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Author can you satisfy my dream that I was never seen in a novel MAKE BAKUGO DISMISSED indeed he terrified midoriya during their youth, and during UA he spends his time ridiculing people and insulting them, in short not a behavior at all of heroes, even the villains wanted to recruit him these saying. I am surprised that no author has already done so.
Writing Quality: 4 (4 Because its readable, and just a few mistakes) Story Development: 4 ( cant't say much about story development since there's only 11 chapters so far and mo fighting scenes aswell)Character Design: 5 (honestly, i just feel like its the right one cant't put my finger into it but hope its actually correct)Updating Stability: 3 (I dont't know if the author writes for fun when he's only bored but yeah, atleast not mass releasing with bad quality)World background: 4 (only the mha world so far and nothing mentioned about his old world)
Personnellement c'est 4 étoiles parce que ça fait 8 jour et le chapitre 12 n'est toujours pas sortie 😭. Mais aussi non j'ai bien bien que pour certaines personnes le personnage est très "humain" car il a ressenti de la tristesse ou dépression (désolé, je suis nul avec les sentiments) à cause de la pression de savoir l'avenir sans que aucun enfant ou autre soi mort(sérieux, un de mais ami ses plaint parce que le mc à pleurée à cause du tros grand stress, causé par la réincarnation !) Mais aussi non je recommande
send more chaps bubalso make the character less edgy he is an adult or has the memories of two teens so tone the dud ii sk a bit, tho altogether promising read
So far, so good. Keep going, Author.......................................................................................................................
So far so good(chapter7). The grammar is good, there are some typos here and there, but it's tolerable. Can't say anything about the story development cause it's still chapter seven, but I like the development so far. That's all for now.
Until (8) the very smooth and entertaining series, I look forward to seeing how the MC handles the stress of forced reincarnation and not being the same with Toshinori and Inko around
ok i'm following this. I think it's a bit bad to replace izuku. izuku is a young man who acts according to his age, who is constantly crushed by his friends, trying to socialize and realize his dream. His story was completely destroyed when mc took his place. but still a very good series. He took the place of izuku and started acting like a mature, intelligent person. We understand that his personality has changed tremendously in the first 8 episodes, and his mother also understands. I hope you don't act like the characters don't notice this.
Very nice. Made me read all the chapters (4😁) without any other thoughts. Keep going.
The author did a good job with the premise of this story. But Midoriya is just too out of character. If he was just going to act all edgy, the author should've just made an OC at that point. Who in their right mind, especially a "mature man" undresses and changes in front of strangers on the first day of school? Yeah, he might be influenced by Kakashi or something but Kakashi does not act that way as well. Overall, I'm out of here so read this ff if ya'll can stomach cringe and edgy mc.
ネタバレを明かす Author can you satisfy my dream that I was never seen in a novel MAKE BAKUGO DISMISSED indeed he terrified midoriya during their youth, and during UA he spends his time ridiculing people and insulting them, in short not a behavior at all of heroes, even the villains wanted to recruit him these saying. I am surprised that no author has already done so.
Writing Quality: 4 (4 Because its readable, and just a few mistakes) Story Development: 4 ( cant't say much about story development since there's only 11 chapters so far and mo fighting scenes aswell)Character Design: 5 (honestly, i just feel like its the right one cant't put my finger into it but hope its actually correct)Updating Stability: 3 (I dont't know if the author writes for fun when he's only bored but yeah, atleast not mass releasing with bad quality)World background: 4 (only the mha world so far and nothing mentioned about his old world)
Personnellement c'est 4 étoiles parce que ça fait 8 jour et le chapitre 12 n'est toujours pas sortie 😭. Mais aussi non j'ai bien bien que pour certaines personnes le personnage est très "humain" car il a ressenti de la tristesse ou dépression (désolé, je suis nul avec les sentiments) à cause de la pression de savoir l'avenir sans que aucun enfant ou autre soi mort(sérieux, un de mais ami ses plaint parce que le mc à pleurée à cause du tros grand stress, causé par la réincarnation !) Mais aussi non je recommande
send more chaps bubalso make the character less edgy he is an adult or has the memories of two teens so tone the dud ii sk a bit, tho altogether promising read
So far, so good. Keep going, Author.......................................................................................................................
So far so good(chapter7). The grammar is good, there are some typos here and there, but it's tolerable. Can't say anything about the story development cause it's still chapter seven, but I like the development so far. That's all for now.
Until (8) the very smooth and entertaining series, I look forward to seeing how the MC handles the stress of forced reincarnation and not being the same with Toshinori and Inko around
ok i'm following this. I think it's a bit bad to replace izuku. izuku is a young man who acts according to his age, who is constantly crushed by his friends, trying to socialize and realize his dream. His story was completely destroyed when mc took his place. but still a very good series. He took the place of izuku and started acting like a mature, intelligent person. We understand that his personality has changed tremendously in the first 8 episodes, and his mother also understands. I hope you don't act like the characters don't notice this.
Very nice. Made me read all the chapters (4😁) without any other thoughts. Keep going.
The author did a good job with the premise of this story. But Midoriya is just too out of character. If he was just going to act all edgy, the author should've just made an OC at that point. Who in their right mind, especially a "mature man" undresses and changes in front of strangers on the first day of school? Yeah, he might be influenced by Kakashi or something but Kakashi does not act that way as well. Overall, I'm out of here so read this ff if ya'll can stomach cringe and edgy mc.
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