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レビューを書くMe gusta bastante espero que pueda seguir con la actualización de los capítulos y me gusta bastante el ambiente del mundo y todo el tema de los dioses me parecía interesante que ubiese un dios de los sueños ya que existe uno de la noche y todo el tema solo un poco de mi y eso es todo y gracias por la novela
ネタバレを明かすThe story is very good, but the characters or races are not very well raised, an example are the dwarves, they are fantastic and very incredible beings, their life expectancy in the book of races and fantastic creatures is 350 to 450 years and in this book is only 70, and also the elves, you had just created them and then accelerated the world about 100 years and it is already dying, then I estimate that the life expectancy of an elf is 100 to 150 years, a complete trash for what is known as elves since they live hundreds of years, it is even thought that they are immortal.
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I love this story. The novel has great potential. The author does a very good job. The only problem for me is the fear that this story will be abandoned. Let's hope that the author will manage to conclude his novel.
Me gusta bastante espero que pueda seguir con la actualización de los capítulos y me gusta bastante el ambiente del mundo y todo el tema de los dioses me parecía interesante que ubiese un dios de los sueños ya que existe uno de la noche y todo el tema solo un poco de mi y eso es todo y gracias por la novela
ネタバレを明かすThe story is very good, but the characters or races are not very well raised, an example are the dwarves, they are fantastic and very incredible beings, their life expectancy in the book of races and fantastic creatures is 350 to 450 years and in this book is only 70, and also the elves, you had just created them and then accelerated the world about 100 years and it is already dying, then I estimate that the life expectancy of an elf is 100 to 150 years, a complete trash for what is known as elves since they live hundreds of years, it is even thought that they are immortal.
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I love this story. The novel has great potential. The author does a very good job. The only problem for me is the fear that this story will be abandoned. Let's hope that the author will manage to conclude his novel.