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Writing quality 3.5. Story development 2. Character design 2. Updating 2.5. World background ( knowledge) 2. I don’t understand why would a civilian child ( Sasori) be in the battlefield. and he should be train by his parents and grandmother.
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its machine translation. It feels like your getting migraines each chapter because of the translation.
კარგია ===============================================================================================================================================
Ele usa energia para manipular linhas? Shimotsuki KoushirouShimotsuki KoushirouShimotsuki KoushirouShimotsuki Koushirou Shimotsuki Shimotsuki Koushirou Shimotsuki Koushirou
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Writing quality 3.5. Story development 2. Character design 2. Updating 2.5. World background ( knowledge) 2. I don’t understand why would a civilian child ( Sasori) be in the battlefield. and he should be train by his parents and grandmother.
ネタバレを明かす its machine translation. It feels like your getting migraines each chapter because of the translation.
კარგია ===============================================================================================================================================
Ele usa energia para manipular linhas? Shimotsuki KoushirouShimotsuki KoushirouShimotsuki KoushirouShimotsuki Koushirou Shimotsuki Shimotsuki Koushirou Shimotsuki Koushirou
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