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...It's a great story...but...the swinging needs to be like this "When he swings the suit or the web-shooters need to eliminate the pressure from moving that fast will rip their arms off. It's because you can zipline from place to place but a webline is directed by your hand and thus not stable and so the pressure increases tremendously.
A very, very original idea, other fanfictions turn their spider-men into gods in 10 chapters maximum, but here it’s the other way around, an ordinary person is trying to achieve an ideal without having his powers. Wow. I know that I’m writing chaotically, but I’m just so impressed by the idea and my emotions are overflowing and tell me that 2 months without updates for such work is a crime. This is why I give the Stability of Updates 1/5 stars!
...It's a great story...but...the swinging needs to be like this "When he swings the suit or the web-shooters need to eliminate the pressure from moving that fast will rip their arms off. It's because you can zipline from place to place but a webline is directed by your hand and thus not stable and so the pressure increases tremendously.
A very, very original idea, other fanfictions turn their spider-men into gods in 10 chapters maximum, but here it’s the other way around, an ordinary person is trying to achieve an ideal without having his powers. Wow. I know that I’m writing chaotically, but I’m just so impressed by the idea and my emotions are overflowing and tell me that 2 months without updates for such work is a crime. This is why I give the Stability of Updates 1/5 stars!