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This book is so good, the comedy is smooth without being forced, I highly recommend it 👍🏼
Es una buena novela Yuri. Ojalá se traduzcan más capítulos por aquí; en otra página ya van por el Volumen 9.
seems like this novel is finally having a proper translation not the ai translation abomination in novel updates. thanks a lot
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Moments of action and suspense are well-balanced with character development. The pacing of the story is well-handled, alternating between moments of intensity and calm. Unexpected turns and surprising revelations maintain reader excitement. The way the novel explores moral choices and their consequences adds thought-provoking depth to the story.
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The pacing of the plot can sometimes be slow, making the narrative less engaging. Certain passages of the novel are overly descriptive, slowing down the story's progression. Some dialogues may come across as artificial or forced, affecting the authenticity of character interactions. Elements of the game world may seem overly complex for readers unfamiliar with video
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Transitions between different story arcs could be smoother to avoid confusion. Certain secondary characters could benefit from more in-depth development to make their actions more understandable. Twists in the plot can sometimes be predictable, diminishing the element of surprise.
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Gripping from the very first pages, the novel offers a complex and mysterious plot that piques curiosity. Detailed descriptions of the fantastical world create an immersive and captivating atmosphere. Well-developed interactions between characters provide engaging dialogues and compelling relationships.
Elements of traditional Chinese culture may not be familiar to all readers, potentially making some references less accessible.Battle scenes could be better balanced with character development to avoid an overload of action.
I hope readers will be captivated by the mysteries, relationships, and challenges that Bai Lian faces while following with interest her journey within the Duxian Sect and beyond.
This book is so good, the comedy is smooth without being forced, I highly recommend it 👍🏼
Es una buena novela Yuri. Ojalá se traduzcan más capítulos por aquí; en otra página ya van por el Volumen 9.
seems like this novel is finally having a proper translation not the ai translation abomination in novel updates. thanks a lot
Gripping from the very first pages, the novel offers a complex and mysterious plot that piques curiosity.[img=mise à jour][img=mise à jour][img=mise à jour]
Awesome book, keep it up. The story is unique and the the writing quality is rly good[img=recommander][img=recommander][img=recommander][img=recommander]
Moments of action and suspense are well-balanced with character development. The pacing of the story is well-handled, alternating between moments of intensity and calm. Unexpected turns and surprising revelations maintain reader excitement. The way the novel explores moral choices and their consequences adds thought-provoking depth to the story.
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The pacing of the plot can sometimes be slow, making the narrative less engaging. Certain passages of the novel are overly descriptive, slowing down the story's progression. Some dialogues may come across as artificial or forced, affecting the authenticity of character interactions. Elements of the game world may seem overly complex for readers unfamiliar with video
ネタバレを明かす Transitions between different story arcs could be smoother to avoid confusion. Certain secondary characters could benefit from more in-depth development to make their actions more understandable. Twists in the plot can sometimes be predictable, diminishing the element of surprise.
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ネタバレを明かす Gripping from the very first pages, the novel offers a complex and mysterious plot that piques curiosity. Detailed descriptions of the fantastical world create an immersive and captivating atmosphere. Well-developed interactions between characters provide engaging dialogues and compelling relationships.
Elements of traditional Chinese culture may not be familiar to all readers, potentially making some references less accessible.Battle scenes could be better balanced with character development to avoid an overload of action.
I hope readers will be captivated by the mysteries, relationships, and challenges that Bai Lian faces while following with interest her journey within the Duxian Sect and beyond.