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It's a quite great One Piece fanfiction!! I like it!!! 👍👍 It have a interesting stotyline/plot, but the translation/english is quite bad.. The Chinese name (MC/Guo Yang, MC kingdom/Luo gang, Boss Bai, etc) is make this story confusing, you should translate it better author san.. Ohh the grammar is quite bad too (sometime it say he instead of she for Boss Bai, etc).. I really like this kind of story (kingdom building, then there's a list system to show how the kingdom grow).. It can be a really really great story if you do the translate good author san, I hope you can do better next.. Can't wait to see next chapter author san.. Keep up the good work 😁👍😍😍
Haven't read the novel, but just with the synopsis, it looks like the novel is Chinese propaganda, especially how they mention the East Blue Kingdom is the best, has everything and nothing is wrong with the kingdom. Literally something that is always seen in Chinese urban novels, where the plot praises China to death like dogs. For that, the novel already gives a bad impression.
I am liking this very mych. But please update it a little bit more quickly 🙂
can anyone tell me the source of this fanfict? or this is original crate by author?
So far, it has been a very interesting story, and thank you so much for updating new chapters 🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳 keep up the awesome job
Interesting concept, but the story is just filled with useless chatter and unnecessary words more than half the time..
Melhor do que esperava e nenhum desenvolvimento inesperado além de cavar o passado em forma de tesouro, enquanto descobre o quanto o Reino se esconde e como ele se desenvolveu ou como as reações de todos se desenrola á ações passadas ou futuras do rei Gao Yang. E bom até agora, mas fica em branco como ele conheceu duas heroínas ou quando ele invocou personagens de outras obras.
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Some naming errors but awesome really love this fanfic.... Can't wait for the next chapter already one of my favorite fanfics to read [img=update][img=update][img=update]
This story really deserves 5 stars, I recommend reading it, building an empire and happiness of the citizens (personally I think that the last is the best of these novels/fanfics)
Un increíble fan fic de construcción de reino de one piece, tanto el desarrollo de los personajes como de la historia es entretenido, pero puedes pasar el link original
I say that tbis story is average. It had an interesting conceot at first but then things just felt really weird. Its not a kingdom building story or a hidden kingdom finally opening itself to the world but just a random showcase of the strength of the Dragon Kingdom. It would have been fine but what makes it worse is the whole broadcast system thing which just feels all around badly used. The system was just their broadcasting but then it had a voting system and all that. It just feels disconnected overall. Which that it was just either the kingdom building or finally opening to the world kind of story.Tgeir was a similar story with a kingdom building thing but that story was also not used well with just how not random the system was and making the kingdom strong fast without any form of reasonable excuse.
Thanks for the novel and continúe with it. . . . . . . . . . . . . . ...... .. ... . .................. ... ........... ......... ................................ . . ................................ .
Love the novel so far, also is this a original novel or translation of a novel if it is can I get the name and or link to the original untranslated. Thanks and keep up the good work.
i really like this fanfiction. it reminds me of the fanfiction with the golden list and rifan that was also a very good fanfiction. i hope that this one won't be abandoned i wanna see how the WG shoots itself in it's own foot XD
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The moment I saw dragon I knew it was another Chinese authors😂 who are racist asf
Da para passar o tempo................. Da para passar o tempo................. Da para passar o tempo................. Da para passar o tempo.................
It's a quite great One Piece fanfiction!! I like it!!! 👍👍 It have a interesting stotyline/plot, but the translation/english is quite bad.. The Chinese name (MC/Guo Yang, MC kingdom/Luo gang, Boss Bai, etc) is make this story confusing, you should translate it better author san.. Ohh the grammar is quite bad too (sometime it say he instead of she for Boss Bai, etc).. I really like this kind of story (kingdom building, then there's a list system to show how the kingdom grow).. It can be a really really great story if you do the translate good author san, I hope you can do better next.. Can't wait to see next chapter author san.. Keep up the good work 😁👍😍😍
Haven't read the novel, but just with the synopsis, it looks like the novel is Chinese propaganda, especially how they mention the East Blue Kingdom is the best, has everything and nothing is wrong with the kingdom. Literally something that is always seen in Chinese urban novels, where the plot praises China to death like dogs. For that, the novel already gives a bad impression.
I am liking this very mych. But please update it a little bit more quickly 🙂
can anyone tell me the source of this fanfict? or this is original crate by author?
So far, it has been a very interesting story, and thank you so much for updating new chapters 🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳 keep up the awesome job
Interesting concept, but the story is just filled with useless chatter and unnecessary words more than half the time..
Melhor do que esperava e nenhum desenvolvimento inesperado além de cavar o passado em forma de tesouro, enquanto descobre o quanto o Reino se esconde e como ele se desenvolveu ou como as reações de todos se desenrola á ações passadas ou futuras do rei Gao Yang. E bom até agora, mas fica em branco como ele conheceu duas heroínas ou quando ele invocou personagens de outras obras.
🎓🎓🎓🎓🎓🎓🎓🎓🎓🎓🎓🎓🎓🎓🎓🎓🎓🎓🎓🎓🎓🎓🎓🎓🎓🎓🎓🎓🎓🎓🎓🎓🎓🎓🎓🎓🎓🎓🎓🎓🎓🎓🎓🎓🎓🎓🎓🎓🎓🎓🎓🎓🎓🎓🎓🎓🎓🎓🎓🎓🎓🎓🎓🎓🎓🎓💻📓📓📓📓📓📓📓📓📓📓📓📓📓📓📓📓📓📓📓📓📓📓📓📓📓📓📓📓📓📓📓📓📓📓📓📓📓📓📓📓📓📓📓📓📓📓📓📓📓📓📓📓📓📓📓📓📓📓📓
Some naming errors but awesome really love this fanfic.... Can't wait for the next chapter already one of my favorite fanfics to read [img=update][img=update][img=update]
This story really deserves 5 stars, I recommend reading it, building an empire and happiness of the citizens (personally I think that the last is the best of these novels/fanfics)
Un increíble fan fic de construcción de reino de one piece, tanto el desarrollo de los personajes como de la historia es entretenido, pero puedes pasar el link original
I say that tbis story is average. It had an interesting conceot at first but then things just felt really weird. Its not a kingdom building story or a hidden kingdom finally opening itself to the world but just a random showcase of the strength of the Dragon Kingdom. It would have been fine but what makes it worse is the whole broadcast system thing which just feels all around badly used. The system was just their broadcasting but then it had a voting system and all that. It just feels disconnected overall. Which that it was just either the kingdom building or finally opening to the world kind of story.Tgeir was a similar story with a kingdom building thing but that story was also not used well with just how not random the system was and making the kingdom strong fast without any form of reasonable excuse.
Thanks for the novel and continúe with it. . . . . . . . . . . . . . ...... .. ... . .................. ... ........... ......... ................................ . . ................................ .
Love the novel so far, also is this a original novel or translation of a novel if it is can I get the name and or link to the original untranslated. Thanks and keep up the good work.
i really like this fanfiction. it reminds me of the fanfiction with the golden list and rifan that was also a very good fanfiction. i hope that this one won't be abandoned i wanna see how the WG shoots itself in it's own foot XD
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The moment I saw dragon I knew it was another Chinese authors😂 who are racist asf