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this the definition of words too many long, and big words I have smol brain 20000 words per chapter and mostly big words so lore so .much more and po-
Yes, this novel is good and fun to read. However, it is as clear as the sky that the author did not write this novel with his own imagination instead he used ChatGPT, an AI tool, to write this novel.In fact, anyone could do the same by using an AI tool, however, it completely erases the essence a novel should have. The lengthiest explanation for every little detail, repeated word use such as "stark contrast to", "very fiber of space, her own being, reality, etc", and appearance of many such words and sentences are proof that the author used AI to write the novel. And exactly this caused the lack of "conversation" between characters in this novel. This novel, though fun to read, soon becomes a boredom where it becomes difficult to continue reading.In fact, it is alright if the author is using the AI, at least proofread it one or two times and add more conversations as well as occurrence of events, remove unnecessary explanations that filled the chapters, and give more screentime to the Protagonist instead of side characters and their story.
Being a huge fan of Black tech Internet Cafe, I hope this one is just as good.[img=update] .................................................
I added this because I like stories of shops in weird places or production jobs instead of stories of constant combat. And this doesn’t deliveron that premise, sure there is an Internet cafe but it doesn’t matter as the MC is constantly away from it. For example, the cafe is barely open only has like 2 customers and already upgraded once and received a quest to make a branch business. It was disappointing, I was hoping for a store story and got yet any story where the title doesn’t match the content.
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Being a huge fan of Black tech Internet Cafe, I hope this one is just as good. [img=proud]
The novel is good itself. However, what truly lowers the score of the novel is the endless explications, endless descriptions and that the MC doesn’t seem to be the MC….
Too many unnecessary words, to describe a moment the author takes 2 to 3 paragraphs! It is not possible!
My other review disappeared on me while I was writing it so this will be a shorter review. So far it’s a good novel, a bit similar concept as those other cafe or shop in another world novels, but it’s done quite well. Especially giving the system an actual origin / creator. One critique however, is that the author later in the story seems to be using many larger words quite unecesarily. It kind of ruins the flow of reading for me when almsot every, or every other sentence uses larger words where they aren’t needed. This wasn’t too present (from what I recall at least) earlier in the story, but has become more and more apparent as I read. Bigger words are fine if they are necessary to convey, or write something. But when it isn’t needed, it just feels like too much
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Amazing!! Good job author i like the character's interaction and the mc's mysterious background(Only for the customers) also will it be a solo romance or a harem? Its okay if neither just continue and dont drop this.
hope you come back soon 😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
this the definition of words too many long, and big words I have smol brain 20000 words per chapter and mostly big words so lore so .much more and po-
Yes, this novel is good and fun to read. However, it is as clear as the sky that the author did not write this novel with his own imagination instead he used ChatGPT, an AI tool, to write this novel.In fact, anyone could do the same by using an AI tool, however, it completely erases the essence a novel should have. The lengthiest explanation for every little detail, repeated word use such as "stark contrast to", "very fiber of space, her own being, reality, etc", and appearance of many such words and sentences are proof that the author used AI to write the novel. And exactly this caused the lack of "conversation" between characters in this novel. This novel, though fun to read, soon becomes a boredom where it becomes difficult to continue reading.In fact, it is alright if the author is using the AI, at least proofread it one or two times and add more conversations as well as occurrence of events, remove unnecessary explanations that filled the chapters, and give more screentime to the Protagonist instead of side characters and their story.
Being a huge fan of Black tech Internet Cafe, I hope this one is just as good.[img=update] .................................................
I added this because I like stories of shops in weird places or production jobs instead of stories of constant combat. And this doesn’t deliveron that premise, sure there is an Internet cafe but it doesn’t matter as the MC is constantly away from it. For example, the cafe is barely open only has like 2 customers and already upgraded once and received a quest to make a branch business. It was disappointing, I was hoping for a store story and got yet any story where the title doesn’t match the content.
ネタバレを明かす Being a huge fan of Black tech Internet Cafe, I hope this one is just as good. [img=proud]
The novel is good itself. However, what truly lowers the score of the novel is the endless explications, endless descriptions and that the MC doesn’t seem to be the MC….
Too many unnecessary words, to describe a moment the author takes 2 to 3 paragraphs! It is not possible!
My other review disappeared on me while I was writing it so this will be a shorter review. So far it’s a good novel, a bit similar concept as those other cafe or shop in another world novels, but it’s done quite well. Especially giving the system an actual origin / creator. One critique however, is that the author later in the story seems to be using many larger words quite unecesarily. It kind of ruins the flow of reading for me when almsot every, or every other sentence uses larger words where they aren’t needed. This wasn’t too present (from what I recall at least) earlier in the story, but has become more and more apparent as I read. Bigger words are fine if they are necessary to convey, or write something. But when it isn’t needed, it just feels like too much
ネタバレを明かす Amazing!! Good job author i like the character's interaction and the mc's mysterious background(Only for the customers) also will it be a solo romance or a harem? Its okay if neither just continue and dont drop this.
hope you come back soon 😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]