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章 9: The beautiful senior who came to class

"Then I will return to the kingdom and report to His Majesty about your hand-picked fiancé, Lala-sama."

"Yes Zastin! Be careful on the road and please convinced dad!"

Lala waved her hand at Zastin who had many bandages on his body. Behind him were Smutt and Maul who also had many bandages on their bodies.

After being defeated by Eiji in the duel, Zastin really kept his promise. Eiji who was standing beside Lala offered to treat their wounds first before leaving.

Being struck by his red lightning, could cause serious injuries. If it was a normal person, that person would definitely die. But with the Deviluke physique, fortunately they had a certain level of endurance after being hit by his red lightning.

They mostly fainted and only had a few injuries on their bodies that could still be treated with light treatment.

Seeing Zastin who boarded the spaceship with Maul and Smutt and had completely left.

Looking at the small point of light in the increasingly distant night sky, Eiji wondered if he was forgetting something?

"Eiji~ from now on I will live with you!"

Lala who had been standing beside him, hugged his hand and smiled happily.

Eiji also smiled and nodded. "Of course, you're my fiance. You can stay with me as long as you want."

"Ehehehe~ Really?"

"Of course..."

Who can resist a beautiful fiancée who wants to live with you?

Eiji was not one of those people.

[But seriously, I feel like I've forgotten something.]

[It's just that what...]

Lala tilted her head, she didn't know what Eiji had forgotten.

Feeling bored standing outside, even though she did not feel chilled by the night wind due to her Deviluke physique.

She would rather spend time with Eiji inside the house.

"Nee nee Eiji, can we go back inside the house now?"

Eiji turned his head, looked at Lala who was still wearing his loose shirt and slapped his own forehead.

It was still night.

The wind outside is quite cold.

Lala must be cold, right?

"I'm sorry, is Lala cold? Okay, let's go inside quickly. There are some empty rooms in my house, and I'll prepare one for you."

Without waiting for the other party's answer, Eiji immediately held and pulled the girl's soft hand.

"Eh, eh... I'm actually not..."

"Actually not?"

Eiji turned his head again with a questioning look at the pink-haired girl.

Lala was silent for a moment, but she shook her head with a smile.

"No, it's nothing! Hehe~ Eiji, let's go in quickly! It's a little cold outside!"

The blond boy nodded, and resumed walking while holding her hand.

He didn't notice the girl's little lie, and even forgot the other party also had a Deviluke physique that was basically not so vulnerable to the night wind.

Lala smiled so wide, she was excited, and felt sweet in her heart when she saw Eiji was so worried about her.

Although mom had said lying was bad, but somehow she wanted to lie that she felt cold before.

Eiji who walked back to his house, looked at his house and froze.

He stopped walking and Lala also naturally stopped.

Lala was confused and asked what was wrong?

Instead of answering with his mouth.

Eiji complained in his heart.

[This is what I forgot, right? Zastin and the other two have already left. I forgot to ask them to fix some of the holes in the walls of my house!]

[Although I can fix it myself with the power of money, but hey... Wouldn't it be faster to use alien technology? I think the Zastin who brought the space ship has something like that.]

[But now it's too late, those guys already left without cleaning up the mess they made in my house!]

Lala opened her mouth into an "O" shape, she looked at a part of the wall of Eiji's house that had a hole in it and pondered while holding her chin

"Ugh... It's fine, it's just that I'm thinking of asking people to repair the wall tomorrow."

"For now, let's just ignore it and rest."

Eiji said that and was about to pull Lala's soft hand again.

The problem of the wall of his house could be thought of later.

Now he's actually quite tired too.

I want to sleep.

A lot of plots happened in one day.

I don't know which crazy author made him work overtime.

Oh right, isn't that the dog author?

¶{Host, what are you thinking?}

'You won't understand Miss System.'

Miss System: "..."

I don't understand because you don't want to explain!

Little Loli somewhere pouted, inflating her cheeks in dissatisfaction.

Lala who had been pondering finally opened her mouth and said: "Eiji! Leave the matter of your house wall to me!"

"I can fix it for you!"

"Huh? Lala, can you? Have you ever worked as a construction worker before?"

Eiji suddenly remembered something.

No, this was actually what he had forgotten!

[Oh I almost forgot Lala is a genius scientist.]

[In the original work, she had a robot companion named Peke. That little robot has many uses and many items inside its body.]

[In many episodes of the anime, the little robot is the one who often cleans up the mess that Lala makes when the girl experiments with the items she makes.]

[Rito's house, I don't know how many times in the original work it was blown up by Lala, and repaired quickly.]

[And the one who repaired it was that little robot!]

[Wait! I almost forgot too! Shouldn't that little robot have appeared earlier?]

[She should have appeared before Maul and Smutt!]

[But where is that little robot now? Can someone tell me? Hey there's something wrong with the plot order!]

Lala's lips twitched.

She had no experience as a construction worker, but as expected of her time traveler fiancé.

Eiji knew she had a robot companion named Peke!

In the original work, Peke seemed to have done a lot of hard work for her.

Well to be honest now she was also wondering where Peke was?

Knowing she ran away from home, the little robot should have tried to find her trail and chase her to Earth.

But where is she now? Her idea to help with Eiji's house wall problem was actually related to Peke!

I just need a certain tool that I once made in that little robot's pocket to repair the wall of Eiji's house quickly.

That was the original idea.

But since Peke hasn't found it until now.

The pink-haired girl, Lala thought of another idea.

"Don't worry Eiji! Give me some time, I can make a sophisticated tool to repair the walls of your house in no time!"

Lala was very confident when she said that.

As a genius scientist, if the thing she needed was not in her hands and difficult to retrieve.

She just needs to recreate it.

Eiji knew Lala was indeed capable of doing what was said.

But what time is it?

He shook his head and said: "Let's think about the wall problem tomorrow."

"It's late now, let's just go to bed."

...

The next day.

There was no need to prolong the wall problem because Lala had actually made a sophisticated device that could repair the damage to the wall within an hour.

And that was this morning, which left Eiji amazed and surprised.

This heroine was really a genius scientist.

Thinking about this, I feel even luckier to have such that girl as a fiancée.

Luckily Lala somehow fell in his bathroom instead of the protagonist's bathroom.

It seems that some plots can also change, even without his intervention.

Although he didn't know why, being a person who didn't like to make a big deal out of things.

He naturally just wanted to enjoy his good fortune and work hard to accomplish the things in front of him.

For example right now, during the school lunch break. A girl with long black hair and glasses suddenly came to his class looking for him.

"Excuse me, is the student named Eiji Seiya here?"

Eiji naturally recognized the identity of the girl and got up from his seat.

"It's me. Senpai, do you need anything from me?"

The few students who were still in class 2A actually had various expressions at this time. From surprise, curiosity, and jealousy.

The boys in the class were jealous to see her being sought after by a beautiful third-year senior.

While the others, Yui for example was frowning.

She seemed unhappy for some reason.

As for the protagonist? Are you wondering where Rito is?

That boy didn't go to school today because he had a fever so he asked permission to take the day off.

Eiji smiled amusedly when he first heard this news from the homeroom teacher.

Of course, he believed Rito was really sick, or rather he might still be traumatized by what he saw in the genjutsu he created yesterday.

So there was no need to think about Rito's protagonist for now.

Fixing the position of her glasses, the girl who came for him said: "I'm from the student council. I came here to pick you up because our student council president invited you to her office."

Many students in the class were even more surprised, and started whispering to each other.

What's going on?

Why was Eiji-kun summoned by the student council president?

Did Eiji-kun do something bad to get summoned by the student council president?

And blah blah blah.

All sorts of whispers were heard in the classroom.

Yui even looked worried, as she happened to be sitting not far from him, and asked in a low voice.

"Eiji-kun, did you do something that made the student council president call you?"

Eiji who was about to leave his seat was silent for a moment.

He looked at Yui with his usual smile and said: "I didn't, you know yesterday I spent most of the time with you."

"Yui, how can you suspect a good student like me?"

Yui stuck out her tongue like a cat, feeling embarrassed by the other students who were staring at them for whispering.

Eiji shook his head, he walked past Yui and did not forget to whisper into her ear. "If I come to class late after the lunch break ends."

"Tell the teacher that I'm at the student council office, okay?"

Feeling the warm breath and masculine voice in her ear.

Yui blushed, she glared at Eiji, but nodded in response.

[How cute, Yui.]

You!

Yui's face was getting red, but she couldn't scold the blonde boy who was teasing her.

With the current atmosphere in the classroom, she was too embarrassed to say something at a loud volume to Eiji.

Besides, what she heard was his inner voice.

So it would look weird if she suddenly scolded Eiji for teasing her, right?

After all, from another person's point of view, Eiji only asked her to tell the teacher if he was late for class when he went to the student council office.

Ignoring Yui who looked embarrassed, Eiji continued walking to the girl who came to call him and stood right in front of him.

"Then come on Senpai. I'll follow you to the student council office."

The girl seemed to be a little dazed as she looked at him, but she soon returned to her cold image and nodded.

"Okay, follow me. Don't worry, you didn't do anything bad. The student council president just has something to talk to you about, Eiji-kun."

"Really? That's good..."

The two walked out of the classroom.

Eiji walked beside the girl and let her lead the way to the student council office for him.

"By the way, introductions. My name is Tsubaki Shinra, third year student."

While walking, Tsubaki also glanced at him with a faint smile.

That girl could be considered very beautiful.

Besides having long straight black hair and glasses that covered her heterochromic eyes that were colored violet and brown.

Her face and figure itself were above average. Her breasts reached D-cup, her waist was slender and her legs were also quite long like a model.

[As expected from one of the heroine in a fanservice-filled franchise like Highschool DxD.]

[Tsubaki Shinra is undoubtedly a very beautiful girl!]

[Those Heterochromic eyes look beautiful, I feel like looking at them up close, cough.]

[What a pity, a beautiful girl like this also has brain problems in the original work.]

[So just let it out. Better keep a polite distance from her.]

[I can't tease her like I tease Yui.]

"Oh... So your name is Tsubaki Shinra? Then I'll call you Shinra-senpai."

Eiji said that with an "oh" expression as if he just knew and just heard the girl's name for the first time.

Tsubaki's lips twitched.

His acting skills are really good.

If I hadn't heard his inner voice, I would have been fooled!

True to Kaichou's words, this guy would definitely pretend not to know her when they met; even though he knew a lot about her from the plot in the original work.

But hearing the other party praising her eyes and her figure in his heart, she was slightly embarrassed and pleased.

Although the other party also mocked her that he had brain problems in the original work.

Wait, I have a brain problem?

What's going on?

Am I no less stupid than Rias in the original work?

Although on the surface she looked calm while leading Eiji to the student council office.

In her mind, she was really curious about her own plot in the original work!

Tsubaki wanted to force Eiji to tell her, but her boss had warned her against exposing that she could hear his inner voice.

At least for now before they saw the situation first.

Although a little reluctant, she had to be patient and let Eiji come to the student council office first.

Eiji who was still walking beside Tsubaki, frowned and secretly glanced at the girl walking beside him suspiciously.

He wondered why this girl suddenly fell silent?

After introducing the name.

You stopped talking and continued walking in silence?

If that's all right.

But why do I feel like a sheep being herded into a tiger's den?

As a person who knew the original work, he certainly had some guesses as to why he was summoned to the student council office by Tsubaki.

I just hope the other party doesn't provoke me or something.

If not, don't blame me for hitting a woman.

---

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Should Eiji save Ai Hoshino who is about to be stabbed? Why does such a beautiful girl have to die in the original work woo woo woo~

章 10: Beautiful student council president invitation

In the student council room.

A blonde boy sat alone in front of a short black-haired girl.

There was also Tsubaki, another black-haired beauty who stood beside the girl in front of him like a secretary.

There were only the three of them in the quiet student council room with two steaming cups of hot tea...

The tea was made by Tsubaki, by the way.

"Nice tea, Shinra-senpai." said the blonde boy, Eiji who had just taken a small sip from the tea cup in front of him.

"Thank you. If Eiji-kun wants to refill your teacup, please just say so."

Tsubaki smiled slightly, although it didn't show on her face, she actually felt proud of her tea making skills.

I'm quite happy that this time traveler likes my tea.

Eiji looked at Tsubaki who secretly looked happy that he was praising her tea with a funny look.

[I wonder if Tsubaki already has a boyfriend? If not, maybe I can...]

"Cough, cough!" The girl sitting in front of him suddenly gave him with sharp look.

As for Tsubaki? She glanced the other way with a slight blush on her cheeks.

In her mind, she sneered.

Who was it not long ago that said he wanted to avoid me because I had brain problems in the original work?

Man, you are so inconsistent.

"...." Eiji.

[What's wrong with you two?]

"Student Eiji Seiya, right? Please don't stare too much at my secretary. You can do that later, but for now please focus on me."

The girl who said that was practically very beautiful.

With black hair cut in a short bob style and glasses covering her violet eyes.

Although her expression looks cold and serious, her beauty is above average and not inferior to Tsubaki.

[Another DxD heroine, although it is a pity that her figure is underdeveloped in the chest.]

"Huh? Why did the air conditioner in this room suddenly become so cold?"

Eiji subconsciously asked, although with his current power the cold temperature at this level would not trouble him.

But I still want to ask.

Maybe the air conditioner in the student council office suddenly broke down?

"Haha don't worry, the air conditioner in the student council office might be a little broken." The girl sitting in front of her said with laughter, but her eyes didn't look like they were laughing at all.

Her slightly dark expression like someone who had just been offended by someone.

The cold temperature in the room was caused by a bit of her magic leaking out.

Tsubaki pursed her lips, she glanced to the side while stifling a giggle.

Eiji-kun, you're very brave.

If it was anyone else, they would have been blacklisted by Kaichou for daring to comment on her breasts.

Eiji was confused, where did he know the girl in front of him suddenly felt...annoyed at him?

But I didn't say anything that could upset her, right?

Hey heroine this doesn't make sense.

Right?

The girls from that franchise have brain problems!

Yui in class and Lala waiting for me at home are still better than them.

"Well..." The short black-haired girl sighed. It seemed like she could quickly calm herself down, forget the past resentment and said: "I'll introduce myself first before we start talking."

"My name Sona Shitori, a third-year student and the student council president of this school."

"And beside me, although I know it seems like student Eiji has already gotten acquainted with Tsubaki. But I will mention that Tsubaki is my secretary in the student council."

"There are also other student council members, but they are in their respective classes."

[I know that. Your name is Sona Shitori? Not Sona Sitri? Hehe that's a pretty funny fake last name.]

[Student Council member? Everyone in the student council is a devil, just like the people in Rias' occult research club.]

[In this school, in the original work it was mentioned that Sona and Rias were the supervisors of Kuoh city and they basically made the school their headquarters.]

[Most of the DxD heroines gather at this school. And it's really convenient for the protagonist who also goes to school here because he doesn't have to go far to woo the heroines.]

[Sona and Tsubaki, although it hasn't been mentioned that they are also part of the protagonist's harem.]

[Sona, I know this girl in the original work is also fascinated by protagonist.]

[And Tsubaki? If I'm not mistaken, she will fall in love with a blond gay who is in the Rias's group. Um... What was his name? I kind of forgot, but Tsubaki is definitely in love with that blond gay boy.]

[What made me laugh was that Tsubaki's love was unrequited because the blond gay liked protagonist! Ahahaha! Although it's not so obvious, but the blonde boy in the Rias group is indeed less interested in women].

[Only when with the protagonist, he somehow blushed which made my eyes hurt when watching the anime version.]

[I also remember, in the novel version if I'm not mistaken that gay blond boy somehow turned into a woman for a while and yes. He had a pretty romantic moment with the protagonist].

[Damn I don't want to remember this!]

"So Shitori-senpai? As you know. I'm a student who just transferred to this school yesterday."

Eiji smiled kindly, but he was confused as to why Sona and Tsubaki's expressions suddenly looked ugly?

Sona's expression became ugly because she heard Eiji's inner voice that revealed many things.

Putting aside her devil identity which she actually guessed that Eiji must already know as a time traveler.

I deliberately pretended to use a fake name during the previous introduction because I also didn't want to be known to be able to hear his inner voice.

The point is not to make Eiji suspect something is wrong.

But what's wrong with her who also seems to be involved with protagonist who is said to be very perverted?

After hearing Eiji's inner voice from yesterday, she had certainly investigated about all the protagonists in this school.

Including Issei Hyudou in the first year, he had also investigated the protagonist of another franchise named Yuuki Rito in the second year.

Due to knowing their identities, especially Issei.

She had investigated that Issei Hyudou was really a pervert, and one of the trio of perverts who were notorious for peeping into the girls' changing rooms at this school.

Knowing in the original work, she, Sona Sitri would be fascinated by such a man.

She felt very unhappy, even a little disgusted.

By the way she felt Tsubaki had a worse plot than her.

Glancing to the side, sure enough the girl also had an expression that was no less ugly than hers.

Right now, Tsubaki wanted to hit the head of the dog author who wrote the plot with his feet.

Why is another heroine involved with the protagonist, while I'm involved with the gay blonde boy in the Rias group?

Although the protagonist isn't better either, but I find the gay blond boy more disgusting!

Wait for the blonde boy in the Rias group?

Isn't that Yuuto Kiba? Although I know he looks uninterested in women and would rather improve his sword skills which I even secretly admire a little.

Maybe she does have a bit of a crush on Yuuto who is one year younger than her and has a handsome face that matches her aesthetics.

But in the original work, she got the green hat because Yuuto is actually a gay who likes protagonist?

Even when he suddenly became a woman, he had romantic moments with protagonist!?

There is no need to mention the details of how romantic it is.

But she in the original work sounds very pathetic.

Tsubaki was so upset, she immediately killed her little crush on Yuuto.

Forget Yuuto Kiba.

There are still many handsome men in this world.

For example Eiji-kun who was sitting in front of Sona.

Although both are blonde like Yuuto, Eiji is actually much more handsome.

Unlike Yuuto's figure that looks slim and rather feminine, Eiji looks athletic with muscles that are not too big and do not look small.

His figure was tall and had broad shoulders, even from her position. Tsubaki could see that Eiji's arms looked very strong, and it made her wonder what his figure looked like when he was not wearing clothes?

Tsubaki was a little embarrassed when she thought of this.

But isn't the other party also interested in her?

From his inner voice, Eiji wondered if she had a boyfriend or not.

Wouldn't that be enough?

"...." Eiji felt that the atmosphere in this room had become very strange.

Putting aside Sona who was still looking at him strangely, but what was wrong with Tsubaki's wolf gaze?

I feel Tsubaki suddenly became more interested in me.

Is it just a hallucination?

¶{.....}

In a certain room whose location is unknown.

Miss System was watching the drama with a smirk on her face.

She didn't forget to eat the popcorn and drink the strawberry flavored milk she had just ordered from Go Food & Drink Dimensional.

By the way I wonder when host checked his reward?

Should I remind him? Oh, never mind~

I'll tell him later when he gets home from school.

Sona pretended to cough. "Ahem!"

The atmosphere in the student council office returned to normal and Tsubaki stopped with her wolfish gaze.

Eiji shuddered a little with the latter, fortunately Sona had a high EQ to pretend to cough.

[Good job Sona!]

"???" Sona.

I'm honestly a little confused by this time traveler.

But whatever, it's kind of fun to suddenly be praised.

With a faint smile on her face, she put aside the matter of the protagonist and the brainless plot and said: "Eiji-kun, may I call you like that?"

"Sure, it's nice to have a pretty girl like Shitori-senpai call me by my first name."

"Oh, by the way Shinra-senpai too."

I don't know why, Eiji suddenly spoke so sweetly that the two girls were silent and secretly happy.

This man/time traveler is quite nice.

Sona and Tsubaki thought.

Sona perked up a little and said, "Thank you, by the way you must be curious why a student council president like me called you here, right?

[Not really.]

"Un, I'm very curious why the student council president called me." Eiji said from his mouth which was in stark contrast to his inner voice.

Sona rolled her eyes.

This man was very two-faced, but that was okay.

I understand everyone has their own secrets.

It's natural that you want to pretend.

And I will also pretend not to hear your inner voice.

"Actually, one of my purposes in inviting you here is to invite you to join the student council, Eiji-kun."

Eiji was about to open his mouth, it seemed like he wanted to refuse but Sona immediately raised her hand to interrupt.

"...."

Sona continued. "Don't rush to refuse."

"As I said earlier. Inviting you to the student council is only one of my goals, and my other goal is..."

[What's with the dramatic pause? Just say it and I'll refuse.]

Sona's lips twitched, she sighed.

A little unhappy that the other party was so eager to reject her before she finished her words.

Isn't it nice talking to a pretty girl like me?

There's also Tsubaki.

Aren't you happy to be in the same room with two pretty girls?

Even the protagonist you mentioned has never received an opportunity like this.

"I saw that Eiji-kun seemed reluctant to join the student council. Is that true?"

Eiji nodded. "Un, sorry Shitori-senpai. I'm really not interested in joining any club for now."

Sona was relieved to hear this, although it was a bit difficult. But it proved that she wasn't the only one who would be rejected if she wanted to invite Eiji to her student council club.

Rias, that red-haired girl would also at least have trouble inviting Eiji to join her club.

But if the conditions she offered were normal of course.

Sona was confident, she definitely needed to offer something that would make person like time travelers interested in joining her group.

"Too bad... Eiji-kun isn't interested in joining the club."

"But what about!"

Sona suddenly stood up, her violet eyes seemed to glow and the room suddenly became rather dark.

Oh wait, the room was dark because Tsubaki quickly closed the window and turned on the lights.

[Tsubaki... What are you doing? Is it necessary to close the window?]

Tsubaki pretended to cough, a little embarrassed, but she smiled with her heterochromic eyes that also shone slightly.

You guys play special effects to pretend to be cool?

Eiji looked at the two with a funny look.

Even so, he was also a little wary and adjusted his sitting position to make it somewhat easy to move at any time.

As if realizing his vigilance, Sona smiled and said: "Don't worry, we have no intention of hurting you or anything like that."

"We just want to reveal our true identity."

"Oh?" Eiji raised his eyebrows, he did not expect the other party to immediately want to tell him that she and her group were devils.

Although he already knew, he was pretending to be curious now.

Sona knew Eiji was only pretending to be curious, but it didn't matter because this was necessary so she could persuade him to join her group.

So with one breath, she revealed her devil wings.

Tsubaki also did the same.

Then Sona said: "You see the wings on our backs? Those are the wings that devils have."

"Actually we, or let's just say all the student council members in this school are devils."

"But not like the evil devils that are often told in fairy tales."

"Devils like us are actually not that evil. Other than our wings, most of our appearances are human-like."

"This is the original appearance of me and Tsubaki."

"Are you afraid of our original appearance, Eiji-kun?"

Eiji shook his head. "No, you guys look even sexier with that pair of black bat-like wings."

Sona and Tsubaki smiled slightly.

They were somewhat relieved that Eiji did not look scared or disgusted when he saw their wings.

As expected of a time traveler.

He must be used to seeing supernatural creatures, right?

"So now what? I now know the student council is the headquarters of the devil in this school."

"What is the real purpose of you inviting me here? Don't tell me you want to eat me?"

Tsubaki giggled. "Of course not, Eiji-kun. Devils like us don't eat human flesh."

"Actually, we also eat and drink like humans."

"It's just that we are supernatural beings that have more power than humans.

Sona nodded. "What Tsubaki said is true."

"Actually the reason why I invited you here is to invite you to join my peerage or let's call it my group."

She explained the details of the peerage and the chess piece that could make humans into devils to Eiji before continuing.

"Just like Tsubaki used to be human before reincarnating into a devil using my Queen's pieces."

"Eiji-kun, you seem to have a hidden power which is most likely Sacred Gear."

"You might be wondering what Sacred Gear is? Let me explain, Sacred Gear is..."

Before Sona explained more.

Eiji was too lazy to hear anymore knowledge that he basically already knew from the original work and said: "You mean this thing?"

Sona who was interrupted by Eiji froze.

Tsubaki was the same.

Not because they were angry or anything like that, but they were surprised by the object that suddenly appeared in Eiji's hand.

At the moment it appeared in Eiji's hand, the student council office was immediately illuminated by golden light!

---

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