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If people read past the cheating part, they will find an amazing story. So people grow up and just read
muy buena historia, me encanto, lo leí todo en un estado de frenesí lectoral..... buena historia, sigue así hermano, tu historia de demon slayer también esta entretenida. por cierto, léete el manga de komisan
one best story have i ever read I don't have words to describe it annnnnnnd WHERE ARE . YOU . ATHUER
4/2/4/3/5. Novel died and I'm quite happy it did. Let me explain; The start of the story begins with MC finding out hes in a ntr doujin, with his girlfriend being the star girl. Problem is that he has grown up with her, theyre not only childhood friends but legitimately love each other. What does the MC do? Does he instantly break up with her? No, he gets proof of the situation and finds out what kind of person she actually is. He busts into the hotel room and absolutely demolished the guy and broke up with her right there. Cool, nice, fantastic even. Bro proved to her and himself that she isnt worth it and leaves, only to turn around and walk her back home(disappointing but whatever.) Could have been handled better all around but obviously don't trust a hentai girl. Which she admits to him! Cool, glad we're on the same page. Now like others, I was disgusted but accepted it as character progression and moved on. Read quite happily till the furry girl was added in but continued on anyway till i hit whatever chapter is shown next to my review, 104? 5? whatever its irrelevant because at the time i got curious about something and decided to spoil myself with chapter titles. And then I checked the latest titles and thought 'no way this author is going to be so moronic as to bring back the thot, right?' Wrong.
I love it it’s hard to get me interested in anything but this I love it it’s so funny and great character
very good fanfiction, nothing's wrong with it and really fun to read the only downside that i see from the others is the ntr? from early chapters. but it's really not that heavy to read it but I think everyone just becomes a mindless reader when the ntr comes in 🤦🏻
Incredible, i didnt think there was a book that could mix genres such as slice of life, martial arts, harem, and so much more in this way, even more so in a fanfic, while the beginning may be extremely misleading, as long as you can understand that the characters aren't perfect, for this is not a wish fullfillment novel, and you read while comprehending, then you will love this book, straight up.
Perfect master piece 👌xdxdxdxxdxdxdxddxxdxdxdxxdxdxdxdxdxxxdxxdxxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxrxdxdxdxdxdxxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxxdxdxdxdxdxd
It seems that there is only one comment left to reach 4 stars... let me fix that. I hope this finally reaches its well-deserved 4 stars, although unfortunately it cannot reach 5 at least we can get 4.
Mano é raro encontrar boas histórias desse tipo você equilibrou perfeitamente romance ação e a conversa com autor sem dúvidas uma boa ideia seu livro é incrível espero que continue escrevendo não ligue para os comentários negativos só são pessoas com inveja 🤔🤔🤔👍😁😁😁😁👍👍👍👍
While not a 5 star is still very good. The stat was shakey with the “ntr” he just lost his girl she wasn’t taken he left her since she was a Thot, it also led to good character development from bother the mc and the chick. The worst part is the later chapters how something’s are listed as events instead of explained. I’m only commenting since I seen the author mock the ratings and after reading it these ratings aren’t fair at all
NO ES NTR. NO ES NTR.NO ES NTR. NO ES NTR.NO ES NTR. NO ES NTR.NO ES NTR. NO ES NTR.NO ES NTR. NO ES NTR.NO ES NTR. NO ES NTR.NO ES NTR. NO ES NTR.NO ES NTR. NO ES NTR.NO ES NTR. NO ES NTR.NO ES NTR. NO ES NTR.
Bro and sis, if you see this book, read it immediately, we guarantee that this is a MASTERPIECE BROOO, what's more, the author's delivery of the character development and also every emotional outpouring In every word so read and read this
The author respects you for this work of fanfiction, as for me it turned out to be a wonderful skating rink against the one against whoever understands will understand.
I take back my words, this is a masterpiece, author I love this work, keep it up, trust me everyone you will not regret reading this
You should definitely read this. Reading this was certainly the best decision I've made in recent times. The depth of the characters is captivating, and the author's genius in managing to convey the feelings that the MC is expressing in each sentence is surreal. Don't pay attention to these bots that talk about NTR; they certainly fell in chapter 8 and didn't follow the outcome of the story. Believe me, you can read without fear. ( I'm using a translator )
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ネタバレを明かす
yeah i don't like how mc easily have mostly every things ( it's kinda boring you know ) but i like the how the character development and thank gods that author doesn't put tons of non sense anime waifu in mc's face
Review of the First 50 Chapters (that nobody asked for, but I'm going to write it anyway and will change if necessary) I liked it. I like the protagonist, I like the author mentioned in the fanfic, although sometimes he comes off a bit silly, but not annoyingly so. I like the system he has, the combination of animes/mangas/manhwas he used to create the world and their interactions. Now, the controversial part: yes, there is NTR. I'm not going to lie, did it serve for character development? I think so. The character he used was quite disposable, Tsukimi Chifuyu from Seiso Kanojo Ochiru. It's a doujin and I'm sure everyone recognizes it, you filthy degenerates, don't fool yourselves. At some point, I wondered why he didn't stop her from going with the blonde guy. I've read some fanfics where they save her, where they prevent her from going with the blonde guy, and with this story, I realized something: it wouldn't serve any purpose. He watches over her and prevents them from going further, but he doesn't stop her, because what's the point of being with someone with so little conviction that decides to cheat on you over a photo of a kiss? Sooner or later, she would have cheated on you because that's who she is, and it's not the protagonist's fault; he's a normal person dating a girl who seemed to have good feelings but turned out she didn't. I think all those one-star negative reviews that just say "NTR, NTR, NTR" really affect the fanfic. I had known about this fanfic for a while, but those comments put me off immediately and only now did I give it a chance. The chapters where he confronts her are quite loaded with tension and emotion. I think he did well, and I would recommend giving it a chance.
trash.trash.trash.trash.trash.trash.trash.trash.trash.trash.trash.trash.trash.trash.trash.trash
O autor disse que não considerava ntr porque não tinha beijo nem sexo mas a namorada do MC literalmente bateu duas punhetas pro delinquente loiro enquanto era apalpada o dia inteiro por ele então autor vou usar um chingamento padrão brasileiro.. vai tomar no c# seu fod#do arrombado do car#lho
Its a good story althought i stopped reading for a while because i love reading op mc's and love the story by the way, and idk why people are sick and just dropping your book when its good and just because there is an ntr in this book doesn't mean its bad, like people who read those ntr manga and when they read this book they have that strange feeling it feels like they are the ones who get ntr'd why you ask because they don't understand that you the author of this story made that part to make the mc grow.
Man I'm here at Chapter 282 feeling bad for everyone who dropped at like <20 chapters because some of the lightest NTR I've ever seen. Too bad they couldn't stomach character development and interpersonal issues getting worked out without throwing a fit. For everyone else I suggest you follow through with this work if you are a fan of meta-level writing, strong to stronger MCs, great waifus, a ton of smut, believable character interactions, and actual progress in a story (could be a bit better here though but I'm not one to complain). Also, as hard as it may be to believe the MC has a system that does not hand hold him, everything he gains is from sheer hard work.
Hola autor la verdad este fanfic es fantástico y ver qué tiene tan bajas reseñas me sorprendió a lo que revise y fue por lo del ntr te aconsejo que borres esas reseñas que no dejan que tu fic suba a lo grande muy pocos fics me han sorprendido como este y no quiero que te desanimes por personas como esas ese tipo de gente es la misma que piensa que por qué tú chica hable con otro hombre ya es engaño
man, I'm loving yo shi, I came back, and this time better and stronger to comment and read your book.
If people read past the cheating part, they will find an amazing story. So people grow up and just read
muy buena historia, me encanto, lo leí todo en un estado de frenesí lectoral..... buena historia, sigue así hermano, tu historia de demon slayer también esta entretenida. por cierto, léete el manga de komisan
one best story have i ever read I don't have words to describe it annnnnnnd WHERE ARE . YOU . ATHUER
4/2/4/3/5. Novel died and I'm quite happy it did. Let me explain; The start of the story begins with MC finding out hes in a ntr doujin, with his girlfriend being the star girl. Problem is that he has grown up with her, theyre not only childhood friends but legitimately love each other. What does the MC do? Does he instantly break up with her? No, he gets proof of the situation and finds out what kind of person she actually is. He busts into the hotel room and absolutely demolished the guy and broke up with her right there. Cool, nice, fantastic even. Bro proved to her and himself that she isnt worth it and leaves, only to turn around and walk her back home(disappointing but whatever.) Could have been handled better all around but obviously don't trust a hentai girl. Which she admits to him! Cool, glad we're on the same page. Now like others, I was disgusted but accepted it as character progression and moved on. Read quite happily till the furry girl was added in but continued on anyway till i hit whatever chapter is shown next to my review, 104? 5? whatever its irrelevant because at the time i got curious about something and decided to spoil myself with chapter titles. And then I checked the latest titles and thought 'no way this author is going to be so moronic as to bring back the thot, right?' Wrong.
I love it it’s hard to get me interested in anything but this I love it it’s so funny and great character
very good fanfiction, nothing's wrong with it and really fun to read the only downside that i see from the others is the ntr? from early chapters. but it's really not that heavy to read it but I think everyone just becomes a mindless reader when the ntr comes in 🤦🏻
Incredible, i didnt think there was a book that could mix genres such as slice of life, martial arts, harem, and so much more in this way, even more so in a fanfic, while the beginning may be extremely misleading, as long as you can understand that the characters aren't perfect, for this is not a wish fullfillment novel, and you read while comprehending, then you will love this book, straight up.
Perfect master piece 👌xdxdxdxxdxdxdxddxxdxdxdxxdxdxdxdxdxxxdxxdxxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxrxdxdxdxdxdxxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxxdxdxdxdxdxd
It seems that there is only one comment left to reach 4 stars... let me fix that. I hope this finally reaches its well-deserved 4 stars, although unfortunately it cannot reach 5 at least we can get 4.
Mano é raro encontrar boas histórias desse tipo você equilibrou perfeitamente romance ação e a conversa com autor sem dúvidas uma boa ideia seu livro é incrível espero que continue escrevendo não ligue para os comentários negativos só são pessoas com inveja 🤔🤔🤔👍😁😁😁😁👍👍👍👍
While not a 5 star is still very good. The stat was shakey with the “ntr” he just lost his girl she wasn’t taken he left her since she was a Thot, it also led to good character development from bother the mc and the chick. The worst part is the later chapters how something’s are listed as events instead of explained. I’m only commenting since I seen the author mock the ratings and after reading it these ratings aren’t fair at all
NO ES NTR. NO ES NTR.NO ES NTR. NO ES NTR.NO ES NTR. NO ES NTR.NO ES NTR. NO ES NTR.NO ES NTR. NO ES NTR.NO ES NTR. NO ES NTR.NO ES NTR. NO ES NTR.NO ES NTR. NO ES NTR.NO ES NTR. NO ES NTR.NO ES NTR. NO ES NTR.
Bro and sis, if you see this book, read it immediately, we guarantee that this is a MASTERPIECE BROOO, what's more, the author's delivery of the character development and also every emotional outpouring In every word so read and read this
The author respects you for this work of fanfiction, as for me it turned out to be a wonderful skating rink against the one against whoever understands will understand.
I take back my words, this is a masterpiece, author I love this work, keep it up, trust me everyone you will not regret reading this
You should definitely read this. Reading this was certainly the best decision I've made in recent times. The depth of the characters is captivating, and the author's genius in managing to convey the feelings that the MC is expressing in each sentence is surreal. Don't pay attention to these bots that talk about NTR; they certainly fell in chapter 8 and didn't follow the outcome of the story. Believe me, you can read without fear. ( I'm using a translator )
Good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good
ネタバレを明かす yeah i don't like how mc easily have mostly every things ( it's kinda boring you know ) but i like the how the character development and thank gods that author doesn't put tons of non sense anime waifu in mc's face
Review of the First 50 Chapters (that nobody asked for, but I'm going to write it anyway and will change if necessary) I liked it. I like the protagonist, I like the author mentioned in the fanfic, although sometimes he comes off a bit silly, but not annoyingly so. I like the system he has, the combination of animes/mangas/manhwas he used to create the world and their interactions. Now, the controversial part: yes, there is NTR. I'm not going to lie, did it serve for character development? I think so. The character he used was quite disposable, Tsukimi Chifuyu from Seiso Kanojo Ochiru. It's a doujin and I'm sure everyone recognizes it, you filthy degenerates, don't fool yourselves. At some point, I wondered why he didn't stop her from going with the blonde guy. I've read some fanfics where they save her, where they prevent her from going with the blonde guy, and with this story, I realized something: it wouldn't serve any purpose. He watches over her and prevents them from going further, but he doesn't stop her, because what's the point of being with someone with so little conviction that decides to cheat on you over a photo of a kiss? Sooner or later, she would have cheated on you because that's who she is, and it's not the protagonist's fault; he's a normal person dating a girl who seemed to have good feelings but turned out she didn't. I think all those one-star negative reviews that just say "NTR, NTR, NTR" really affect the fanfic. I had known about this fanfic for a while, but those comments put me off immediately and only now did I give it a chance. The chapters where he confronts her are quite loaded with tension and emotion. I think he did well, and I would recommend giving it a chance.
trash.trash.trash.trash.trash.trash.trash.trash.trash.trash.trash.trash.trash.trash.trash.trash
O autor disse que não considerava ntr porque não tinha beijo nem sexo mas a namorada do MC literalmente bateu duas punhetas pro delinquente loiro enquanto era apalpada o dia inteiro por ele então autor vou usar um chingamento padrão brasileiro.. vai tomar no c# seu fod#do arrombado do car#lho
Its a good story althought i stopped reading for a while because i love reading op mc's and love the story by the way, and idk why people are sick and just dropping your book when its good and just because there is an ntr in this book doesn't mean its bad, like people who read those ntr manga and when they read this book they have that strange feeling it feels like they are the ones who get ntr'd why you ask because they don't understand that you the author of this story made that part to make the mc grow.
Man I'm here at Chapter 282 feeling bad for everyone who dropped at like <20 chapters because some of the lightest NTR I've ever seen. Too bad they couldn't stomach character development and interpersonal issues getting worked out without throwing a fit. For everyone else I suggest you follow through with this work if you are a fan of meta-level writing, strong to stronger MCs, great waifus, a ton of smut, believable character interactions, and actual progress in a story (could be a bit better here though but I'm not one to complain). Also, as hard as it may be to believe the MC has a system that does not hand hold him, everything he gains is from sheer hard work.
Hola autor la verdad este fanfic es fantástico y ver qué tiene tan bajas reseñas me sorprendió a lo que revise y fue por lo del ntr te aconsejo que borres esas reseñas que no dejan que tu fic suba a lo grande muy pocos fics me han sorprendido como este y no quiero que te desanimes por personas como esas ese tipo de gente es la misma que piensa que por qué tú chica hable con otro hombre ya es engaño
man, I'm loving yo shi, I came back, and this time better and stronger to comment and read your book.