of course, I'm not going to be spoiled anything. So, bye-bye for now.
The story have a lot of potential it's all depends of the author. The characters specialy the mc have funny personalitie. the original mc its kinda annoying (this is my point of view from personalitie) and how i imagen the mc Lucas