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My favorite author I have been following, great work with well constructed paragraph truly awesome.10/10
when a young begger comes to beg at a wealthy home a young girl his age appears and he falls in love, even as her family guards beat him and calls him a dog. he is a member of the beggers guild and a kindly begger is his grandfather. this kindly begger hands him half a tattered martial arts manual and he advances to the first layer. The large martial arts family the Ling is recruiting Branch family members, the girl while,wealthy wishes to become a martial artist and joins as well. He is accepted and since he is already at the first layer, shines in the accessment and the girl notices him. However, the tattered manual incomplete so he switches over to the basic martial manual offered, however without herbs and pills he is unable to cultivate , and is soon despised, even the girl advanced to the second layer, bulljed by the main family, he was told to leave. The Kindly begger grandfather, handed over the second half explaining that there is a warning be prepared to die if you fail cultivating this second half.
My favorite author I have been following, great work with well constructed paragraph truly awesome.10/10
when a young begger comes to beg at a wealthy home a young girl his age appears and he falls in love, even as her family guards beat him and calls him a dog. he is a member of the beggers guild and a kindly begger is his grandfather. this kindly begger hands him half a tattered martial arts manual and he advances to the first layer. The large martial arts family the Ling is recruiting Branch family members, the girl while,wealthy wishes to become a martial artist and joins as well. He is accepted and since he is already at the first layer, shines in the accessment and the girl notices him. However, the tattered manual incomplete so he switches over to the basic martial manual offered, however without herbs and pills he is unable to cultivate , and is soon despised, even the girl advanced to the second layer, bulljed by the main family, he was told to leave. The Kindly begger grandfather, handed over the second half explaining that there is a warning be prepared to die if you fail cultivating this second half.