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I just realized I’ve been reading a harem🤢 I find this story so interesting but I can’t do harems
A nearly top notch story, from world background to story development (though it's slow-paced), with an interesting MC who's AU, he's strong, cunning, anti-corruption (3rd Hokage and his companions), concerning update, we're getting a chapter nearly every 2 days after the long hiatus (4 to 5 months), and finally, even though there's a harem tag, after 80 chapters we got only 1 lover (and that's my main complaint, either make no-harem tag or add others after 1 year of posting the 1st chapter).
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Except for slow updates, I love the story. Especially recommended to people who love sassy and going against the norm MC type. Good going author.
overall good but the good part seems over since he's already more than 20 when the story started
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шикарно написано, хотелось бы больше глав... очень хотелось бы, да и больше про способности героя расписать, а то пока не понятно, так что жду главы....
******************************** Good work! ****************************************** ***************************** And i need more! ***************************************
Is it an original work ? If yes, please post more chapters, I like your work very much. Author , Author the relationship between the characters is very interesting.
Ok, this is decent overall. But the summary is just irritating. It might just be a pet peeve, but describing your own self insert as 'enigmatic' is just rage inducing. Just describe the general vibe of the story and leave it there, these descriptions usually forewarn of authors who tend to use flowery descriptions for no reason to patter out the lack of substance, which while not necessarily the case here, is something that might ward off veteran readers.
Chapter 14 I would say it's decent but feels awkward to read at times. You need to push through the first five chapters before the awkwardness slowly starts to subside and the plot actually starts. The grammar, the plots and the characters are okay and I wouldn't call this novel godlike, I will describe his writing as a high level amateur; it's rough around the edges but readable and understandable. if you ever want a mix up you could try this. Synopsis: kakashi's father had a younger brother by 6 years.
Best Konoha elder bashing fic. MC is a chad, doesn't fear anyone, a true will-of-fire follower who will burn Konoha elders for himself. a must read
This is quite refreshing as although he seems overpowered but remember he already in his thirties so it’s very logical! I love it!
Fanfic yg bagus,tapi semoga ini tersedia untuk pembaca gratis. ............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
This is quite refreshing as although he seems overpowered but remember he already in his thirties or late twenties so it’s very logical! I love it!
The MC is Sakumo's little brother and Tsunade ex boyfriend. This is the first time I see that. Keep up the good work.
the story is interesting and has great potential, although the main character at first seems like a salty fish. ..............................................
Honestly its a great novel/FF, the writing is good, the story is interesting, a new view point and honestly the MC likes the Legendary 106 Sannin Tsunade-sama so what's not to like. now i only wish for 18+ content and my little bookworm heart would truly feel fulfilled. Though more chapters would also do wonders lol.
honestly it's a very entertaining fic and one of the best Naruto fics on here in my opinion
I just realized I’ve been reading a harem🤢 I find this story so interesting but I can’t do harems
A nearly top notch story, from world background to story development (though it's slow-paced), with an interesting MC who's AU, he's strong, cunning, anti-corruption (3rd Hokage and his companions), concerning update, we're getting a chapter nearly every 2 days after the long hiatus (4 to 5 months), and finally, even though there's a harem tag, after 80 chapters we got only 1 lover (and that's my main complaint, either make no-harem tag or add others after 1 year of posting the 1st chapter).
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Except for slow updates, I love the story. Especially recommended to people who love sassy and going against the norm MC type. Good going author.
overall good but the good part seems over since he's already more than 20 when the story started
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шикарно написано, хотелось бы больше глав... очень хотелось бы, да и больше про способности героя расписать, а то пока не понятно, так что жду главы....
******************************** Good work! ****************************************** ***************************** And i need more! ***************************************
Is it an original work ? If yes, please post more chapters, I like your work very much. Author , Author the relationship between the characters is very interesting.
Ok, this is decent overall. But the summary is just irritating. It might just be a pet peeve, but describing your own self insert as 'enigmatic' is just rage inducing. Just describe the general vibe of the story and leave it there, these descriptions usually forewarn of authors who tend to use flowery descriptions for no reason to patter out the lack of substance, which while not necessarily the case here, is something that might ward off veteran readers.
Chapter 14 I would say it's decent but feels awkward to read at times. You need to push through the first five chapters before the awkwardness slowly starts to subside and the plot actually starts. The grammar, the plots and the characters are okay and I wouldn't call this novel godlike, I will describe his writing as a high level amateur; it's rough around the edges but readable and understandable. if you ever want a mix up you could try this. Synopsis: kakashi's father had a younger brother by 6 years.
Best Konoha elder bashing fic. MC is a chad, doesn't fear anyone, a true will-of-fire follower who will burn Konoha elders for himself. a must read
This is quite refreshing as although he seems overpowered but remember he already in his thirties so it’s very logical! I love it!
Fanfic yg bagus,tapi semoga ini tersedia untuk pembaca gratis. ............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
This is quite refreshing as although he seems overpowered but remember he already in his thirties or late twenties so it’s very logical! I love it!
The MC is Sakumo's little brother and Tsunade ex boyfriend. This is the first time I see that. Keep up the good work.
the story is interesting and has great potential, although the main character at first seems like a salty fish. ..............................................
Honestly its a great novel/FF, the writing is good, the story is interesting, a new view point and honestly the MC likes the Legendary 106 Sannin Tsunade-sama so what's not to like. now i only wish for 18+ content and my little bookworm heart would truly feel fulfilled. Though more chapters would also do wonders lol.
honestly it's a very entertaining fic and one of the best Naruto fics on here in my opinion